Mark and Matt Adventures

Good afternoon! I have started quite a few times on the next adventure of Mark and Matt. Each time, I get started, I stop midway and read what I wrote. I don't ever like it so I scrunch the paper up and start over. My problem is not being able to grab the audience's attention in that first sentence. I have been told over and over by my wonderful husband and by my teachers to just WRITE! It's only the first draft! My mother has told throughout my life that I have a way with words. 

I promise I will have another adventure for you guys to read soon! I have two more months of school. After that, I can concentrate on writing more. I will be able to put my sister's story together.

Have a wonderful day!

Laurie 8)