Unbreak My Heart by Melissa C. Walker

Feb 12, 2012 Ari rated it really liked it

Shelves: ya-contemporary, 2012, emotional

There is something awful about feeling guilty.. It eats you from the inside, it kills the joy, it leaves you empty, it sucks the life out of you. The thing is, it doesn't matter if you've made a big mistake or a small one, because your conscience will act like a magnifying glass making your memories haunt you day and night.

"My mind is not a very forgiving place."

Also, being young is difficult; it's hard to know what's right or wrong, and it's even harder to manage to walk that thin line betw ...more

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Apr 02, 2012 Cara rated it really liked it

Shelves: e-book, siblings, to-review, realistic-fiction, 2013

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Mar 29, 2012 Jasprit rated it liked it · review of another edition

Shelves: out-2012, read-in-2013, kindle

Unbreak My Heart is a poignant read about heartache, testing where friends loyalties lie and trying to leave all the hurt behind and about making a fresh start.

After the great fall out with her best friend Amanda just before school broke out for summer, Clem just wants to get away from it all, she’s become the school pariah, her best friend doesn’t want to know her anymore, so being stuck on a boat with her family for the next three months doesn’t sound like a bad idea at all. But eventually tha Unbreak My Heart is a poignant read about heartache, testing where friends loyalties lie and trying to leave all the hurt behind and about making a fresh start.

After the great fall out with her best friend Amanda just before school broke out for summer, Clem just wants to get away from it all, she’s become the school pariah, her best friend doesn’t want to know her anymore, so being stuck on a boat with her family for the next three months doesn’t sound like a bad idea at all. But eventually that becomes too much after a while too, being cooped up with her jumbled up thoughts all the time, having no communication with the outside world and having her family watching her constantly. And it’s so difficult moving on without knowing if her friendship with Amanda has totally gone. Can they ever go back to what it was? But then Clem meets James, whose taking the same roundabout trip on his boat with his dad, after a few chance meet ups they start spending more time together and Clem realises she likes his out take on life, it’s as though nothing can ever break him, she decides this is what she wants too, to be strong and real, but has she got the right amount of strength to do so?

After reading the blurb to Unbreak my Heart I didn’t really know whether I would like Clem, she lost her friendship of years with Amanda over a guy, a guy who was her best friend’s boyfriend. But the flashbacks gave a great insight into what really happened, and I don’t condone everything that Clem did, but most of all didn’t do, but I think Amanda was a bit rash in her decision, I wanted to shout at least listen to the poor girl before ditching her.

The Lull in pacing in the present tense did make me more eager to get more of the back story in the alternative flashbacks. I think I actually enjoyed reading the back story, watching the friendship blossom between Amanda and Clem, the introduction of Ethan and how he slowly came in between two best friends more than the present story.

James was a refreshing change that Clem needed in her life, he got Clem the real Clem straight away. He could tell something was bothering her and making her sad, but he didn’t push her about it, but was there whenever she was ready to discuss it. He was also always bouncy and full of life and encouraged Clem to make the most of her life too. Even though Clem wasn’t looking forward to this trip with her family it ended up being one of the best summers for her.

I normally don’t mind books that are left with open endings, but I felt with Unbreak my Heart I needed to know how things would end, after Clem’s constant over thinking and worrying I thought it would have been good to know these answers. But overall I still did enjoy reading Unbreak My Heart, I liked how being around James, helped Clem overcome the guilt and find the real Clem that she had lost all those months ago. ...more

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Jan 23, 2014 Paige Bookdragon rated it it was amazing · review of another edition

Shelves: young-adult, almost-a-fave, highschool, lurrrve, friendship, favorites, favorite-author, inspiring, mr-nice-guy, contemporary-romance

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It's been almost a year and Unbreak My Heart is still one of my favorite books. This is a story of a girl who wants forgiveness and acceptance and she's one of my favorite YA realistic characters.

I don't know how to do a review for this one without giving much spoiler but this book doesn't pull any punches. It's raw and emotional but it never went overboard.

I love this and I want you to swallow this book because I want to break your heart. ...more

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Jan 18, 2012 Charlotte rated it it was amazing

Shelves: young-adult, netgalley, arc, favorite-ya, february-2012, 2012-challenge, 2012-releases, may-2012-release, recommendations

This is a beautifully written journey of a young woman working through the weight of her choices.

I HIGHLY recommend this!

Update: It's been several months since I read this and I've struggled with writing this review all along. Why is it so hard to write a review for a book you love so much?

I don't think I will ever do this book justice, I loved it so much. I found it real and emotional and so much of what I want to explain to my teen daughter about friendships, loyalty, family, patience, first ...more

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Jun 18, 2012 Jessica *The Lovely Books* rated it really liked it

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Jan 18, 2012 Jen rated it really liked it

Shelves: arc-s, favorites, ya-contemporary-challenge-2012

Buoy, is this a good read and such a pretty cover. Definitely knot one you want to miss. (See what I did there? If naut, you will...)

Lifelong friendship, true love, the ultimate betrayal, and crushing heartbreak. "Unbreak My Heart" has it all, reminding us that while you may be able to choose your friends, you can't necessarily choose who you fall in love with or help who gets hurt in the process.

