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I understand. I’ve been there. The pull of porn enthralled me, then ensnared me and finally enslaved me. Jesus never abandoned me but I was too blind, too afraid and too ashamed to seek out the help I needed.  As you read this book, you will see that you and I are so much alike.

I’m not a psychiatrist nor a psychologist.  But I understand.  I know what it’s like get to the point where you think you will never break free. Practically every day I meet another guy who is drowning in lust, stuck on what feels like the eternal hamster wheel of compulsive addiction. 

If after more than thirty years of being caught up in the lies of porn I found freedom then you can too.  In this short book I’ll share with you the answers I found and the strategies I used to finally put pornography in the rearview mirror.

I chose to write using a pen name in order to share my most intimate thoughts while maintaining my privacy.  This is not a book of statistics on porn.  If you picked this book up, I imagine you are personally acquainted with this problem.  You or someone you know is struggling, perhaps drowning, as a result of the compulsive use of pornography.

My aim is to share my story as you examine your own story.  I have done my best to be concise, practical, and helpful while being truthful, impactful, and straight to the point.  I pray that in these pages you will find hope —hope for a better tomorrow; hope for a new and better you!

There is HOPE for anyone enslaved by sin, because Jesus came to set the captives free.

Learn how to fight lies with the truth.See how you can take control of your thoughts and your mind.Begin using your own personal “Battle Plan” today.Practice intentional living.God has already provided you with everything you need for your new life.Use the discussion questions at the end of each chapter with your group.

Freedom is a glorious gift from above!  Let the jailbreak begin!

Introduction to the book:  Jesus Is Better Than Porn