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In Too Deep (Hidden Cove Firefighters Included in #4)

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IN TOO DEEP is the first novella in Shay’s powerful, new anthology, AMERICA’S BRAVEST. (All six novellas are available in a boxed set.)For months, Captain Gabe Malvaso and Firefighter Rachel Wellington have kept their knife-sharp attraction to themselves and out of their firehouse. But when a building explodes around them and they’re trapped in the basement, will they stil ...more
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Mar 16, 2012 rated it liked it
I have a love hate relationship with this freebie. On one hand, I really appreciate the depiction of firefighting as an occupation. Shay covered a fire, a flood, a car accident and a medical emergency but she didn't forget that these men and women, much like those is in the military, spend a lot of waiting around for something to happen. Obviously, the author did her homework.

On the other hand, I don't buy two firefighters going at it while trapped in the basement of burned out warehouse. I get
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kobo free + short +ok
Feb 03, 2013 rated it it was ok
As a reader: While I'm aware that this is a short story the ending was too abrupt for me. There were too many characters and you don't get to know them at all. The villain in the story gets very little background, why did she start this smear campaign against the FD?

As a firefighter: I appreciate the showcasing of strong female firefighters. She did a great job in capturing the camaraderie between a firehouse family. The sex scene made me laugh out loud. As someone who's had to deal with smoke
I like Kathryn Shay and loved her Firefighter trilogy (starts with After the Fire), but In Too Deep just isn't long enough to build the characters or the tension needed to pull off an emotional "forbidden love" story. The series is linked to the previous trilogy, and while you don't have to know those stories to enjoy this one, it's nice to have the background information. there is nothing glaringly wrong with this short story (although having sex in an improbably place didn't earn the author po ...more
Lots of potential and not bad but it was too short. I realize this is a short novella but with so many characters and so much going on, there wasn't enough to develop the story to my liking. But it was still a decent read. Captain Gabe Malvaso has been attracted to Rachel Wellington for some time, but being firefighters working at the same station makes it impossible to explore. Then while stuck in a basement together and not knowing if they will get out, they both confess their attraction and t ...more
Apr 25, 2014 rated it really liked it
This is a novella "prequel" to the America's Bravest series. It was nice to see where Gabe and Rachel got their start and how the Fire Belles blog got it's beginnings. I am kind of reading this series out of order; but, it's hasn't changed how rich the story is in showing how a firefighter lives day-in and day-out. The emotional highs and lows of the job as well as the physical stamina required. I liked the "back-story" and a little more insight into some of the main characters lives.
Amy Denim
Firefighters Gabe Malvaso and Rachel 'Princess' Wellington are trapped in the basement of a burning building when more than sparks ignite between them.
(Wow, I should write cover blurbs)

I love, love, love that this book (the first in a series) features women firefighters. Yay, girl power! There should be more books out there, like Kathryn Shay's, that feature strong, sensible (yet sensitive) heroines like Rachel. Be gone simpering virgins! Now is the era of the true heroine!
(I love exclamation ma
:)was a nice reading... but was so short and the end was so abrupt.
I think the author could developed a little more these final scenes.
we readers get the final but this is our assumption, not written!

the main characters are credible, and the day by day of a firehouse so too, revealing a good sensation of friendship and respect of their work as firefighters and how can they management the feelings that start growing.

Gabe and Rachel have to put on hold their feelings until a major one appear, that
Adele Symonds
Oct 13, 2012 rated it really liked it
This was a really good novella. All the firefighters characters were true to life in work and recreation situations. The rescues were depicted extremely well and the forbidden love plot was excellent, the sub-plot of the blogger who was denegrading them was something a little different which added extra meat to the story. I will definitely be reading more by this author.
My only complaint was that it ended too soon, I wanted to read more about about Gabe and Rachel.
I give this book a very good 4.
Sep 16, 2013 rated it liked it
A bit too short to completely hit the mark and have the lead characters really take a bigger dimension than just ink and paper characters. Their whole story and events seemed quite cold to me and did not succeed in making me feel emotionally attached to them.
The prep work regarding the other characters also contributed to limit the time spent on the leads and was not sufficient either to really hook me and make me feel that I absolutely need to read the other stories.
Jan 21, 2013 rated it it was ok
Shelves: 2013
I thought the beginning dragged on a little bit with the description of each character. Though, it became interesting to read about the daily life of a firefighter's job, their love life, family, and personal time outside of work. I enjoyed reading more about the firefighter lifestyle than the romance aspect of the story.
Judy Karsh
I did read this all the way through and the premise was very good, but I just could not get into the story. I found it hard to believe some of the things that happened, especially two firefighers who removed their gear to have sex in a burning building...and that they got it all back on before their rescuers made it through the wall. This book moved along too fast for all that happened and I lost interest around 75%, there were several glaring spelling and grammar mistakes that could have been a ...more
May 11, 2017 rated it really liked it
Well written and quite enjoyable.
Mandi Morgan
Feb 06, 2017 rated it really liked it
A novella. Really hooked me. Hated how it ended wanted to see more of what happened. Guess I'll keep reading the series.
Jan 01, 2017 rated it it was amazing
I loved this book! I have a thing for firefighter books so when I saw this I'm like yeah! really good but short.
Karen Loomis
Nov 23, 2017 rated it it was amazing
Enjoyable story involving the Secret Service and the President and his family. Well-written that keeps you guessing until the end. Will be looking up the rest of the series!
Jun 08, 2017 rated it liked it
Was good to have on my phone to pass the time while waiting for appointments. That's why it was a slow read.
Amanda Vermaak
Sep 12, 2017 rated it it was amazing  ·  review of another edition
From South Africa

What a wonderful story. Compassionate and heartfelt. I have so much respect for firefighters and servicemen and women. I salute you
Sati Marie Frost
Gabe is a fire captain, and Rachel is one of the five firefighters working under him. Although they've been attracted to each other for a long time, they obviously can't act on it while they work together, particularly not when he's her commanding officer. But when they find themselves trapped in a basement with the exit blocked and their air supply slowly running out, they turn to each other for support, and instead are overcome by passion.