Sixteen year old Clementine, or Clem was supposed to have the best summer EVER with Amanda, her BF ...more

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Feb 20, 2012 Fred rated it really liked it

Recommends it for: Fans of Sarah Dessen, Sarah Ockler, Elizabeth Scott

We meet MC Clementine as her family - Clem, her teacher dad, her on-sabbatical lawyer mom, and her precocious 10 yo sister Olive - are embarking on "The Williams Family Summer of Boating," a three month sail trip from their suburban Chicago home base, all the way down the Mississipi river. Clem, however, is in no mood to enjoy the trip, her family, or anything else. There was this incident, you see, just two weeks earlier, that ended up breaking both her heart and her relationship with long term We meet MC Clementine as her family - Clem, her teacher dad, her on-sabbatical lawyer mom, and her precocious 10 yo sister Olive - are embarking on "The Williams Family Summer of Boating," a three month sail trip from their suburban Chicago home base, all the way down the Mississipi river. Clem, however, is in no mood to enjoy the trip, her family, or anything else. There was this incident, you see, just two weeks earlier, that ended up breaking both her heart and her relationship with long term bff Amanda. I don't want to say too much about what happened between Clementine, Amanda and Amanda's new boyfriend Ethan, since that story is told in chapters that alternate with the story of the summer trip, and part of the book's considerable emotional impact is the slow and rather painful unfolding of exactly what took place. Suffice it to say that as the trip begins Clementine is broken-hearted, ashamed and deeply hurt by the incident and the social opprobrium that followed.

Rivers flow slowly but powerfully, and their currents take some things away and bring other things together. Like James, the red-headed boy Clem meets at their first stop for provisions. James' unfailing good cheer at times threatens to irritate the moody Clem. Eventually, however, she can't help but succumb to his considerable charm as time wears on and their families continue to meet, since James and his father are making the same trip as the Williams. As Clem and James grow closer, she comes to realize that James is not without his own issues and concerns, and that perspective helps as she confronts the past and begins to heal.

This is a lovely, sweet, slow moving, thoughtful and often funny book. It's not really a romance, although there is some very sweet romance, it's more a growing up, family drama kind of story. One of the really wonderful things about this book is the portrayal of the relationship between Clementine and her family. Fully functioning families are kind of rare in YA-dom, but the author does a lovely job of creating one here. Clem's parents are appropriately clueless, crazy-making and intrusive, but also supportive sources of wisdom and unconditional love in the face of overwhelming adolescent angst. Little sister Olive is an especially charming character, funny and direct, saying what everyone else is thinking, but also full of bewildered tenderness for her wounded and sometimes hurtful sister. They, and James, are part of what helps Clementine achieve some perspective about herself, what she did, what is real and what is all in her head, and how she can start to heal and move on with her life.

This is a great read - the story is sweet, the prose is lyrical and evocative, creating a rich atmosphere of the river and its rhythms, and the sweet slow pace of a summer spent growing, healing and appreciating what is, what was lost, and what can be regained. It's also pretty doggone funny at times, I don't want to give the impression it's all unremittingly broody and moody. The characters and the banter among them are just too witty and fun to let that happen. Definitely a book to savor, and one that makes me anxious to read Melissa's other books!

I was kindly provided an advance copy of this by the publisher through NetGalley, in exchange for an honest review.

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Nov 30, 2011 Crystal rated it really liked it

Shelves: 2012

I think every teenage girl should read this book. I can remember being sixteen and thinking the world was going to end if a boy didn't like me or if my friends were mad at me when in reality things like that aren't as important as other things.
In this story Clem has to set sail with her family for three months. This means not having any contact with her friends via cell phone or computer. Normally this would be a huge inconvenience for Clem and she would have begged and pleaded with her parents ...more

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Mar 06, 2012 Tiff at Mostly YA Lit rated it it was amazing

Shelves: favorites

This is one of my favorite summer 2012 reads. It has heart, it has depth, it has lightness, and it has the sweetest romance ever. Walker has absolutely triumphed with this book. What really got me was how REAL everything seemed, especially the characters. Clementine, the protagonist, felt very much like me as a teenager. James, the love interest, was the perfect complement to her rawness - he was joyful and jovial, but in a way that felt both masculine and flawed. The secondary characters of her ...more

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Jan 05, 2012 Katy rated it it was ok

I thought this book was just okay. It was kind of dull, and Clementine was a little too depressing for my taste.

It was written in short scenes, so it really just brushed the surface, and I didn't have a chance to connect with the characters. As soon as I found myself beginning to like a character, the book moves right along and I lose that attachment I was beginning to grasp.

Like I said, Clem was a little bit too depressing for me. I understand she was heartbroken from losing her best friend and ...more

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Feb 22, 2021 Shen Mad rated it it was amazing

I love this book

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Jun 10, 2012 Amy rated it it was amazing

I did not want this book to end. Not at all. In fact, Melissa Walker, I am not amused by your antics. You ended this book just when I really REALLY wanted to know what happened next. That is dirty play on your part, and I am going to cross my arms and pout at you for a long, long time.

Or until you tell me what you think happened next, at which point I will forgive you, because I am nothing if not easy to woo.

You will like this book too. I promise.

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Apr 23, 2012 Christina (A Reader of Fictions) rated it liked it

Shelves: netgalley

Originally posted here.

When Unbreak My Heart first appeared on NetGalley, I actually didn't request it. I haven't read any of Walker's prior novels, I don't have much history reading contemporaries, and I have a very black and white view of cheating in relationships. All of that told me this might not be the book for me. I went back and requested it when I saw some very favorable reviews roll into the blogosphere.

As I started reading, I was initially regretful of that decision. The opening of th Originally posted here.

When Unbreak My Heart first appeared on NetGalley, I actually didn't request it. I haven't read any of Walker's prior novels, I don't have much history reading contemporaries, and I have a very black and white view of cheating in relationships. All of that told me this might not be the book for me. I went back and requested it when I saw some very favorable reviews roll into the blogosphere.

