I've set aside my WIP for a week to revise a proposal I'd...

I've set aside my WIP for a week to revise a proposal I'd sent in to my editor.  She liked it but her suggestions were spot-on.  Yes, I know the hero and heroine don't even meet until page 85!  Something must be done about that.

This story is modern and historical.  I think I'm going to call it a modern historical.  And as with historicals, there is much information to be given to the reader at the beginning.  I recall the good old days of historicals when the writer was offered much more lei...