if this book would have been better written,i would have given it two stars, but i just can't.
this author based the story around rowan and alex's love instead of including love into the story. so really, there was no story.it was just all about their feelings.feelings should be burning on the backburner.it should be a part of story,not the center of a book.
im convinced that no1 is like this in real life-"u need a summer boy toy.sum1 to do-whoops!i mean sumthing to do to take ur mind off things." who is that boy crazy? &who has friends that are that,well, slutty, who just up&say things like that?
there's a million gramatical errors in here.like no commas where there should be.i honestly dont remember seeing a comma in here. words were broken into two words, when they should have been one word.idk how it got published like that.
i didnt like the main character right off.i don't wanna read about a character who cuts their wrists.
when i read the first diary entry in here,i thought a girl wrote it.&then when i found out a guy actually wrote it i was really shocked, because it sounded girly.obviously she cant write in a guys perspective.
the whole school thing in there was so stereotypical.popular kids just don't walk up to you and start talkin. if you've actually been to school,you'd know that.
&then the author didn't even say what classes rowan had or really described nething.it was like "im at school. and then, im at lunch.im not even sure why school was in here because the author didnt even write about it.i heard about her eating lunch and then a statement about math class and that was it.&then all of a sudden it was the last day of school.why didn't the author just have her go to her grandparents for the summer?
the language was a little outdated in here with the "take a picture,it'll last longer."
this book is VERY reminiscent of twilight.she moves to a new town, and receives an old car.
alex saying "it's a little late for that now" was very reminiscent of something edward said.
the clearing in the forest was like twilight and that alex had his shirt off.i was expecting to read something like "his skin sparkled."
alex quoting romeo&juliet was just like edward.
it's like the author said, ok i cant make it 2much like twilight,so ill have the girl read the guys emotions with her gift,except it didn't work because he'd usually have a mental block up.like i said, its all based on twilight, but there are subtle differences there.
rowan screaming from her nightmares is like bella.&rlly,how many ppl scream in their sleep?
rowan was clumsy too.
she always threw herself at the guy and he always pulled away.like bella&edward.
if i hear "irrevocably in love" one more time,im gunna scream.ive never even heard of the word b4 twilight &now every1 uses it.
rowan gets herself into a situation like bella does when a guy is about to attack her.&of course, the guy comes swooping in&saves her.
&then they almost kiss&he jumps across the room like edward did.
rowan says he didn't act like any teenage boy she knew,like "the way he talked" when he didn't talk different.he sounded like a teenage boy2 me.just because he has an accent, doesn't mean hes automatically from a different time period.ugh!
they even kissed on the porch here.reminiscent of twilight.
alex staying with her at night to help with her nightmares was like edward.
the whole "am i supposed to watch you wither &die" was like twilight.
and "id give up a thousand lifetimes for just a minute with you." thats an example that's kinda like twilight and other books.&its also an example of the flowery,corny speech in here.it would have been better if he had just sed "for just one lifetime with you." minute is a little stupid and unbelievable.
her grandma pushing her to get out and have a life was like bella's dad wanting her to hang out with friends.
her going shopping and then leaving to go sumwhere else was like bella.
the title is even like New Moon.
"Sometimes what we love isn't always the best thing for us" seemed right out of twilight.
does this sound familiar2 ne1?-im 18,but im acutally 300+years old.there again,she copies but she changes it a little.
"i think you might be a lil old for me in that case" is a weak imitation of other books that have the girl make jokes about his age.
rowan was like bella because she was constantly having accidents where she got hurt and then lied about like "i fell down the stairs."
her grandparents didnt even sound like grandparents.they sounded like young people.
i thought it was funny that she was supposed to be a normal girl and yet her name was rowan.&yet, the person who was born from a "magical" world in a time of witches is named alex.
her name-Rowan Melody Bliss-is almost sickening.
everything in this book was extremely rushed.her eyes connect with his and she throws out a comment like "that's when my world was changed forever." as soon as that happend the feelings started rushing in like a tidal wave.like they're second meeting,they go back to her house and are taking showers.
1minute she was standing in the waves,and after some vague description of a creature, she's under water.how did that happen? i think the thing ended up being the ghost of alex's mom.which popped up when they were kissing and about2 do it.yikes! who wants that.
another thing that was ridiculous was the fact that her grandparents never heard them in the house. like they came in the house&were talking and taking showers and no one even came up.
it was a little exhausting and stupid how everytime they were laying together or kissing, someone would come in the room.why would u want ur grandparents2 c that?
