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Mass Effect: Deception

(Mass Effect Novels #4)

2.88  ·  Rating details ·  1,935 ratings  ·  127 reviews
An all-new adventure inspired by the award-winning videogame from BioWare!

The universe is under siege. Every fifty thousand years, a race of sentient machines invades our galaxy to harvest all organic life-forms. They are the Reapers.

Two people who know the truth are desperately searching for a way to stop the cycle: Navy admiral David Anderson and his partner, Kahlee Sa
Paperback, 336 pages
Published January 31st 2012 by Del Rey (first published January 1st 2012)
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There are so many errors in this book that a fan-created Google document was started to list them.

Contains glaringly obvious errors concerning the lore, timeline, and characters including "a character 'growing up' from being autistic, turning Mass Effect's only gay male character straight, and being literally impossible to reconcile with the timeline made by the games, comics, and other books."

Sad that this was even published.

And you know you're in trouble when Penny Arcade cares:

BioWare's r
Jan 31, 2012 rated it did not like it  ·  review of another edition
Leading up to the release of this book, I re-read all three of Drew Karpyshyn's novels. I've always enjoyed them in the past, and so I wanted to see the story continue. I was mildly concerned when I saw that Karpyshyn had moved on, but William C. Dietz had a decent track record, so I figured this book would probably turn out okay.

Boy, was I mistaken. As soon as I opened the book, I could tell something was wrong. I like quality writing, but I'm usually able to enjoy pretty much anything. Unfortu
Feb 07, 2012 rated it did not like it
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Jul 27, 2012 rated it it was ok
I am a huge Mass Effect fan, and I am also a fan of William Dietz's "Legion of the Damned" series. "Deception" got a lot of bad reviews after it was released; fans were angry at inaccuracies in the Mass Effect lore and universe, inconsistencies involving the earlier books written by Drew Karpyshyn, and even plain, bad writing. I have confidence in Mr. Dietz, and I'm willing to excuse some inaccuracies in Mass Effect lore, so after finishing "Mass Effect: Retribution", I turned my attention to "D ...more
Susan Lulgjuraj
Feb 01, 2012 rated it did not like it
Video gamers can live in their own world, falling in love with characters and making choices that effect the direct outcome . Not all video games are like that, but the Mass Effect series is.

The Mass Effect series is it's own world where fans of the games can dive into this sci-fi universe with comics and books as well, helping paint a picture of a battle that is about to commence in the third video game.

As one of the people who fell in love with Mass Effect, I've read the books, bought the comi
Oct 27, 2011 marked it as dnf-or-not-gonna-happen
I am a huge, huge fan of Mass Effect, and I've really enjoyed the tie ins that I've read to this point. The first three novels were all written by Drew Karpyshyn, who wrote for the games. The two that I've read so far were solid stories that fit into the established ME universe. I hate to say that I wouldn't trust this novel, written by William C. Dietz, with a ten foot pole... But I wouldn't touch this book with a ten foot pole if you paid me.

Obviously, Dietz took this assignment without knowin
Jan 31, 2012 rated it did not like it
Mass Effect Deception is the worst book out of the series of novels.

The setting is mishandled completely. It feels as if the author has no sense of this universe or the people who live in them. There are dozens of errors with the lore including: characters who are alive who should be dead, timeline errors that make characters older than they should be, changes a major character's sexuality, deems autism something to be grown out of, the very nature of several alien species, and more.

If you are i
May 26, 2016 marked it as dropped
Shelves: 2016
OKAY, SO. I've read the first three Mass Effect books by Drew Karpyshyn, and while they may not have been spectacular examples of stellar writing, the storytelling was great, the plots were great, the character development was GREAT, and I just generally loved all three of them! I enjoyed expanding my canon knowledge and getting to know some characters way better than the games allowed, and, well, yeah. I'm a huge Mass Effect fan. Which is why the possibility of this fourth book (suddenly not by ...more
Mogsy (MMOGC)
Hard to believe, but I have actually read worse. Which is why this book isn't getting the one star treatment from me that many other reviewers have chosen to give.

But I'm probably being generous. After all, I was aware of the many errors and lore screw-ups that exist in this book, but I mostly chose to ignore them as I was reading. Granted, I give you that there were a few glaring, unforgivable mistakes. But quite honestly? You probably won't even notice most of them unless you're a hardcore Mas
Jun 10, 2021 rated it did not like it
I realized I never reviewed this trash on GR. Skip it. Just read the Google Doc that goes into detail about every error in this book instead.