As I started reading, I was initially regretful of that decision. The opening of the book is so mopey and nothing really happens. All Clem thinks about is the horrible thing she's done, which slowly unfolds in front of the reader. Every other chapter goes into the past (at least until that's all explained). The others are about her summer, in which her family (mom, dad, little sister, and herself) sail down rivers on a boat. I really wondered how Walker was going to pull off a book where the characters are stuck on a boat.

Thankfully, the book picked up the more you learn about the past, and the better you get to know the other people taking this same boating trip. I know absolutely nothing about boating. Honestly, I had no clue people could take a sailing trip like this down rivers. Color me surprised. Early on, they meet four other people who are on the same timeline and route they are (an old couple, and a father and son).

The cheating aspect of the story, the frame of it, never really coalesced with me. It mostly made me angry in a way I was not expecting. Clem has become a social outcast because she fell for her best friend's boyfriend. That's bad, for sure. I mean, having those feelings and not confessing definitely violates the 'hos before bros' pact. What's incredibly NOT cool (slight spoiler) is that Clem didn't even initiate anything and yet she is the one who becomes a social pariah. Her best friend even takes the guy back. All we see of the friendship is them keeping secrets from one another. And, so far as I can glean, Amanda doesn't really even seem to like Ethan that much, so I have a lot of trouble figuring out why she would want him back, unless it's to prove something.

I think that my biggest issue was with Amanda's character. It might have helped to have better context for their friendship. We learn very little about Clemanda pre-Ethan. As it was, I never got a great sense of Amanda as a person. She seems to be a showoff. Clem definitely suffers from an inferiority complex, since Amanda is the kind of person everyone likes and can have any guy she likes. Amanda's also strange for not having been more afraid of Clem and Ethan happening, since they have this crazy obvious chemistry, and she even encourages them to go on a date. That's just weird.

What really worked in this novel were the character relationships. I loved how real Clem's family felt. The mother with her crazy cookbook, the dad with his hat, and, most especially, adorable annoyance Olive. It's so obvious how much Clem's family cares for her. They give her space for a while and they let her know that they're ready to listen when she can talk about it. They put up with a surprising number of tantrums with good grace. When she finally confesses what she's been so upset about, they are just so sweet and non-judgmental.

I also can't leave this review without talking about the adorableness of James. He may be one of the most genuinely sweet guys in YA literature. Girls, let me just say that you want a guy like this, not an Edward or a Jacob or a Noah. You want someone real who will never try to change you or tell you what to do. He has advice, sure, but he doesn't pressure you. Plus, he's a ginger. Oh, how I love redheads. He is cute, upbeat, and funny, and their chemistry is so moving.

Unbreak My Heart is well-written and touching, despite the slow start. There's a lot to be learned from Clem's story. I see more Melissa Walker in my reading future! ...more

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Jun 14, 2012 Emma rated it liked it

Clementine made a big mistake her sophomore year. It started with a series of little mistakes and foolish decisions but by the end Clemetine had broken one of the most important rules of friendship.

That was two weeks ago.

Now, heartbroken and friendless, Clementine is about to embark on a three month sailing trip with her parents and her little sister, Olive, on The Possibility. Last year the trip sounded like a horrible, faraway idea. Now that it's here, Clem is surprised to realize it might be ...more

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Jan 11, 2012 Rachael rated it really liked it

This summer was supposed to be the best summer of Clem’s life, but when she falls for her best friend’s boyfriend and said best friend refuses to speak to her, the summer is looking pretty gloomy. That’s why she doesn’t put up much of a fight when her parents get the bright idea to spend their entire summer on their sailboat. Maybe being surrounded by only her parents and her little sister Olive will be good for her, since they’re the only people who seem to still like her. Clem has resigned her This summer was supposed to be the best summer of Clem’s life, but when she falls for her best friend’s boyfriend and said best friend refuses to speak to her, the summer is looking pretty gloomy. That’s why she doesn’t put up much of a fight when her parents get the bright idea to spend their entire summer on their sailboat. Maybe being surrounded by only her parents and her little sister Olive will be good for her, since they’re the only people who seem to still like her. Clem has resigned herself to a summer of wallowing and self-punishment until she meets James at one of their first stops along the river. Like Clem’s family, James and his father are sailing the river for the summer, and something about James and his unwavering cheerfulness is getting to Clem, in the best way. Maybe, with James’s help, Clem might find the strength to forgive herself and heal her broken heart.

Unbreak My Heart is a sweet and touching summery read from a favorite author of mine. I loved the fun premise of Walker’s Violet on the Runway series as well as her more contemplative look at personal faith in Small Town Sinners, and I immensely enjoyed all of those books. Unbreak My Heart falls somewhere in the middle of those books as a thoughtful twist on a lighthearted summer story. By alternating the story between reflections on the school year where everything went wrong and the summer after, readers get a generous glimpse into a girl who’s struggling to be a good friend and still be true to herself. Walker has this girl’s voice perfectly through Clem’s character, and this really brings Clem, her memories, and her struggles to get past them to life. I love how Walker ends the story on an open yet hopeful note, though I wish there were more interaction between Clem, her best friend Amanda, and Amanda’s boyfriend Ethan after the whole debacle to clear up the drama. Despite this, Unbreak My Heart is still a wonderful love story, personal journey, and summer read.

Unbreak My Heart will be enjoyed by fans of The Unwritten Rule by Elizabeth Scott, Stay by Deb Caletti, Lock and Key by Sarah Dessen, and Sixteenth Summer by Michelle Dalton.

