Editing is a Good Idea

First round of editing is now at Chapter Eleven. There is an awful lot of eyebrow-raising going on. Vampires arch eyebrows at Lissa. She arches them defiantly back. It's a real eyebrow-fest.

I mentioned this to Tim, and how I was editing out a lot of eyebrows. He suggested I should just take a leaf out of PG Wodehouse's book, and just put in a line somewhere in the proceedings that "It was one of those big days for eyebrow arching".

I don't think I'd get away with it. Pity.