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Joanne wrote: "Not sure if this will help at all, but found just a few errors when reading and thought you maybe would like to know about them in case you are able to fix them in the future. Your book is wonderf..."It is totally okay! I'm so glad you would help me by pointing them out. And everything you said looks correct, so I will be going back to edit my document. Thanks for taking the time to tell me! And I'm glad you liked my book. :)






















































Margaret McAllister


Barry Wolverton





I commented here about it because I knew of no other way to let you know. Hope it is okay!
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"On Page 47 where it says, "My leaders would never tell me where she is if I they knew I made a mistake like this" The I between if and they shouldn't be in there-- just a silly typo, I know, but thought you would want to know- especially if you are a perfectionist and your own worst critic like I tend to be.
On Page 69 where it says "She first thudded into the inner circle and her other two struck the center." The word she should be the... again just a silly typo, nothing major, but thought you'd want to be aware of it.
Page 186- the sentence is "Her breath came in raged gasps, she glanced around for anything she could use to defend herself, not wanting to use her last dagger after what she had done to Jaever." I'm assuming raged should be ragged.
Page 193- the sentence is "He wore simple cloths for the lord of Pimaen, just a shirt, trousers, and a navy-blue cape." I'm assuming cloths should be clothes, but I may be wrong on this one.
Again, only pointing these out in a positive way because I would want to know if it were my book, and it is such a wonderful story that I do not want any little things like those distracting readers from the beautiful world you've created in Jaded: The Silentwhisperer." (hide spoiler)]