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Jan 24, 2012 Kay rated it it was amazing

Shelves: contemporary, fiction, ya-and-children, romance

Unbreak my Heart was so much more than I had expected! It was the perfect summer novel : short, cute, filled with feelings, a tad of romance and gorgeous days on the water, under the sun. I thought I was in for something simply light and heartwarming, but the book turned out to be a little more than that.

First I must say that I have very little compassion for liars and cheaters. Most of the time, cheaters are sitting in the "unlikable character" seat, written to be despised by the main character Unbreak my Heart was so much more than I had expected! It was the perfect summer novel : short, cute, filled with feelings, a tad of romance and gorgeous days on the water, under the sun. I thought I was in for something simply light and heartwarming, but the book turned out to be a little more than that.

First I must say that I have very little compassion for liars and cheaters. Most of the time, cheaters are sitting in the "unlikable character" seat, written to be despised by the main character; when they are the main characters, there are often a multitude of reasons generously provided to excuse the horrid cheating behavior (it was just one time - his girlfriend is a horrible human being - it was meant to be - etc). So I started Unbreak my Heart feeling pretty sure I wouldn't like Clementine much.

That didn't happen, at all. Clementine spends a huge chunk of her summer thinking back on what happened, and why. With her we revisit her sophomore year, how she met Ethan, what the two of them shared together. She explains exactly what happened, how she could have stopped it, how she even lied to herself. Like all teenagers, Clementine can be a tad dramatic, but I didn't feel her actions were a cheap ploy to create drama in the story. Instead, I felt it showed her inner turmoil really well (with the added bonus of reminding me my own embarrassing teenage years!) In the end though, Clementine didn't make excuses, and it was so refreshing. She lives with her guilt and her regrets, but through this summer, we really get to see her grow.

Another aspect I really enjoyed was how heartwarming and fun and realistic the relationships were : the ones with her family, with her best friend, with Ethan or with James, the new cute boy Clementine meets on her vacation. Sometimes they get along really well, sometimes they don't, but that's just life, and it was really well written.

I also felt the book was as much, if not more, about friendship, family and staying true to yourself than it was about romance - and I loved that. It made the characters and the story more realistic, easier to relate to.

So, I really liked this one. Short and sweet, it's a perfect summer read! ...more

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Mar 15, 2012 Rose rated it liked it

Shelves: young-adult, tbr-challenge, chick-lit, realistic-fiction, coming-of-age, contemporary, arc-or-galley, romance, chick-lit-challenge-2012, birth-month-challenge-june-2012

"Unbreak My Heart" tells a rather tough story from the get go, and one I think that provides a fair punch in the stomach when you think about what the protagonist is going through and the wake of events she left behind. Clem spends the summer on a boat trip with her family trying to cope with the aftermath of a tough school year. Her best friend Amanda shuns her, she's lost friends on Facebook, and she thinks of herself as a horrible person who can't find love again. Reason being? She fell in lo "Unbreak My Heart" tells a rather tough story from the get go, and one I think that provides a fair punch in the stomach when you think about what the protagonist is going through and the wake of events she left behind. Clem spends the summer on a boat trip with her family trying to cope with the aftermath of a tough school year. Her best friend Amanda shuns her, she's lost friends on Facebook, and she thinks of herself as a horrible person who can't find love again. Reason being? She fell in love with her best friend's boyfriend. While the interaction between Clem and Ethan isn't much given the circumstances, Clem isn't hurt by losing Ethan, she's hurt by losing her best friend and the memories they had together.

The narrative switches between memories of Clem and Amanda together leading up to the big falling out and the present, where she's shifting the balance of her emotions in the aftermath of what happened. While I had some issues with the switching back and forth, I appreciated the care that Walker took with the subject matter, not only showing moral lines crossed in the events that transpire, but also giving a great look in terms of how Clem finds a way to move forward. This is very much a summer coming of age story that I enjoyed, particularly in the interactions that Clem has with the firey-haired and sweet gent that is James. He's funny, lighthearted, and even while he's going through some tough situations himself, he provides a balance with Clem's character that's refreshing to read. I definitely felt the connection between them and enjoyed their interactions.

The only other thing that slightly bothered me were, in the discussion of music selections, playlists and such, I thought there were too many to keep track of. It somewhat weighted the narrative a little in places. Still, it didn't deter from me enjoying the novel for what it offered, and I would definitely recommend it for those who like YA teen reads with a chick-lit, coming of age, summer story leaning.

Overall score: 3/5

Note: I received this as an ARC from NetGalley, from the publisher Bloomsbury. ...more

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Sep 29, 2014 Donna {Book Passion For Life} rated it really liked it · review of another edition

Shelves: ya-contemporary-romance

After seeing so many mixed reviews about Unbreak My Heart, it was one of them books that I wanted to read but didn’t want it to disappoint. But in the end I finally decided to take a chance and, I’m so glad I did because it’s one I really enjoyed.

Unbreak My Heart is an emotional read about a young girl who struggles to deal with the aftermath after falling for her best friends boyfriend but, also tries to rediscover herself while on a secluded family vacation.

I really enjoyed this story. Honest After seeing so many mixed reviews about Unbreak My Heart, it was one of them books that I wanted to read but didn’t want it to disappoint. But in the end I finally decided to take a chance and, I’m so glad I did because it’s one I really enjoyed.

Unbreak My Heart is an emotional read about a young girl who struggles to deal with the aftermath after falling for her best friends boyfriend but, also tries to rediscover herself while on a secluded family vacation.

