Six Sentence Sunday: A Compromising Situation

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This week's snippet is from the opening chapter of Oracle. Here, a mysterious gunman surprises his victim, Vincent, in the middle of his carnal activity (Warning: Some sexual content):

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"C-can you wait…" Vincent's fingers trembled as he continued to fumble with his trousers. The fact that he still had an erection made zipping up all the more difficult.

God, my nuts hurt. His testicles felt like they were about to burst from all the unreleased semen.

The gunman jammed the pistol into Vincent's crotch.

"I said move," he growled, every word dripping with malice, "now."

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