&NO parental figure worth his/her salt walks into a room where a guy is half dressed with the girl and is just okay with it and thinks its amusing.
rowan took everything in stride about alex and being a witch.it was so unrealistic.
it was WAY too soon for love in this book.ugh!
whats up with these characters who let people pick out their clothes &tell them what to wear.you'd think they were ten instead of 17.&they go to parties and drink when they dont want to.its like they dont have a mind. &where are the characters with morals?
this book was chuck full of sappy feelings and not much else.the flowery speech sickened me &it was almost too much to bear.i mean they barely knew each other and the L word was bein thrown around.
this book got pretty steamy at times,which was really surprising because its a teen book.
the cover,& the font she chose in the book makes it a little cheap and looks like its for kids.
the humor isnt spot on at all.its rlly weak.most of the time,you read things that are supposed to be funny,but it isnt at all.
rowan is a newly discovered witch with no experience and yet when her grandma is telling her to envision white lights and then tells her to let it go,she does it like she's had a lot of experience.its unrealistic.she talks about pushing the ball of light. like most ppl would be how the heck do i envision being enveloped by a ball of light &how the heck do i push something in my mind?! but rowan got it on the 1st try.UNREALISTIC.
everytime alex would stay gone,she's like i hadn't heard from him in three whole days.i didn't know if he was coming back.
alex was completely smothering.a lot of books are like that where the couple is constantly touching. like "i shivered.he noticed&was immediately by my side." i guess some girls like to be constantly coddled and taken care of.i personally find it annoying.
her grandma kept pushing her to go out and basically let her and alex do whatever and yet when she comes home saying she drank that night her grandma's like i didnt want you to do that.mixed messages there.
i dont even know why her grandparents were in here.her grandpa made a grand total of 2 appearances in the book.&her grandma was like The Worst Chaperone Ever.&then everyone was always just walking into the house and her grandparents were always sleeping or weren't there.&then they end up going away.&i was like seriously?! as if that really happens.
rowan wanted to protect and help alex so much that instead of staying home and learning protection spells or w/e,she goes out shopping.
she would say things like "i was so sick of teenage boys and their elevated testosterone levels' as if she didn't like seeing two boys kinda fight over her or be jealous of the other one.&i didnt realize her and tyler were friends.
alex and rowan almost do it every time they're together.one second you think they're gunna do it and the next she's falling asleep.who does that? each time they'd get further and further &i swore they were gunna do it.i really thought it the last time.&as always some crazy distraction would happen and stop them.those scenes were unnecesary anyway,but if you're not gunna complete it, then don't even put it in there.it was annoying and exhausting.
why did paige keep throwing things in tyler's face about alex and rowan? she's the one who gave rowan a lil speech about giving tyler a chance and not to hurt him because he "really likes you." and then she's over the hurting his feelings.
i didn't like how everyone knew about the grimoir,like paige and bevin.(btw stupid name!)
then she's like "so what if i was a witch.maybe i didn't need friends who were so short sighted" as if tyler knows ur a real witch or like ppl should just accept it.real life isnt like that.u stupid idiot.&then tyler is like ok cool,lets walk into a wiccan shop,because all people are that accepting.
"And alex was driving me crazy.¬ in that can't keep my hands off him way, which was usually the case." as if you mind it.you've never said you didn't like it.you encourage it and are the same way.you slut.shes pretty handsy herself.
this book is really repetitive,what with the constant touching.taking a shower.going to sleep.
how did rowan not realize he wasn't her age when she's known for quite a while that hes from the 1600s?! what an idiot.
they pray to the goddess and god for strength.i didn't know god was included in witchcraft.
some things like encantations,chants and spells were stupid.like see-me-not spell. how about an invisible spell?
alex's name was already in the salem witch trial book as witches who have hung and yet she checks to see if it magically disappeared.if it worked, he wouldn't have been in it in the 1st place. which, it ends up happening, so w/e.geez,messin with time is so hard to figure out!
what's up with these friends steering their friends wrong? bevin basically told her to do it with alex because he was "the one." no1 can tell you who "the one" is for you.&she certainly has no way of knowing that.
ok,so rowan tells bevin that alex is a witch and all that jazz and she's like "honey he was just trying to get in your pants." i didn't realize that was a pickup line.i almost died laughing. just because you've had experience with guys like that and you're slutty doesn't mean every1 else is. except,rowan kind of is, but w/e.
the way bevin went along with the witch thing was totally unreal.for some reasons, authors dont try and take the time to make characters truly believe something outrageous or show their true reactions2 things. everything is unbelievable.
"my cheeks were pale and flushed." how can they be both?
she had been doing magic for a lil while &when bev's like you're not a witch,rowan is like i think i might be.as if there was any doubt that she was.
of course,she trows tyler off on bevin.ugh! idk which i like worse,where the guy ends up hurt and with no1,or when the author just throws him with someone.i definitely didnt like bevin.
this story wasn't developed at all.the characters weren't developed.no one was likeable. it was a huge ripoff of twilight and other books.except just to make it different, she made it about witches. &changed some other stuff. she didnt even copy it in a good way.you dont want ppl making a million connections to other books.
&basically,no reaction for anything in here was realisitc.like when tyler looked at her wrists and was like you cant do that again,or w/e he said.it wasn't a normal reaction 4 sum1 to have at all. &then her dad comes in the end and that whole thing was patched up really quickly.like idk how long they were distant and she was angry at him and its all patched up in the span of like 2 minutes.
she's one of those authors who doesn't take the time to truly describe what a person looks like, so you never get a true idea of a persons features.what happened to the days when authors would go into great detail about a person?!
this was a short book but it took forever to read and it wasn't enjoyable.i wasnt happy to read it. the fact that it was centered around all these corny,sappy feelings and not much else prevented me from even giving it a chance.i wouldn't read it again.&there were hardly any good things about this book.i remember liking one thing about it but i cant remember wut it was now.something like his name being in the book or something like that that was kind of cool.