I really enjoyed this story. Honestly, there’s wasn’t much not to like. It’s a good YA contemporary story that has just the right amount of fluffiness, heartache and fun times. I felt the story is well written and it had a ton of great characters.

Clem – even though she’s quite depressed to start with – was a great character to get to know. She’s fun and full of life but when everything is revealed, she’s like a shell of herself. The whole relationship with her best friend’s boyfriend in my opinion was quiet complicated. I honestly couldn’t see why Ethan was Amanda except for the fact that Amanda is really pretty. I felt as though Ethan and Clem had an undeniable attraction to one another. It felt more real and as a reader you can really see the feeling that they had for one another. In my book, it wasn’t really cheating. Yes Ethan and Clem weren’t completely innocent but Ethan was always the one that instigated anything between them and then suddenly, all the blame is on Clem. I felt bad for her. She loses her best friend and friends all together and Ethan is walking around scot-free. I hated Ethan after that and Amanda too for treating Clem the way she did.

The other characters that stood out to me were of course, Clem’s family. What an amazing family. They supported Clem no matter her mood and always tried to include her in everything they did. And then of course we have James and his father. James was exactly the right person Clem needed. Someone who didn’t know but could get to know the real her – and James saw the real Clem for sure. I love their moments together.

In all, Unbreak My Heart is a good summer read and one I’m glad I took a chance on! ...more

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Dec 30, 2013 Alexandra Christo rated it really liked it · review of another edition

Shelves: romance-focused, so-damn-cute

This is one of those sugar-sweet stories that you snuggle in to and finish with a smile.

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Apr 04, 2013 Jen (Pop! Goes The Reader) rated it it was ok

Shelves: young-adult, contemporary, read-in-2013, romance, realistic-fiction

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“My mind is not a very forgiving place.”

Ostracized from her group of friends after making a series of ill-advised decisions involving her best friend Amanda’s boyfriend, Ethan, Clementine Williams is at rock bottom. Preparing to embark on a three-month long sailing trip with her family in order to get away from it all and clear her head, this will mark the first summer vacation she has not spent with her best f Did you find this review helpful? Find more of my reviews at Pop! Goes The Reader!

“My mind is not a very forgiving place.”

Ostracized from her group of friends after making a series of ill-advised decisions involving her best friend Amanda’s boyfriend, Ethan, Clementine Williams is at rock bottom. Preparing to embark on a three-month long sailing trip with her family in order to get away from it all and clear her head, this will mark the first summer vacation she has not spent with her best friend. Depressed and grief-stricken, both over the loss of her close friendship with Amanda as well as what she thought she had with Ethan, Clementine is a shell of her former self.

“I feel like a dull and worn-out version of myself, and for some reason I just can’t bridge the gap between who I used to be and the sad sack that’s sitting here now. I don’t know how to reach through it.”

There’s no worse feeling than being the odd man out. Whether it’s being picked last for dodgeball or being the only book reviewer to dislike a seemingly universally praised book, it’s never a nice feeling. Unfortunately, that was the situation I faced upon completion of Unbreak My Heart by Melissa Walker. It really pains me to have to write a negative review for a book I had such high expectations for. Bland, formulaic and superficial, Unbreak My Heart will undoubtedly go down as one of my biggest literary disappointments of 2013.

“And that was that. Amanda had noticed something wrong, and I had my warning – and I didn’t heed it. I had proof then that the weirdness wasn’t just in my head. I knew for sure that I needed to stop talking to Ethan so much.
But I didn’t. It was like I couldn’t help it.”

In addition to the scenes spent on the boat involving Clementine and her family, Unbreak My Heart is composed of a series of flashbacks as Clementine reflects on both her time with Amanda, reaching as far back as their first meeting, as well as her time spent with Ethan. While I understood that Walker wanted to firmly establish the importance of the relationship between Clementine and Amanda and outline precisely what had happened between Clementine and Ethan, the constant shift between the past and present perspective was jarring and disrupted the pace and flow of the story. I was more interested in Clementine’s sailing trip and less in the minutiae of her everyday life in the past yet it seemed as though I was bombarded with an endless series of flashbacks that involved little more than Amanda constantly accusing Clementine of impropriety.

Dear Amanda,
How can you just forget the entire history of our friendship? Doesn’t being best friends for over half our lives mean anything?

If anything, these flashbacks further hindered my enjoyment of the story, as they underlined what I had already identified as the most problematic aspect of the story – I was never convinced that the relationship between Clementine and Amanda was one that was worth saving. Even with the seemingly endless series of flashbacks meant to demonstrate the depth and importance of their relationship, the dynamic between Clementine and Amanda always seemed more competitive and antagonistic than friendly. Moreover, why would you want to rekindle a friendship with someone more likely to believe the word of their new boyfriend over that of their lifelong friend? One of my primary problems with Unbreak My Heart was that I was never convinced about the importance or severity of Clementine’s ‘loss’ and therefore could not understand the depth of her subsequent mourning.

“I wasn’t always such a downer. Up until, like, two weeks ago, I was Clementine Williams, happy and upbeat and kind of hilarious, if I do say so myself. But that was before everything exploded in my face.
Now I’m Clementine Williams, outcast. And that’s on a good day.”

