I love Rosie's books but I found myself getting a bit frustrated with this one. Although it was another good story, some parts did not seem to sit well with me.
Firstly, I found it quite amazing that nothing was said about the first lot of money that Louise took from Dolly's tin to give to Paul. They had very little money so it would have been very noticeable.
Secondly, when you have a person like Paul slinking around, threatening and demanding money, would you not keep the doors locked at all times?
Thirdly, I can't believe that no one heard the noise when Paul broke in and attacked Dolly. The whole household would have woken.
Lastly, to my mind there was a little too much about Paul suddenly turning up and demanding money. Every time either Louise or Dolly were on their own, he suddenly appeared. It became so much that I found myself expecting him!
Apart from the above, it was still an enjoyable story.