Something right
Yesterday another 5*****, it really tickles me when a reader connects. I don't expect every person to like my writing style, but when they do and get emotional about it I feel like I've done something right.
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“That’s okay with me. I want you to teach me everything that makes you happy,” I said. “You made me happy when you let me into your bed last night. You made me happy when you agreed to lose Ben.” I rose up slightly and looked into his face.
“When you asked me if I loved him, I realized it wasn’t right, but I wasn’t sure why you cared. Your motives almost always confuse me. With Ben, I guess, I was in love with the idea of love. We only were together those few short months before I moved. I should have guessed once I was gone, he would be off to someone new.”
"BOY IN A BAND" $0.99 now on Amazon, Nook, and Smashwords
“That’s okay with me. I want you to teach me everything that makes you happy,” I said. “You made me happy when you let me into your bed last night. You made me happy when you agreed to lose Ben.” I rose up slightly and looked into his face.
“When you asked me if I loved him, I realized it wasn’t right, but I wasn’t sure why you cared. Your motives almost always confuse me. With Ben, I guess, I was in love with the idea of love. We only were together those few short months before I moved. I should have guessed once I was gone, he would be off to someone new.”
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