Another problem I encountered involved our protagonist. Clementine Williams is a painfully unremarkable, ordinary sixteen-year-old girl. There was nothing particularly special about her apart from a few ‘defining’ characteristics like a supposed love of music and a propensity for journal writing. As in the above quote, we’re told several times that Clementine is not quite herself. We’re reputedly told that before the ‘incident’ with Amanda and Ethan, she was an entirely different person, one who was pleasant to be around. Unfortunately, we’re stuck with the new Clementine, the one whose main occupations seems to be pouting and brooding. These constant reminders of Clementine’s past self seemed more like anticipatory apologies or justifications for Clementine’s present insufferable behaviour than as attempts to further the development of her character’s backstory. I know we’re meant to sympathize with Clementine, but all I could really do was sympathize with her poor parents. Can you imagine going to the trouble to plan and take a well-earned vacation after working hard all year, only to have to spend the majority of your time tiptoeing around a girl who’s as emotionally stable as a nitroglycerin? Doesn’t that sound relaxing? Clementine treats her parents poorly despite their obvious love and concern for her, and this only further distanced me from her character.

“The redheaded guy was about my age, I think. He didn’t look at me like I was a total bitch or some kind of horrible human being. Neither did George or Ruth. They seemed to like me. So did Mrs. Ficklewhiskers, the pirate cat. And I get that that’s because they don’t know me or what went on with me last year or anything. But still. They all treated me like I had a blank slate. Like I was just plain Clem, a girl with a pretty laugh and a nice walk.
But I guess if they knew me, they’d hate me too.”

Perhaps what I wanted most from Clementine was depth. Throughout the majority of the story, it felt as though Clementine spent more time feeling sorry for herself and acting like a martyr and less time reflecting on what had happened and coming to terms with that. Her sudden change of heart and revelation at the end of the novel felt more convenient than it did authentic and well-earned and was as superficial as the rest of the story. Clementine spends the majority of the trip alone in her stateroom in self-imposed exile, ostensibly with the intention of formulating a plan as to how best to atone for what she’s done. Her ultimate solution? To apologize to Amanda and take responsibility for what she has done. Imagine that. No wonder it took her so long to come up with such a revolutionary concept! What was Clementine’s alleged crime, you ask? Nothing. Absolutely nothing. The infraction for which we’ve endured over two hundred pages of self-flagellation and angst turns out to be composed of nothing more than Clementine spending time with Ethan when Amanda wasn’t around and for entertaining romantic thoughts about him. That’s right. Thoughts. While I understand that mistakes can seem magnified when you’re sixteen and that inconsequential things can often seem like the end of the world, I couldn’t help but feel cheated after having to endure an endless number of pages about Clementine’s guilt and supposed lack of character only to find out it was all based on little more than impure thoughts. The magnitude to which she had embellished the nature of her alleged crime seemed absurd once one knew the entire story.

“We both lean down to pick up the bananas, and – boom! – our foreheads collide.
“Damn!” he says as we stand up. He’s holding his head, one eye shut, the other cocked at me, with a big grin on his face.
Then he puts his hands out in front of him, the basket dangling on one arm.
“Okay, back away,” he says.
“Huh?” I ask.
“You’re obviously an assassin sent to kill me by collision,” he says.

The romance was similarly lacklustre. I struggled to understand what attracted James to Clementine in the first place. I couldn’t help but feel that James was more interested in the mystery behind Clementine and the idea of ‘saving her’ as opposed to being interested in her as an individual. Clementine’s relationship with James also seemed sudden and ill-advised, particularly as it begins on the heels of what Walker is implying was a seminal moment in Clementine’s life, the consequences of which she has not yet dealt with when the relationship with James begins. It was difficult to invest in a relationship that seemed doomed from the outset. On a trip that should have ideally been spent on introspection and a journey of self discovery, the romance felt unnecessary and unwanted. I was saddened to see that, as so often is the case in the young adult genre, the romance acted as the catalyst for change in our protagonist. I wish she could have found strength and comfort from within rather than seeking it from an outside source.

“When he smiles at me, I feel like I’m sitting under a heat lamp. I live for the times when his fingers brush my leg at lunch, or when we pass in the hallways and he raises his eyebrows at me, like we have a secret. I should feel bad – and I do, most of the time – but how can I stop thinking about him when seeing his face makes me feel so alive?”

I think what Unbreak My Heart suffered from most was an overall lack of depth. Walker makes no attempt to confront or examine some of the importance issues that arise within Unbreak My Heart, however inadvertent they may be. Why does Ethan lie about the nature of their relationship and who acted as the aggressor? Why is Clementine willing to sacrifice a lifelong friendship for the acceptance and attention of a boy she barely knows? Why is Ethan more readily forgiven by their group of friends while Clementine is ostracized? What are we meant to take away from this novel? That we should continue to perpetuate this sort of double standard in which infidelity is accepted and forgiven on the part of the man, while the ‘other woman’ is ostracized and held solely accountable? Where I would expect a certain amount of anger in Clementine, I instead found self-loathing. Where I would expect critical thinking, I instead found blind acceptance. Clementine never transcends her portrayal as a typical, angst-ridden teenager. It felt as though we were only ever allowed to skim the surface of what could have otherwise been a very promising and thought-provoking subject. Walker never strove to take this book a step beyond a girl grieving over a lost friendship that never felt particularly special or worth saving to begin with.

“Dear Amanda,
I didn’t realize that, sometimes, even if a situation is getting out of control, it happens slowly, in these really small moments. And even if what’s happening is wrong, it can feel like it’s right.
I got so wrapped up in the fact that something was happening. Someone was into me. I didn’t have to be boring old Clem all the time. I had a secret.”

