Rejected Flash Fiction Piece from Freeze Frame Fiction

I received a rejection e-mail yesterday from Freeze Frame Fiction for the following piece. Normally I keep these in a folder to read over when my head's a little too large. This one contained very good notes from the readers so I thought I'd share it with anyone who cared to look.

The piece, as submitted:

Mob Jitters
My hand's shaking as I reach for the doorknob. I grunt, a mumbled curse sneaks past my lips. I look at myself in the huge mirror above the sink. The fluorescents give my skin...