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Melody in Lingerie

3.07  ·  Rating details ·  402 ratings  ·  49 reviews
Melody loves lingerie

It's the one thing that makes the socially-awkward college girl feel sexy and special.

While out shopping to indulge her secret vice, she meets a charismatic older man who gradually and skilfully seduces her. 

During a steamy encounter in the store's changing room, he brings out her submissive side, and Melody learns to see herself through his
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Published December 14th 2011
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This short freebie was hard to rate. At times it was super hot. It's a sexy hot fantasy. But a few things were just a little dirtier than I can deal with.

Melody is a dowdy, bookworm college student who thinks she is too skinny (blah blah,) but her secret passion is lingerie. A sexy, older dominating man approaches her in a lingerie store under the guise of buying lingerie for his wife and needing help with her size. They th
Paul Simmons
Mar 31, 2012 rated it it was ok
This was a fairly mild fantasy of a shy, bookish young woman who secretly likes dressing up in sexy lingerie and naturally gets picked up in a lingerie store by an older, ultimately dominant man. A real guy would no doubt be vilified for attempting such a pick-up! But this is a fantasy, and determined to keep realism locked firmly away.

With the sex-at-first-sight plot, the heroine suddenly leaps from shy and virginal all the way to dominated slut in the blink of an eye, going on to be penetrate
Dec 27, 2012 rated it did not like it
Shelves: bad-erotica
id give this no stars if possible. this read more like a porno script than erotica. i can buy getting turned on modeling lingerie for someone. i find it more difficult to understand having sex with a total stranger who just happens to be a part of some weird sex ring. but getting turned on by being called a slut and whore...and calling ypurself that? come on like women dont have enough issues with men they dont need any more help treating us like crap thanks. the whole story left me feeling pret ...more
Melissa Wehunt
Jul 22, 2012 rated it really liked it
It's so funny how you can tell who reads erotica on a regular basis and who doesn't based on what they say in their review. It was a good short. Hot and to the point. I'd never read this author, so I'm glad for shorts like these so I know if I should spend money on future ebooks. And believe me,I've read a lot worse. It seems like Imogen can actually write, so that's a plus. Bdsm isn't really my thing, so I think I'll try one of the Carolyn ones...
May 04, 2012 rated it liked it
Quick and nasty. Just the way I like'em. Well, the nasty part. Not necessarily the quick part. If this teaser was meant to intrigue me about our intrepid young heroine then brava. It worked. ;)
Virginia Rand
Mar 13, 2016 rated it liked it
Pretty good for what it was but the random sexy rich guy is getting old.
Gareth Williams
Jun 08, 2018 rated it liked it
Well Written

This book was well written and a good read.
It makes you wonder where the author is going to take us next.
Look forward to the sequel
Jan 27, 2020 rated it it was amazing
Loved it!
Very, very hot!
Christie Claire
Aug 05, 2014 rated it it was amazing
From now on, if anyone asks you what they should read after Fifty Shades of Grey, your answer should be Imogen Linn's Melody series.

Fifty Shades was the merely the starter, Melody is your BDSM main course. I don't want to spend too long on Fifty Shades but it always struck me that the seduction wasn't really the right word for what happened. I know half a dozen straight guys who would have happily played with Grey’s Ben Wa balls knowing who he was. The Melody series is different. If you want se
Mar 10, 2013 rated it it was ok
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May 31, 2013 added it
Melody in Lingerie, book 1 of the Melody series by Imogen Linn gives us shy college student Melody who has a secret passion for sexy lingerie under her usually dowdy clothing. Her guilty pleasure is to go shopping for the lingerie where she meets a man shopping for his wife. She offers to show him what the lingerie looks like on her so he can compare it to what it will look like on his wife. It is only when she is in the dressing room that she realizes she is in for more than modeling.

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Kay Glass
Jun 25, 2012 rated it it was amazing
I am always on the lookout for a sexy new story to read. I love erotica, but find most of it to be overdone, poorly written, or just a string of pornographic words strung together in sentences. This was not this case.

