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In the Service of the King

(Vampire Warrior Kings #1)

3.56  ·  Rating details ·  1,998 ratings  ·  246 reviews
Seven ancient Vampires Kings.
One fight to save humanity…

Kael McQuillan, Warrior King of the Vampires, loathes the Night of the Proffering. He needs the blood of either his mate or a human virgin to maintain his strength, but hasn't enjoyed the ritual since he lost his wife centuries ago. Kael doesn't want a new companion, yet his resolve is tested when he meets his newest
Kindle Edition, 2nd Edition, 130 pages
Published March 3rd 2020 by Laura Kaye (first published February 1st 2012)
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Lana Reads
One can really see it was a very early work by the author (new edition of a 2012 series).

A fetishised vampire story with a severe case of insta-lust, -love and -marriage, but I still kinda liked it. Because this author makes even erotica romantic.

If you let go of any expectations (it's really just erotica after all), you are in for a kinky little treat.
Aug 07, 2020 rated it liked it  ·  review of another edition
3 stars

quick read. it's Vampire themed but not that interesting to keep me engaged. 3 stars.

P.S: Lana , i totally agree with this being a fetishised vampire story 😆
Jun 21, 2016 rated it it was ok
Shelves: 2016-reads, 2-stars
1.5 Stars

I felt as if this book was too rushed, hence why I rated the book only 1.5 stars. I mean, in some ways, this book is pretty good considering the vampires are completely different than the vamps that I usually read and that was pretty much everything I liked about this book. Actually, that was the only aspect of this book that I enjoyed. Everything else I just found stupid. Shayla and Kael's story didn't even feel real in any way. They literally just met and BOOM! They fall in love! Like
well it was REALLY short im on the fence, as well it was really short and just kinda went bam! we are in love now, and your mine.

ok let me explain I have read both these books in the space of about 4 hours reading time, being interrupted and what not yes I actually have a life.....sometimes.
in both these books it goes......

boy meets girl.....
boy mistreats girl....
boy remorseful.....
girl confused...
girl accepts...
they fuck...
they drink blood...
now they are mated

Pam Nelson
3 In the Service of the King Stars

I like books like this where the vampires find their mates, but I guess I was hoping for more of King Kael’s backstory.
We do find out a little later that he has a previous mate. But I don’t know it kind of fell flat for me.

Shayla’s story too we don’t get enough of her, we only know a very small amount and it only leaves you wanting more.

I liked the narration actually the accents were really well done.

*You don't have to like my review but its 100% my opinion,
2.5 Stars
Too rushed and boring.
Dark Faerie Tales
Apr 07, 2012 rated it really liked it
Shelves: reviewed-by-kiwi
Review Courtesy of Dark Faerie Tales

Quick & Dirty: An enjoyable read on a sunny afternoon.

Opening Sentence: Kael paced the length of his private sleeping chamber, avoiding the plush emerald carpet and keeping to the uncovered stone floor at the edge of the room.

The Review:

In a world where vampires are known to some humans and almost worshipped by them even, live the seven vampire kings, each holding rule over their portion of the Earth. Surrounding each is a group of humans known as the Electora
Can’t say I loved this story. Even though I normally really like this author. It was a bit different. But formulaic. I do not love the back story at all. Hate dead mates/spouses. Also don’t love the virgin sacrifice theme.
AG Reads
Dec 05, 2018 rated it it was amazing
Shelves: pnr
5 stars, bearing in mind this a short novella. I make some allowances in rating short reads that I don't for novels.

Laura Kaye is one of an extremely short list of authors that can write novellas I love. This one is tightly focused on the mating of the warrior vampire king H and human h. It does a good job of world building and setting up the main characters' backstories, without much story outside of the relationship. It is intended to be an erotic story of a mating, and that is exactly what it
Shera (Book Whispers)
Shit. This book here is why I quit reading erotica. (Which sucks as I was counting on it after reading Kaye’s Hearts in Darkness!) Romance in general is a genre that can get very repetitive and tiring. It was something I knew exploring the genre, and then something I grew tired of. Especially the past few years. AND especially after reading some authors who actually think outside the box. For some reason paranormal romance suffers from that repetitiveness and can be unimaginative. Same with erot ...more
Kathie (katmom)
Jul 05, 2012 rated it really liked it
THEN: Just bought it...taking it on vacation!