Does have the hilarious scene where Kai Leng breaks into Anderson's apartment and steals some cereal.
Feb 10, 2012 marked it as so-bad-ill-never-read-it
I will not give a rating to this book--it is evidently a piece of utter, utter shit, and one only has to read the reviews both here and on Amazon to see why. I am in fact writing this review for a purpose much broader and more entertaining than that: I am going to express my intense loathing of William Dietz as a writer, and hope--just hope--that this article gets read by a larger audience.

Mr. Dietz is a hack: a big, pompous, self-aggrandizing hack who has spent far too long passing as a decent
Feb 01, 2012 rated it it was ok
Shelves: owned
A lot of people hate this book for making a series of errors with the Mass Effect universe and the characters that populate it. While I still noticed these errors, and certainly don't approve, I went into this book knowing those errors were there.
As a result of this foreknowledge, I believe I was able to distil the essence of the story out and read a version of the book that wasn't on the page. That being said, the story was merely okay; not bad, but not good either.
The writing was decent at par
Wendy White
Mar 28, 2012 rated it it was ok
First ME book not written by D.K. So, Dietz had that disadvantage going in. Sadly, this book really does not compare favourably with the first three.

Criticisms about this book's gaping plot holes and inconsistent characterisation certainly weren't unfounded. Deception breaks the timeline established by the previous novels, and there's a number of other significant errors which others have already noted in their reviews.

Kahlee and Anderson were particularly out of synch with their established cha
Jan 24, 2013 rated it liked it
I'd heard about the fan rage against this book long before sitting down to read it, and as someone who read the first 3 and happily enjoyed this one I'm really not sure what all the fuss is about. Sure there are inconsistencies with the previous lore, and it doesn't feel quite as authentically ME as the others so it would have been nice to have had Karpyshyn continue things.

But I can't say any of that brought me out in hives or caused me to lose any sleep. The way people are reacting it's as if
William Ristau
Mar 04, 2014 rated it it was amazing
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Hmm....I was really excited about reading this book. Ive never played the games, but have a friend who does and is pretty into it so I figured Id give it a shot.

At thebeginning I was having a lot of fun with it. Seeing all the schemes and plots of opposing forces come to fruition and collide. Very fun...until I got to the end. I dont wanna ruin the book for anyone, but seriously? That was it? Let's just erase all the heard work we did and take a bajillion steps backward. And those Reapers menti
Jan 31, 2012 rated it did not like it
A perfect example of fan exploitation.

The glaring inconsistencies in this book are beyond reconcilable. The errors not only go against the details of a rich, expansive universe, but against basic timeline and plot elements established in previous books. Any avid reader, despite their knowledge of Mass Effect, would note the disparity between this and previous novels. From characters aging years in a matter of months, dead characters reprising their role, and fundamental values of characters bein
Tom Attard
Mar 13, 2013 rated it did not like it
So how much should you expect from a genre book based on a game franchise? More.

The allure for the game for me was always the story elements, so I gave the novels a go and was pleasantly surprised by the earlier books. Deception however, is just abysmally written trash.

Well written characters and plots can give a sense of suspense or excitement because they engage the reader enough to have a feel for struggle or triumph or heartache that will evolve from relationships and events. Lacking any of
T.M. Carper
Apr 30, 2015 rated it liked it
Shelves: media-tie-in
Kind of a downer of a novel and a different style of writing compared to the other books (different author than first three) - mainly because of the headers constantly stating where the characters are. But it continues Kahlee's misadventures against the Illusive Man and Kai Leng with help from Anderson. Pre-ME3. ...more
Callum Shephard
Sep 27, 2012 rated it did not like it
This novel is bad, quite possibly one of the worst in terms of quality I’ve seen recently.

As bad as Revan was, at least in that you could see some quality in the writing when the author wasn’t openly flipping off at Bioware fans. But this? One member on the Cerberus Daily News forum described it best - “It’s like parody written by someone who doesn't know it's parody. Except worse.”