This had a delightful story attached. The shy, bookish college girl with a poor self image may be overdone, but that's because this is common of that age group. The older gentleman who rescues the female is a common theme, but it's also a common fantasy- think a more sexy Pretty Wom
Sep 23, 2013 rated it did not like it
1.5* for the idea of modeling sexy lingerie for a handsome stranger. However, I didn't like this one... the way the man spoke - he sounded like a 70 yr.old English grandpa - not like a distinguished middle-aged businessman they kept saying he was! So the whole time I kept thinking of this old grandpa with a 19 year-old girl… Gross… Not to mention that the idea that the shop keeper kept pimping out her customers without their knowledge was disturbing… Especially since she locked the door and turn ...more
Steph Su
Apr 25, 2012 rated it did not like it
Shelves: e-book
Cliched main character with an undeveloped story premise. Why oh why, Melody, must you be the "shy and awkward" college student whose self-conscious of her "small hips and breasts" and feels like she's "too skinny"? As if we don't have enough of those characters in any kind of fiction already. To add insult to injury, the writing is completely riddled with "telling" statements, explaining Melody's thoughts with all the flair of a psychological report. I felt no fire from reading Melody's interac ...more
BK Blue
Dec 30, 2013 rated it did not like it
Shelves: lust, no-me-gusta

I see that a lot of my issues with this book have already been stated in other reviews. So I will just jump to it, then.

I didn't hate it, but I found it pretty forgetful and unrealistic. I thought maybe it was just me, since the whole "master/slave" relationship thing isn't really my style.

Well apparently "sir/slut" is not my style, either. I was pretty annoyed by it, actually.

And he is a stranger. I don't recall condoms being mentioned either (but maybe one was? I did say it was forgetful).

Oh Miss Melody, you are an exhibitionist and you found yourself a voyeurism. Those are some of my favorite combinations. We have a bit of this and that in the short story. There is exhibitionism, voyeurism, humiliation, D/s, some light bondage, then of course the sexual play (a few different styles).
Jul 14, 2015 rated it liked it
Shelves: amazon-done
I enjoyed this book but there were a couple of things I didn't like. That's just me. I am sure others will have no problems but i found some things just turned me off. The writing was good and definitely descriptive. I just didn't like how i felt after reading it. Not sure I will go on with the series.
Book Slut
Feb 28, 2012 rated it it was ok
Although this storyline is smokin' hot, there were many things that kept pulling me out of it, most of which could have been fixed by a good editor. Issues with typos and tenses and an ellipsis is ... not ..

Jul 08, 2012 rated it it was ok
i read the whole short story, but i liked it and didnt. she meets a guy in a lingerie store and has sex with him not even a hour after meeting him. she a virgin, but gives it up to someone she just met. i dont recommend this book.
Aug 31, 2012 rated it liked it
This book was great if you can get into the notion that she hooks up with a stranger in the dressing room of a lingerie store even knowing he's shopping for someone else. It was hot. I'll probably read it again, but it is what it is - not great literature.
Jan 16, 2013 rated it it was amazing
I was really intrigued at how Melody just felt really sexy due to showing off her body in the lingerie the man was picking out for his wife. But I found it amusing that it had been just a cover story just for him to give her the pleasure that she sought. I must finish out this Melody series.
David Richardson
Feb 20, 2013 rated it really liked it
A real short book that got my attention. Melody transforms into someone that she felt was inside her all along. Now that she has a taste for it, who knows what will happen? Watch out for the shy girls.
Kyra Dunst
Aug 21, 2013 rated it really liked it
Melody is a closet submissive. While shopping in a lingerie store, she is approached by a man who asks her to model some lingerie he wishes to purchase. When she agrees, she gets more than she bargained for.
Melody entered a dressing room to try on lingerie and Sir followed her into the room and took over in Melody in Lingerie. Melody followed all of Sir's directions and felt like a new person. After she felt good and had what she needed he left. This is one of my favorite BDSM short stories.
Shelli Black Rose
May 20, 2014 rated it liked it
Shelves: erotica
It was a very short book, and good for a quick read. I wish it were longer. Be warned, this is a teaser book for free, in the hopes that you'll buy the next story in the series. I won't be; just wasn't worth spending the money.
Jan 13, 2012 rated it it was amazing
Excellently written. Such a great author.
I was left wondering where the relationship would go. Love that kind of book!
Mar 10, 2012 rated it liked it
Wow, very direct and hot erotic book. Not good for beginners, nor for the shy and timid unless of course you have some very naughty fantasies.
Mar 11, 2012 rated it it was ok
Ridiculously sped up timeline counters the hot and sexy action. Fun read, but it goes from not simmering to thermonuclear in seconds.
May 07, 2012 rated it really liked it
Shelves: erotica, bdsm
WOW just WOW!! talk about fantasy!! lol something like that would not happen to the normal person on any given day.. hahaha but I enjoyed the story VERY much!!!
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I write erotica, often with a BDSM kink.
I was born in Chicago in the 80s (no, I'm not telling you what year - a girl has to have some secrets).
I was always a bit of a wild child. My stories are mostly about good girls who end up submitting to dominant, older men. (Autobiographical? Who, me?)
I try to write my sex raunchy, and make the situations and characters believable. For me, if there's no bui

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