Half-Spring by Kellyn Roth

Today I wrote a poem to describe our weather here. :) Enjoy!

 

Half-Spring by Kellyn Roth (2/5/16)

So many things

That remind us of springs

That have already passed

Are here.

Like robins and flowers

And half-sunny hours

And prancing of baby

Deer.

Yet the air is so crisp

The wind is so brisk

And the sky keeps on pouring down

Rain.

When will spring come?

It arrives some by some

And soon we see things aren’t the

Same.

What do you think? I’d love to have constructive criticism! :)

~Kellyn Roth

p.s. I’m pretty proud of my photography, but the credit really goes to my new camera. ;) (And yes, I realize the photos aren’t that great. But I had limited subject matter!)