NOW: This was a wonderful vacation read...or maybe those few free hours when you want to get away from it all, and get TO IT.

Once again Laura Kay has taken the well-used theme of vampires and given it her own twist. Kael is HOT and Shayla is a good match for him.

The only "con" here is that it wasn't pages and pages LONGER.

I did read it on vacation and immediately was grateful that my hotel had wi-fi so that I could get book two...!

I hope she has an en
Lynsey A
Decent enough read but not a great deal to keep me interested. I mainly downloaded this to have something to read while on the elliptical at the gym. It helped pass the time but I wasn't all eager to finish it right away once my time ran out on the machine. I really only finished it because my loan was about to expire.

I have the second one in this Nocturne Cravings series but it too is set to expire soon but I'm not too sure if I will download it any time soon.
Lyndi W.
Feb 21, 2015 rated it liked it
Shelves: 3-star
I was waiting and waiting for an attack by the Soul Eaters, but no... this focuses entirely on the romance, even though the Soul Eaters are mentioned repeatedly as if leading up to an attack. It should have happened. So if you go into this expecting the Warrior King of Vampires to actually be a warrior, you are in for a disappointment. It's 100% romance/sex.

So for what it is, it was good. But some sort of danger or actual bad guys? That would have bumped up the rating for sure.
Jul 05, 2015 rated it it was ok
This ended in a weird place and as much as I love LK, this was the best I could do on rating.
Angela Charles
I have looked at the reviews and the ratings for the story and I don't understand why it is rated so low. I personally enjoyed this quick story. I love anything paranormal and I love vampires. This falls right in my wheelhouse.

Kael rules a section of the world and he has decided that he no longer wants to have a mate because of what happened to his previous mate. Shayla has been one of many virgins that have been groomed in order to feed the Vampire King. When they are first introduced Kael is
Kinky Vanilla
Oct 21, 2019 rated it it was amazing
I enjoyed this book . I started it twice, i got distracted by another book so I finally finished it today and started book 2.
The writing is good
Laurynne Gouws
Oct 06, 2013 rated it it was amazing
Sexy. Gripping. Magical. Perfection! It's what I've come to expect from the amazing Laura Kaye! Respect.

The buzz radiating off me right now is so hard to explain. I can't stop smiling. I was on a hunt for a really good paranormal. It took a few tries to find something that would grab me and hold me glued - and hallelujah, I've finally found it. And you wont believe how excited I am that there are two more books in the Vampire Warrior Kings series for me to devour. Laura Kaye is a beautiful perso
Megan Riverina Romantics
Rating: 3.5/5
Heat Rating: 3/5
Narrator Performance: 4.5/5

Short and sexy, this is the first of Laura Kaye's work that I've read. The story was enjoyable but I didn't find it to be too special. Shayla bugged me a bit. Her adoration of Kael was a tad on the excessive side. I reminded me of a groupie like crush where the girl would do anything for the rock star that they "loved". Other than that I liked the story.

I really dug the narrator. His pace was a bit slow though and I needed to turn up the s
Heather Book Savvy Babe
In The Service of the King, Laura Kaye creates an intriguing new vampire subculture set in modern times. Kael is a King of Vampires, and as such he has responsibilities to his subjects. Part of the responsibilities he bears is to be strong, which means he has to drink the blood of an innocent woman, or his mate. Since he does not have a mate, he must drink from a volunteer, the Proffered. Kael has always seen the Proffering as a responsibility to bear, until Shayla. Shayla is different, she make ...more
Feb 23, 2012 rated it really liked it
(review first posted at Book Lovers Inc)

There’s a question that oft asked about fictional tales. The plot or the characters: what’s more important, and which did you enjoy more? Well, in the case of this particular story, I’d say the attraction (that existed between the two lead characters) was the top element.

Such a cop-out answer, I know. ^_^ It’s neither plot nor character. But the attraction was the star of the show, almost like a character itself. With the relatively short length of this ta
 Crystal ➳ Reading Between the Wines Book Club
Kael despises feeding from innocent human virgins though they offer themselves willingly and are trained for the practice, his other only alternative though is to feed from a mate which he lost long ago. Since then he has questioned his ability to protect those he loves and is terrified of history repeating itself if he was to find a mate again. But to keep him and his warriors strong, he follows tradition and forces himself through the ritual every three months.
Shayla has prepared her whole li
Audrie Cruz-Sealey
Sep 21, 2012 rated it really liked it

I love your books! I just wish they were looooonnnnnngggger :)

I feel so teased, LoL!

