Countertransference - Chapters 19 & 20

Writing in multiple POVs through this novel has been a great learning experience. But it also means that the bulk of the edits that I have planned now are to separate my characters so they actually feel distinct. It turns out that’s a hard task to accomplish on your first draft! I think next time I’ll do some more character mapping first so I can establish each of their voices, and see if that helps to keep the edits lighter. Right now it seems very daunting to comb through each chapter to find ...