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Portrait of the Mother as a Young Woman

3.38  ·  Rating details ·  306 ratings  ·  64 reviews
In Rome one January afternoon in 1943, a young German woman is on her way to listen to a Bach concert at the Lutheran church. The war is for her little more than a daydream, until she realizes that her husband might never return. Portrait of the Mother as a Young Woman, winner of the prestigious Georg Büchner prize, is a mesmerizing psychological portrait of the human need ...more
Paperback, 128 pages
Published January 31st 2012 by FSG Originals (first published 2006)
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switterbug (Betsey)
This brief, evocative novella takes place during a late afternoon stroll in 1943. A very young, pregnant German woman is separated from her husband, who is stationed in North Africa during World War II. She is staying in Rome, in a guest room in a hospital for the elderly, run by German nuns in what seems to be the Prati neighborhood, between Vatican City and the historic center. Her obstetrician instructs her to "walk, young lady, walk" for the health of the child, soon to be born.

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A Walk Through Rome

Friedrich Christian Delius is the winner of Germany's highly prestigious Georg-Büchner Prize, but this, I believe, is the first of his books to be translated into English. And a very fluid translation too, by Jamie Bulloch—important in that the whole novella, though divided into paragraphs, is a single run-on sentence, a third-person stream of consciousness that is virtually impossible to stop reading.

"Walk, young lady, walk if you want to walk, the child will like it if you w
Friederike Knabe
Jan 01, 2012 rated it it was amazing  ·  review of another edition
Shelves: german-lit
The doctor's sound advice to the heavily pregnant young woman, "walk if you like, the child will enjoy it too...", provides Friedrich Christian Delius, renowned German author and 2011 recipient of the most prestigious German language literary award, the Georg-Büchner-Preis, with a unique opening and an overall frame for his novella, "Portrait of the Mother as a Young Woman". The book is unusual in several ways, both in content and in structure. I felt immediately drawn into the story, for person ...more
Mar 21, 2010 rated it really liked it  ·  review of another edition
A novel in a single sentence. That was what intrigued me about this book. To be honest I generally avoid World War Two books - not because I don't think it's important, but just because I feel as if I have already overdosed on books, films, TV programmes etc etc exploring every angle of the war, and I'd need a really good reason to read about that again, rather than any of the infinite number of other places and times. The innovative narrative structure gave me that reason.

It turns out, however,
Dec 03, 2010 rated it did not like it  ·  review of another edition
Shelves: italy, swap, germany, hf, disliked

On completion: This is a very short novel, and it only shows how perhaps one young, pregnant German woman might have viewed the world around her. It takes place during WW2. She is in Rome and she doesn't think there is any value in learning the language. In my opinion she is extremely naive. She criticizes other religions. Religion is very important to her; it gives her solace, it helps her when she has problems. I don't criticize this, but I have difficulty relationg to such a person
This book is written in ONE, very, very, long sentence. The whole book. One sentence. 125 pages. One sentence. But it works. It's poetic. Although I feel the need for periods right now. Many periods. Periods everywhere. This stream of consciousness however wasn't particularly absorbing. Period. ...more
An eight month pregnant young wife of a German solider waits for him in Rome only for him to be redeployed immediately. She walks to the Lutheran Church to listen to a Bach concert and on her way thinks about her life there, how it has changed, how distant she feels from everything around her and remembers the few moments she has spent with her husband and wonders whether he will return to her or not.

She is not despondent for she has a deep faith and whenever her thoughts selfishly turn towards
Sep 24, 2018 rated it really liked it  ·  review of another edition
Shelves: translated
Portrait of a Mother as a Young Woman is one long 117-page long sentence, in a third-person stream of consciousness. It took me a few pages to realise! Sounds painful, right? But actually the translation by Jamie Bulloch is fluid and poetic.

The novella follows a young German Nazi supporter Margherita's internal monologue as she walks through occupied Rome one day in 1943 during WWII.

I felt like I understood Margherita and her world, the naivety and contradictions of her thoughts and feelings f
BeccaAudra Smith
The Joycean title drew me to this book, as Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man is one book I actually put down and stopped reading I was so repelled by the sermon style sin talk. It's pretty rare I don't finish so titles that rip it off somehow feel like it's a second chance.

The mother in the story is in her eight month of pregnancy, and we follow her thoughts in an interior monologue with no full stops. It is described as a 117 page long sentence due to this device. The rhythm of it carries
Kathleen Jones
Jan 05, 2013 rated it it was amazing  ·  review of another edition
A young girl is stranded in Rome by the war. Her Pastor husband has been posted to north Africa - a bare two days after her arrival - and she’s alone and in the last month of her pregnancy. She lives with protestant German nuns, sharing a room with another woman whose fiancé has been interned in Australia. The Italians are unwelcoming, and the war is going badly, but the girl has no desire to return to northern Germany and the frugal, evangelical territory of her childhood. Instead she waits, fo ...more
Thing Two
What interests me the most in this novella is the sentence structure, since there is only one really long sentence! And yet, it didn't get in the way of my enjoyment of this story of a young, newly-wed, pregnant woman, alone in Rome during World War II, as her husband is in Algeria fighting the Americans. The story is evidently of Delius' mother, who was pregnant in Rome during World War II. I don't often get to see the vision of WWII through the eyes of a German, but I understood her fear of Am ...more
Aug 03, 2012 rated it really liked it  ·  review of another edition
Found this quite compelling - and felt quite breathless by the end! A whole book in one sentence is quite an achievement!
Jul 28, 2019 rated it liked it
Shelves: reading-rush