For example in this book,

Kael is a Vampire King that must feed on the blood of a virgin or his mate in order to stay strong (also his subjects won't feed unless he does). So even though he hates taking part in this ritual, he does so because of his position. Kael has been hurt...his mate died 300 years ago in child birth and he has no desire to replace her. She went into early labor because she was stress
I won a copy of this book from the blog The Qwillery.

I enjoyed this book, especially the historic setting (which you can see on the lovely cover). However, I kept waiting for something to HAPPEN, and, other than the virgin heroine mating with the vampire king, not all that much happened. I kept thinking, "where's the conflict?" because there really wasn't much of a conflict to be honest. The vamp king was at first resistent to taking a mate, because he lost a mate over 300 years ago and it was a
Kelly at
Feb 05, 2012 rated it really liked it
Shayla has been working hard to find a way to avenge her sister’s murder. Finally finds that way, in the King of Vampires. She just never imagined how much it would change her life.

Kael is just doing what he has to do to survive and have his people survive. But the last thing he wants to do is feed. But one look into Shayla’s mismatched eyes everything changes.

I liked this story, but didn’t love it. I was hoping for a little more action. Maybe a rescue scene or two, but at last it was not to ha
Sep 04, 2014 rated it liked it

Kael is one of a number of vampire kings who rule different areas of the world. Three hundred years ago his mate and queen was killed by the enemy the soul eaters. Since that time he has vowed never to be mated again. But he needs blood to survive, and this is provided by the "proffered" human women who are virgins, but Kael refuses to drink directly from them instead he hypnotises them and drains their blood into a goblet with a blade. He never hurts them, that is u
Dec 06, 2011 rated it it was amazing
If you like tortured vampires, then you must meet Kael the Fair! Having lost his mate, Kael dreads the Proferring ritual that occurs every 3 months when he has to drink the blood of a human female virgin, that is until Shayla comes along. In Laura Kaye's latest novella, she lays out a fascinating vampire world for her new Vampire Warrior Kings series. I don't want to give away too much detail, since this is a short story, but I will tell you that the attention to detail is just amazing! From the ...more
Christi Barth
Jan 23, 2012 rated it it was amazing
The emotional depth of this book took my knees out from under me. I love that in today's world, the heroine is a virgin, saving herself for the vampire king - and it is BELIEVABLE! The king is tortured and living only a shadow of his life without his mate. The twists and heart-wrenching turns these to go through will keep you up reading all night. And did I mention the hot-as-it-gets sex? Royalty, eons of sacrifice, jewels, blood, burn up the sheets sensuality and vampires - this book is everyth ...more
Jun 10, 2012 rated it liked it
Shelves: vampires, romance
This shorter story by Kaye didn't quite live up to the perfection that is Hearts in Darkness, but it is a very good story that sets up what could potentially be a great contemporary vampire series. Kaye writes good emotional angst and steamy sex scenes, and she apparently has a thing with tattoed guys, because Kael is covered in them, as was our earlier hero Caden from the elevator. Not that I'm complaining. ...more
Nov 16, 2013 rated it liked it
"3 Stars!

Steamy little read!!! Would have been better had it been a full novel! Great world would have loved the author to continue to build on it!

“I am on my knees before you because we will always be equals, partners in all things. I hold your hand in mine, because we will always be together. I look into your eyes to see into the real you, and let you see into the real me. I pledge to take care of you, protect you, and cherish you for all time.”
― Laura Kaye, In the Service of the King
Susan (susayq ~)
4.5 stars! And that's only because I wanted more!!! When an author can make me connect with the story and characters in a novella, I know I've found an author that I want to read everything they've written. So, now I'm on a hunt for everything by Laura Kaye :)

This was hot and steamy and I loved the small hint of playfulness we saw in Kael that was hidden among his strong warrior being.
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Laura Kaye is the New York Times and USA Today Bestselling author of contemporary and erotic romance and romantic suspense, including the Hard Ink, Raven Riders, Blasphemy, Heroes, and Hearts of the Anemoi series. Laura's hot, heartfelt stories are all about the universal desire for a place to belong. Laura grew up amidst family lore involving angels, ghosts, and evil-eye curses, cementing her lif ...more

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