I really liked this story! I'm not generally a fan of t
Aug 07, 2012 rated it it was ok  ·  review of another edition
This short story is in the same setting as After the Fire which I read and the rest of the trilogy, which I didn't. This helped establish the background and setting which are usually abbreviated in short stories. The main characters in this story weren't introduced in that first book, though they may be in the later books of the trilogy.

For the most part this story was much the same as what I said for the other one with regard to writing and style and such. Unfortunately, Gabe was rather annoyin
Jul 25, 2014 rated it liked it
In Too Deep by Kathryn Shay

This was a freebie I got a long time ago and I admit,I got it because there was a fireman on the front of it. I'm a sucker for a fireman romance. This story was about a male and a female firefighter and all the elements that there are regarding these heroes becoming more than coworkers. Theses two characters were called into a fire where the stairs collapsed with them on the stairs, plummeting them to the basement. They spent several hours down there in harrowing circu
Jul 25, 2014 rated it liked it
Hidden Cove Fire Captain Gabe Malvaso is popular firefighter known for being fair to the people under his command. But he does avoid one member of his crew, Firefighter Rachel Wellington. He's attracted to her but knows he has to keep their relationship professional. But when out on a call, he and Rachel become trapped in the basement of a burning building. Thinking they'll never be rescued, they confess their feelings.

I read the first three books in the Hidden Cove series several years ago and
Great book

Liked the interaction between firefighters and police force as they work through problems and working toward a coomon goal of setting up a camp for kids of fallen firemen andolice and forming and falling in love
Jan 27, 2013 rated it did not like it
Nope sorry, I'm DNF this one all over the place because it's just so boring and stupid. I can't be bothered to read on and it's just so far fetched as well I think. I mean who in there right mind is going to have sex in a basement amongst dirt and debris while running out of oxygen? Like hello that wouldn't happen and the guy is a trained firefighter. Oh and yeah after the sex scene it's like freedom they leave the building. I haven't read any further so I don't know if they get themselves trapp ...more
Nov 11, 2012 rated it liked it
It was too short for my liking, but then again it was a short story...I only realized it after the fact. tsk-tsk...

Anyway, I really thought it was interesting how in the face of danger and in the mist of their supposed impending doom Gabe Malvaso and Rachel Wellington unravel into each other at the seems. They tell each other all of their internal battles in the past and once nothing is left to tell, "enjoy each other". The genuine description of how they just savor that moment is hot! Stress re
Jul 01, 2015 rated it it was ok
I have to admit I picked this book due to the firefighter on front. As a volunteer firefighter I enjoy reading stories involving people that get paid to do what I have grown to love. With that being said, all the friendly relationships seemed to hit their mark but the sex scene was a joke. Who would even think about anything intimate while stuck in a building with limited air? That just seems crazy to me! Also, there is not enough about the characters. Why is that woman against the department? W ...more
Dec 14, 2016 rated it it was amazing
I received this book free from Amazon and I am voluntarily writing a review. I love Kathryn Shay's books and this is no exception. Racheal is a female firefighter in Hidden Cove fire department and she has had a crush for the last 18 months on her Captain Gabe. No fraternization between officers and crew those are the rules. While called out to an empty fire engulfed building Racheal and Gabe are trapped in the basement and no one knows they are there. They are sure they are going to die and off ...more
Garth Mailman
Apr 23, 2014 rated it liked it
By Kathryn Shay

In Too Deep is an extremely popular book title. The Romance Genre is a major employer of hunky models though most wear far fewer clothes. No word on whether this one actually fights fires or just lights them.

A pair of fire-fighters trapped in an enclosed space and running out of oxygen do the deed. He’s her captain. After all that hot action the rest of the novella is about what happens after their rescue.

A very different type of fire story from Larry Brown’s On Fire and not jus
Mar 15, 2015 rated it it was amazing
Shelves: 2015-goal
'In Too Deep' is a great novella with a story that has a huge impact. The storyline is great. Full of truth about how the everyday life of a firefighter is full of risk and criticism. I couldn't put it down. Gabe and Rachel's story was intense. This is the first book I've read in this series, but it definitely won't be the last. I look forward to reading more stories of the great characters and the brave and heroic men and women surrounding this series. A great add to your tbr list.
I really liked Kathryn Shay's After The Fall, so I grabbed this when Smashwords offered it free. In the author's note at the front of the book, she comments that it is one of her best books, so I really looked forward to readfing it. Well, I was very disappointed in it; not sure exactly why, but there was something lacking. Thankfully, it was free and only a shorter novella that I finished in about 2 days.
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