What did I just read…
I hate giving bad reviews on someone’s work but honestly this book was bad. Not only was it choppy and extremely lacking in depth but it did not have a flow or cohesiveness. The story went from slow to skipping through all the parts to being rushed to the finish. There was zero character development. They spent a mere minutes together technically all of which were awkward and very uncomfortable for the reader even. Then somehow they smash, she leaves, big scandal happens, he hates her. She loses everything. He blocks her. It’s so cringe how the writer laid it all out, and then the actual horrible thing never got resolved. The chick responsible never gets handled, the entire false info never corrected or attempted. In my mind as I read I saw so many possibilities of how they and of them could not only fix it but make sure justice was served and even revenge.
There was so many unanswered questions and open plot twist that were just abandoned. This book feels very much like a rushed bad job. I’m sorry to say. I have read over 450 books this year alone and this is never the type of review I leave but this book just …ugh. I like my smutty trashy reads that are mindless escapes but this was not good. Even the 1smut scene was lackluster and awkward AF. It was sketchy. And not even a mention of him “finishing” if not for that 1 very small rushed scene this would be a total closed door romance.
So pick a struggle bad plot, bad writing or bad smut, you can’t have all of them. Super disappointed that I wasted the hours on this read. And when we have 2 authors who worked on it…come on….really?
This could have been a great story. I can see the plot and so many twists and outcomes, but it was just not fished out unfortunately.