This 1-sentence, 119 page book invoked so much conflicting thought!
Ingrid Wassenaar
I really wanted to like this novella, but I'm afraid I found its so-called technical innovation (written in a single sentence) an affectation. I realise I must be deficient in something, but I much prefer the artistry behind Woolf's stream of consciousness. I also found the protagonist difficult to stay with -- it is the portrait of a stifled consciousness in wartime, trying to grapple with an fascistic ideology that subjects her to imprisonment and subjugation of every kind, while announcing to ...more
Amos Ruiz
During WWII, a pregnant young lady takes a stroll through Rome and ruminates on her life – family, country, and God.
Yes, a novel without dialogue – like this one – is a bit niche; and yet, there was something pure and unapologetic about this narration of almost exclusive interiority. I don’t know, I found it compelling.
But I didn’t enjoy the barrage of visual descriptions of Rome. Likewise I found the overuse of its Christian/religious theme, which the author never strays too far from, tiresome.
Creeping uncertainty leaves Margherita uncomfortable with her new surroundings, and she spends the walk trying to reorient her thoughts to a happier, propaganda-filled view of Italy as a society and of Germany’s future. Margherita’s default to naivety makes for a contemplative read: Is this a form of self-preservation, the last influence of Nazi propaganda, or both? Did the Nazi adoption of religious iconography, which Margherita realizes in the course of her walk, make her as a religious person ...more
Apr 20, 2019 rated it liked it
This is a strange little novella. Written as a stream of consciousness in one long run on sentence. It focuses on a young woman, 8 months pregnant and separated from her spouse who is a German soldier during WW2. The woman is spending her day in the protected city of Rome, living with nuns and walking the city as her doctor tells her that walking is good for the baby. Not much actually happens, she inwardly questions the war and purposefully does not to speak out loud against the Fuhrer and the ...more
A young woman with child is advised by her doctor to walk for the health of her and her unborn child. As she walks in and near WW2 areas, she tells us about it from her own P.O.V. It may seem narrow minded or even self centered to some, but I feel there is yet a deeper story in this novella saying look this is what it looks like and what can one do about such horrors when protecting ones own..I liked this book.
Yvonne O'connor
An odd format - very stream-of-consciousness. Odder still that this was written in 2006 and is set in 1942 - it feels older and contemporary with writings of the 1950’s. But, it is s translation from German, so perhaps that is the reason? If you’re looking for any real “story”, you won’t find it here, but it will give you lots to ponder.
Jun 22, 2018 rated it really liked it  ·  review of another edition
This really is an extraordinary little book. Not at all what i expected and it took a few pages for me to get into it but it got better and better. It is one sentence. That's right one sentence and it read like the flow of a river. ...more
Sam Davison
I liked this book despite getting a tad impatient towards the end. A young German girl walks through war time Rome to a concert. Along the way, she reglects on the differences between Pritestanism and Catholicism, between religion and the NaXi ethos, about her unborn child etc.
Vikki Gremel
Apr 01, 2019 rated it it was amazing  ·  review of another edition
Translates from German.
Good book - threw me off at first since it is one giant sentence separated only by commas.
It is a pregnant German woman’s stream of consciousness during WWII while her Nazi husband is off fighting in Africa.
Makes you think about the “other side” of the war.
Mar 05, 2019 rated it it was amazing  ·  review of another edition
If you’ve ever been to Rome, this will beautifully reanimate the stone streets of your memory.
Erin Lyn
Apr 22, 2019 rated it it was ok
It was an okay read probley better in the OG language
Crispin Semmens
A novella length sentence meandering through the thoughts, feelings and often anxieties of a German mother-to-be on her way to church in Rome during WWII. Evocative.
If you can I recommend reading this all in one go. I read about half of it at once and liked it much better that way than reading it in bits and pieces for the second half.
In 1943 Friedrich Delius's mother was twenty-one, alone, and eight months pregnant in Rome, waiting in a kind of limbo for the return of her husband from North Africa. The product of an austere Lutheran upbringing, she is innocent and naïve and prefers to trust that everything is in God's hands. She worries about her freethinking roommate Ilse, who converses with the Italian servants and has the habit of broaching subjects that make the young mother uncomfortable. It is now January and she has b ...more
Portrait of the Mother as a Young Woman is a short, experimental piece of fiction in the form of a single run-on sentence. Delius convincingly evokes a day in the life of a young woman from Germany living in Rome waiting for her husband to return from fighting in WW2 in Africa. He explores, through this character, the ways the human mind can (even passively) find cracks in propaganda and the cognitive dissonance that creates. The writing style is beautiful and delicate, reflecting the protagonis ...more
Jan 13, 2015 rated it it was ok  ·  review of another edition
This book is one long sentence, a fairly accurate representation of the strange string of thoughts you have on a long walk, or the letters you begin to draft in your head to a loved one throughout the day. While I appreciate the novelty of the formatting (seriously, there is only one period in the entire text) I found it difficult to stay engaged because of the main character's tangential thoughts and only worked through it because I signed up for the Good Reads yearly book challenge.

My one pos
Mar 19, 2014 rated it liked it  ·  review of another edition
Shelves: europe, germany
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#Reading the one long sentence that is Portrait of the Mother as a Young Woman takes us to the kind of moments when we are alone with our #thoughts and don't want anyone around to know how we are feeling.

In this #novella, Delius, still in his mother's womb, accompanies young Margherita in a stroll through Nazi-occupied #Rome in 1943. She is alone in a foreign city without speaking the language. Everything around her feels hostile yet she does not despa
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Friedrich Christian Delius (born 1943) is an acclaimed German writer.

He was born in Rome and grew up in Wehrda and Korbach in the state of Hesse. He studied German literature at the Free University and the Technical University in Berlin. He graduated in 1970 and went to work in publishing. Between 1970 and 1978, he worked at the publishing firms Klaus Wagenbach and Rotbuch.

He has published more th

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