In all honesty, the plot does make the book sound promising. Gillian Grayson, the MEverse’s River Tam, has been in
Behnam Riahi
Feb 12, 2015 rated it did not like it
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Mass Effect: Deception, written by William C. Dietz and published by Del Rey, is a third-person, science-fiction novel and the fourth book in the Mass Effect series, based on the video games of the same name. After humans have fled to space, interacted with aliens, and even built an embassy in the space fortress that all species share known as the Citadel, humanity is on the hunt to mine a rare element that creates faster tha
Chris The Lizard from Planet X
Mass Effect: Deception by Willam C. Diets is a video game tie-in novel based sci-fi RPG game from BioWare. ME: Deception, Is set some time after Mass Effect 2 but before Mass Effect 3, Mass Effect: Deception brings Gillian Grayson back into the tale as a young adult bent on revenge for the death of her father in the last novel. Returning from her exile with the Quarians, Gillian learns of her father's death at the hands of Cerberus and vows to kill the Illusive Man. Her minder and guardian who f ...more
Pamela  (Here to Read Books and Chew Gum)
I had planned on reading every piece of lore written about the Mass Effect universe to completion this time around, but man, I had to DNF this steaming mess a little over the halfway mark. It's sloppily written, with no care given to the lore at all - Dietz obviously did no research into the Mass Effect universe, and it really shows. Not only was no care taken in representing things that had been established in-game, but it wasn't even consistent with the previous books! It even manages to undo ...more
Teighlor Chaney
May 07, 2015 rated it did not like it
Shelves: own
Despite some of the previous reviews, I began this book with high hopes. I enjoyed the others and thought this one would be a climactic conclusion, with an interesting biotic character, and a chance to build more on Kai Leng, Admiral Anderson and Kahlee Sanders' characters. I was sorely disappointed.

Where should I even begin? I suppose I will start at the beginning. By the time I got to page 20, I’d already been told what each supporting character and alien species looked like in excruciating de
Jan 18, 2012 rated it did not like it
In full disclosure I won this book in a Goodreads Giveaway, also I am not familiar with the Mass Effect series.

The language used in the book is extremely weak and too simplistic. The grammar is terrible and full of mistakes, for example the word "and" is regularly used to start a sentence or even a paragraph, but this is just one example out of many sloppy mistakes. Paragraphs seem to end randomly and it almost feels the author threw punctuation at a page and put the commas and fullstops in wher
Feb 26, 2013 rated it did not like it
I wish I could give this book (if you can call it that) no stars, because I'm furious I even wasted my time reading this deplorable thing- luckily, I am able to check books out from the store I work at, or I never would have willingly paid for it.

I'm assuming Dietz has never so much as glanced at any Mass Effect lore outside of the manuals that come with the game, considering how "liberal" he was with canon lore. (Artistic liberty is only something Hudson can claim, Dietz, and this was BEFORE M
Oct 20, 2017 rated it it was amazing
This is the 4th book in the Mass Effect series. The first three books were by Drew Karpyshyn. This one is by William C. Dietz. Mr. Dietz has done an excellent job of continuing the story started in the first three books. This book is based on the game by BioWare. I don't play video games so I don't know how it compares to the game but it is a good read in the Space Opera genre. In this one Kahlee Sanders and Admiral David Anderson are searching for Gillian Grayson who is in turn trying to find a ...more
Feb 12, 2016 rated it it was ok
Well what can one say about this book? I mean it was interesting enough and if you know nothing about Mass Effect you'd probably actually enjoy this one.
Biggest complaints you'll get from me was the structure in which it was written. It bounced around too much leaving me utterly confused. Secondly the lore is so way off base that it makes you want to scream.
I'm usually easily pleased with books and even though certain aspects bothered me overall the story was alright. It was not the worst book
Mar 21, 2012 rated it it was ok
Definitely not as good as the other three books and its obvious that the new writer had no prior knowledge of the Mass Effect universe or its characters (apart from maybe a bare bones cheat sheet provided by Bioware) as shown by the abundance mistakes and errors. However saying that, the general plot is solid (basic but solid) and with the planned re-release with fixed errors it would match up with the other books in the series.
Even going in to this book knowing that it's based off a game and thus nowhere near high literature, this book was a huge disappointment. Factual errors gave away the fact this writer knows nothing about the game series, and grammatical errors (cereal killer, really?) gave away the fact the publishing company was more interested in rushing this to beat the game's release than actually editing it. Don't bother with this book, unless you have several red pens and want some practice in editing. ...more
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New York Times bestselling author William C. Dietz has published more than fifty novels, some of which have been translated into German, Russian, and Japanese. He grew up in the Seattle area, served as a medic with the Navy and Marine Corps, graduated from the University of Washington, and has been employed as a surgical technician, college instructor, and television news writer, director and prod ...more

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