Wow... that was... hot... and interesting...
So, yeah, this was a fantasy erotica — which I didn't know when I picked it up. Short and hot, and an interesting prequel to a series — even if I won't be spending money on it, as I don't have any to spend on books ATM.
The language was good, and mostly had a good flow. My only problem was that the author ended up using words sounding rather alike close to each other, which threw me a little.
I also had some trouble with a rather big plot hole, that might be filled out in the actuall books, but kind of weakened the short.
That said, this was just what I needed ATM