Discoveries

One thing about writing without a firm outline is that I discover a lot. Most discovery is good, fun, and keeps my stories fresh. I mentioned some of that last time with Alemin wanting to laugh in dire circumstances.

But sometimes, I discover things that just need a lot of work to be successful. That’s where I am with Prisoners of the Wailing Tower. I have a few character names, but I still have to working out everyone’s appearance, from facial features to their clothing. Their personalities are vaguely coming into focus.

The prison itself needs a lot of “construction,” as well. It’s called The Larder, as most people believe the tyrant Dar-Gothull will eventually devour the souls of the prisoners. In this setting many rules about what the prisoners can and (mostly) can’t do, and punishments if those rules are challenged. Or maybe just random punishments to keep them scared.

I’ve never been in prison myself, but I have an idea of what that must be like. I need to do some research, though, so I’m not relying on tired stereotypes.

You know what, though? Since I have you all here, maybe I’ll outline the rules for The Larder. Maybe some of you have had the unfortunate experience of prison yourselves. So these are the restrictions the warden, Ar-Lizelle, lays out out when Alemin arrives:

No magic. These are dangerous and insane wizards, so that’s obvious.No talking. They don’t want the renegades plotting together.When spoken to, answer with the full truth. Playing clever word games will get you a beating at least.No fraternizing with the guards. Some mages can be incredibly persuasive and there have been escapes in the past.Remain in your cell unless ordered out for work. Again, this cuts down on opportunities for scheming.Keep your cell scrupulously clean. There should be nowhere to hide forbidden items, like books.Work if you want to eat. Work will be menial chores such as washing dishes, scrubbing floors, pitching out the stables.

Well, what do you think? Am I forgetting anything important?

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