Six Sentence Sunday - 29 Jul 2012

I'm continuing with my swords & sorcery menage story, Radiq, this week.

Hoping to avoid an encounter with his estranged brother Marron, Radiq makes his way to the Guild House of the Red Mages:

Laying further consideration of his brother's errors aside as unproductive, Radiq turned his horse onto Qed Harraq, the great thoroughfare that ran straight as a lance to the gates of the Guild House, which were barred now during the midday rest.

Radiq's nerves crawled with the sense of being watched; that discomfort angered him, and he called out sharply to the guardhouse, "Make way for the envoy of Crown Prince Vadim, heir to the throne of Thal Thessaly!"

"We know who you are, Radiq, son of Thorrim," replied a voice from the shadowed gate house, "and we know why you have come."

"Then give me the answer I seek, and I shall be on my way," Radiq shot back.

"The answer is Guild Master Marron's to give," replied the faceless voice as the gates slowly rose.

Marron, Guild Master—great gods—what have I gotten myself into?


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'Til next time!
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Published on July 28, 2012 23:35 Tags: six-sentence-sunday, wip, writing
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message 1: by Christine (new)

Christine Warner Terrific six...love how your words flow.


message 2: by C.C. (new)

C.C. Williams Christine wrote: "Terrific six...love how your words flow."

Thank you, Christine!


message 3: by Elin (new)

Elin Ooh, whoop-de-do, sounds like Radiq's in for even more of an awkward meeting with his brother.

I'm a very viual reader and I'm getting some very nice mental images from this, particularly of the fortified Guild House, all in a Marrakech Spice Seller palette. :)


message 4: by C.C. (new)

C.C. Williams Elin wrote: "Ooh, whoop-de-do, sounds like Radiq's in for even more of an awkward meeting with his brother.

I'm a very viual reader and I'm getting some very nice mental images from this, particularly of the f..."


Elin, you are SO on the mark! Love the photo! Thanks!


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