That said, it wasn’t all bad. There were a few things I did enjoy about Unbreak My Heart. I thought the concept of a three-month-long summer spent sailing the ‘Great Loop’ (A route that encircles the east coast of the United States) was inventive and was what initially attracted me to the novel in the first place. I’ve always loved road trip stories and thought Walker’s unique choice of transportation and location held a great deal of potential. I enjoyed Clementine’s mother’s reliance on A Man, A Can, A Plan, which I was delighted to find was a real book. Finally, I appreciated Clementine’s relationship with Olive. It isn’t often that the younger sister or brother isn’t simply relegated to the role of obnoxious sibling. Olive’s hero worship of her older sister, however misplaced, was sweet. It was nice to see a sibling relationship that wasn’t adversarial or combative in nature.

“I’d thought of all the excuses that might have made my friends cut me some slack, but none of them were real. The truth was that I liked Ethan, and he liked me. We clicked. That’s it.
It’s a paper-thin reason to start something with your best friend’s boyfriend, and I knew it.”

Formulaic, superficial, self-indulgent and melodramatic with a protagonist I would have happily tossed overboard, Melissa Walker’s Unbreak My Heart was simply not the book for me. But don’t simply take my word for it! Given the overwhelming number of positive reviews on Goodreads and Amazon.com, it very well could be that this is simply a case of ‘it’s not you, it’s me’. While I would recommend borrowing this novel from the library as opposed to purchasing it as I chose to do, I’m sure there are a great number of people who will enjoy it far more than I did! ...more

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Aug 23, 2018 Lauren rated it really liked it

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Oh my goodness I forget how adorable Melissa Walker's romances are! UNBREAK MY HEART is cute, heartwarming, and the perfect amount of swoony. I loved the dual timelines, and, most importantly of all, I ADORED the main character! Clementine is incredibly easy to relate to, and while she technically did the unforgivable, I couldn't find it in me to dislike her, because I think just about anyone has been in her shoes before.

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May 10, 2017 Dominique rated it liked it

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This was a cute summer read, but nothing more.

I thought Clem was kinda stupid in the flashbacks. I know things like that probably happen, but still, you don't do that.
I also feel like Amanda should've heard Clem out, rather than just blaming her.
Ethan is a jerk, I don't understand why they both love him.
James, now he was amazing.
I enjoyed the present time of the book, rather than the flashbacks.

So yeah, it was a cute, short, summer read. But it didn't wow me.

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Mar 17, 2022 Camille Houde rated it really liked it

I loved the characters development throughout the book, a good light read!

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Jul 14, 2012 Danielle. rated it it was amazing

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How am I supposed to start this?
I just want to point out something that annoyed me before I gush and fangirl and talk about the deliciousness of this summer love novel.

I get that we all get my mad. We all get angry with ourselves at one point for doing something we didn't expect we'd do. We disappoint people and you can't help but hate yourself... a lot. This is how Clementine feels, the girl with amazing friends and a best friend that just comp ...more

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May 06, 2012 Lauren rated it really liked it

Shelves: fiction, gotten-rid-of, young-adult

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Unbreak My Heart was the short summer read I needed. The pacing was excellent, the characters were likeable, their actions understandable, and the writing was easy to get through. I love the setting of the book—most of it is set on either Clem’s or James’ boat, at sea, and in and around the marinas they visit.

The chapters alternate between the here and now with her family on the boat, and flashbacks from when she first met Ethan, the g More reviews and bookish blog posts can be found on my blog!

Unbreak My Heart was the short summer read I needed. The pacing was excellent, the characters were likeable, their actions understandable, and the writing was easy to get through. I love the setting of the book—most of it is set on either Clem’s or James’ boat, at sea, and in and around the marinas they visit.

The chapters alternate between the here and now with her family on the boat, and flashbacks from when she first met Ethan, the guy she fell for, and everything started to fall apart with her best friend, Amanda. I loved this format. In the beginning of the book, it’s all quite mysterious what happened and how it happened and all the details of it, but eventually, Clementine starts slowly letting you in. The flashback chapters start with an unfinished letter Clem attempts to write to her ex best friend, in hope of being forgiven.

The characters were all likeable and well written. I must admit that I thought Clem was being a drama llama at times, and I was yelling at my book, “JUST BE HONEST AND TELL THEM ALL OF THE THINGS.” Other than that, she was a great main character. I also loved her family, especially her little sister, Olive. And, once again, a swoon-worthy love interest named James. He has red hair and ocean eyes. Even though his life is not perfect at all, he’s always laughing and doesn’t let things get to him. He radiates positivity and smiles. Sounds like the perfect guy, right? That’s what I thought.

Also, I pictured James as red-haired Charlie McDonnell throughout the whole book. I regret nothing.

The group of friends Clem has in the flashbacks has definitely made it to my Favourite Fictional Friends list. They did scavenger hunts and had to find things like Ethan’s holiday-themed boxers, an official traffic cone, a size-6 vintage ladies shoe… That sounds like such a fun thing to do with friends! And I love Clem’s and Ethan’s relationship, even though it was kind of messed up. I love how well they fit together, and wondered why Ethan was even (still) with Amanda in the first place. Eventually, though, I’m glad that Ethan is not who Clementine ended up with.

The whole book reminded me a lot of myself and my childhood on our boat with my family. I can relate to all the parts about being stuck on a boat with your parents and sibling, how sometimes it’s a lot of fun, and sometimes you just want to yell at everyone and throw crackers across the deck in your frustration. It was very realistically written.

Unbreak My Heart is a super cute love story, and a fantastic contemporary that you should definitely add to your to-read list. ...more

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Nov 23, 2011 Sara Grochowski rated it it was amazing

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Goodness, I love this novel. Unbreak My Heart is just... perfect. Simple, yet filled with such emotional depth and meaning that I wanted to simultaneously hug it to my chest and thrust it at my roommate and command that she read it immediately.

