Okay, I recently (today) bought this book on my phone, and here was my general reaction:
First 15-ish pages:
"Wait, is this Wither? No, no, this can't be. No, wasn't this supposed to be Rose's story?"
Page 16:
"Why is this the first chapters of Wither?"
Me, looking back on the table of contents:
"Okay, so here is Rose's story; I'm so excited! Wait why is it only 10 pages?!"
Yeah. I bought this book for a dollar. Pretty cheap, I know, but I only read this to know the story of Rose, Linden's first wife. I knew it was a short story, so 183 pages sounded right. Enough for a simple and sweet overview.
What did I get? Ten pages of broad, general statements of their relationship and stuff that wasn't fulfilling to my needs as a person who likes this book. AND IT WASN'T EVEN THAT GOOD!
Not that it was bad, and it was great at showing the devotion the characters had to each other. That part wasn't bad. Sad but sweet and true to the heart of the trilogy and to the characters.
But it was just...we know that Linden eventually had to choose to have the brides. And we know that it was because Rose wanted it to because she was sick. All of this is revealed to us beforehand, and even if we get to see some heartwarming scenes between the ever benign Linden and the sweet but tough Rose, it almost seems for nothing, because the brides are everything they're talking about. It's sweet...but empty.
Honestly, it would be better to see him reacting to her death if we saw how devoted he was to her. Meaning, their ENTIRE marriage. Childhood and on. We know how he loves her, and how he reacts to her death, because it all happens in the first book. And we know that this book is meant to be read AFTER the first book, because its book #1.5 and not #0.5, like other books in other series are. And we know all the stuff about Rose's baby and the heartbreak. So why is it in there? And if it's #1.5, why is there an excerpt for the first 5 chapters?
I would understand if this was the prologue to the first book, because then it would give us some insight and explain why Linden is getting these wives and why he is being pressured to do so and why he finally cracked after all these years, and it would make Rose's death all the more tragic because we have some prior knowledge, where her death kind of fell flat in the beginning.