i know, i know this was published in like 2002, i'm not gonna point out everything that bothered me because product of its time and whatever but:
"you think old men--or men in their forties--don't look at pretty girls? even dad does, when he thinks nobody's noticing. age has nothing to do with it." like great way to act like it's no big deal for grown men to look at literal children (she's fourteen!!! christ!!!)
then crystal tells nikki about her father asking crystal out and how he wouldn't take no for an answer like it's just a joke like christ
also nikki said multiple times that crystal was young enough to be her father's daughter and it was like, she said crystal was fourteen years older than her, she was twenty-eight and i thought her dad was like forty-ish so yeah sure technically but fourteen years is a decent gap between her and crystal it's not like crystal was only twenty or something, she's an adult
and my biggest issue is i thought for most of the book there had to be some sort of supernatural explanation for everything, for crystal's behavior, for her disguising herself from people in town, for the fact that she and nikki's dad got married only eight months after his wife died???? i thought she had to be some sort of supernatural being and she was gonna reveal like a truly evil nature or whatever but then it was just like "oh she's a normal person with major trauma", which means the dad really is just an asshole who married someone less than a year after his wife of probably at least twenty years died like i can't imagine any kid could be okay with that and nikki's sister keeps telling her to relax about it like?? and instead of having his family pack up and go home he lives his children with his new wife that he and his children barely know??? this dude truly sucks.
anyway yeah it was a quick read and all but it was pretty disappointing imo, especially the ending being kinda abrupt