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310 pages, Paperback
First published June 8, 2011
Robert downshifted the mighty engine and brought the $20,000 car to a complete stop in the dusty parking lot.The whole book is littered with repetition and unnecessary detail. How many times do we need reminding that Robert's surname is Fairchild? Or that the child Oliver is his son? Or that Grace is his wife … sorry, his beautiful wife? And so it goes on.
Stunned by the possession, Robert watched as Oliver kicked the ball away from the group and began to chase after it. Moments before the sole opponent in the vicinity extended his foot to trip his son, the boy tripped over the orange cone demarking the sideline
"Are you okay?" Oliver turned around to ask his opponent who was examining his grass-stained knees.
"Forget that kid, Ollie!" Robert shouted aggressively, attracting the attention of the other parents. "Keep moving!"
"But Dad!" the boy pleaded. "That's Georgie."
"So?" Robert said.
"So Georgie is in my class at school!"
"I'll buy you a frozen hot chocolate at Serendipity after the game if you score a goal!" Robert shouted back.
"Later, dude," Oliver said to the fallen boy and immediately resumed his journey to the small goal at the end of the field.