I'll admit, the cover is quite girly. I think it's adorable, but I know that some readers might look at it and see fluff. Unbreak My Heart is not fluff. It does, however, have a hopefulness to it that the cover illustrates in ways. I like that Clementine i Goodness, I love this novel. Unbreak My Heart is just... perfect. Simple, yet filled with such emotional depth and meaning that I wanted to simultaneously hug it to my chest and thrust it at my roommate and command that she read it immediately.

I'll admit, the cover is quite girly. I think it's adorable, but I know that some readers might look at it and see fluff. Unbreak My Heart is not fluff. It does, however, have a hopefulness to it that the cover illustrates in ways. I like that Clementine is on a boat in the middle of nowhere with nothing on the horizon... to me, this is reminiscent of Clem's state of mind throughout most of the novel. Still, don't judge this book by it's cover! It's light enough to be a beach read in that's it's fairly straightforward and isn't dark and twisted, but that doesn't mean it's fluff. (I mean, look at Anna and the French Kiss... the cover looks fluffy, not to mention the cutesy title, but Anna is not fluffy!)

I adore the characters in Unbreak My Heart. All of them. They all felt real to me and I loathed to leave them behind when I finished the novel. Clem is surrounded by such wonderful people that you just knew that she'd make it through her rough patch... even if this wasn't a YA novel with a pink cover, I know Clem would have been just fine.

One of the best aspects of this novel is the fact that, while Clem is distressed over having fallen for her best friend's boyfriend, she much more worried about her relationship with her best friend than with the boy. Yes! This is so, so important to me. In addition, I liked that the novel dealt with the double standard of the best friend getting ditched while the boyfriend is forgiven.

Annnnd of course there's romance. And it's wonderful and hopeful and fresh! Sometimes I get so discouraged by all those star-crossed lovers and messy love triangles - especially when my real love life features messiness way too often. It's nice to see something lighthearted and positive. It was such a relief to see someone healthy enter into a heroine's life... that simplicity is refreshing. And, honestly, unique in comparison with I've been reading lately.

Unbreak My Heart is contemporary YA at it's best. I can't stress enough how firmly this book has wedged itself in my heart. Read it! You won't be disappointed. ...more

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Jun 08, 2012 Books are TARDIS rated it liked it · review of another edition

Shelves: light-reading, contemporary, globe-trotter, awesome-siblings, friendship-is-the-best-ship, awesome-dad-award, scavenger-hunt-huzzah, that-cover-though-urgh, sibling-shenanigans, about-life

Actual Rating: 3.5 blazing stars

“My mind is not a very forgiving place.”

Unbreak My Heart is an emotionally charged story about falling-outs, learning to live with mistakes, friendship and family.

Who here hasn't made terrible mistakes? Had falling outs? Learned to reconcile with the choices we make? Dealt with self-loathing? Learned to accept things and move on?

This is the crux of this simple contemporary YA read. It deals with all these issues in a very organic way. And the novel is delight ...more

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Feb 20, 2012 Damaris (GoodChoiceReading) rated it really liked it

What an emotional story! My heart went out to Clem the entire book. She made one simple mistake and it cost her big time.

The story is told from Clem’s point of view, and alternates from present to past. At first I was a bit confused because whenever the story would jump into the past, there really wasn’t any warning, but eventually I caught on and realized when the story would jump in to the past. Each time the story would change to Clem’s memories, I wanted to cry. The chapter would begin with What an emotional story! My heart went out to Clem the entire book. She made one simple mistake and it cost her big time.

The story is told from Clem’s point of view, and alternates from present to past. At first I was a bit confused because whenever the story would jump into the past, there really wasn’t any warning, but eventually I caught on and realized when the story would jump in to the past. Each time the story would change to Clem’s memories, I wanted to cry. The chapter would begin with a note she is trying to write to her best friend Amanda, and each time it was heart breaking. She really doesn’t know what to say or how to fix things between them. As I continued reading I could see how Clem fell for Ethan (Amanda’s boyfriend) and how strong her friendship with Amanda was. Clem struggles with herself throughout the whole book, and constantly puts herself down because of what she did to Amanda. It was so sad to read the things running through her head. Walker did an excellent job describing her emotions because I felt it with each word. That is what I loved the most. It was so easy to put myself in Clem’s shoes.

When her family takes her away on their sailboat for the summer, she meets a boy named James. James to me was an okay character. He didn’t really do anything for me, but he did help Clem deal with some issues and realize that things aren’t as bad as they seem. He was sweet and really nice, but the connection wasn't there for me. I looked at him as more of a friend than a love interest.

The only issues I had with this story is that I felt it took a while to get into specific details of how exactly everything happened between Clem and Amanda. Also, the ending left me with a lot of questions. Not sure if there is going to be a sequel or not, but I sure hope there is.

I recommend this book and think anyone of all ages can enjoy it. It can easily be read in one sitting. I really enjoyed it and am looking forward to any of Walker’s future books.

3.5 Stars out of 5! ...more

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Dec 23, 2011 Kelly rated it liked it

Shelves: read-in-2012, ya-fiction

A cute, light-hearted story about a girl who made a mistake and the boy she meets who helps her put that mistake into perspective. It's a sweet romance set aboard a boat traveling the Mississippi River over the summer with her family. Clem's done something to hurt her best friend, and slowly, she reveals the back story in her alone time. It's really not a huge thing at all, but because of the reaction she receives, she feels like it's huge. She's a brooder and she's not really the most pleasant ...more

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