I quite enjoyed this book but it was so ridiculously detailed at times.... I opened the cupboard door, reached in, took out the pole that I used for opening the loft. I went up the stairs carrying the pole and opened the loft hatch using the pole to unlock the hatch, I pushed the door open and reached for the light..... I went around the house collecting the toys, I picked up a soft elephant, behind the cushion I found a rattle, on the floor was another toy, I put them in the bag, I went into the kitchen, I opened a drawer, I took out the bibs and put them on the side. I opened another drawer and took out the cutlery set, I put them in a bag, I put the bags at the bottom of the stairs, I picked up a coat. I carried the coat and bags up the stairs, I went into the room and I put them on the bed...... Tediously and unnecessarily detailed through out. She could probably cut out all the unnecessary page filling rubbish, lose about 30-40 pages and make a good book into a great book. The story itself is good, if somewhat embellished in places, but take that with a pinch of salt and you are left with a touching story which really shows the work and love of good foster carer and a positive reflection of the work of social services. I have read three or four before this and never noticed such tedious detailing so I assume it is one of her earlier attempts at a novel. I already have another to read, hopefully it will be much better edited/formatted/written, if not then I think it will put me off reading any more, I haven't got patience for all reading such pointless meticulous detailing! I want to read a book not a report!!