Kibbles And Bits

[image error] I’m receiving feedback for Breakthrough since I ran the two-day free download event. It is difficult to ascertain any patterns. Example: some have said there is not enough development of some characters.
My response is some characters are developed in Breakthrough while others in Opening. No way I could give all characters their due in book one as Breakthrough is not a cozy mystery. So be patient as characters fight for face time in Opening.
Then there are those who said there was too much ch...