Why I use Chapter Titles #WriterWednesday #AmWriting
The majority of fiction novels do not have chapter titles but, rather, stick with a rather boring (at least in my opinion) numbering system. I’ve always used chapter titles for my fictional writing. I started using titles as my first novel, Unforeseen Consequences, is told from the perspective of four different protagonists and has three different timelines. I needed those titles, so I wouldn’t confuse myself while writing! (Yes, writers can literally lose the plot.)
As I increased my online presence, I started getting review requests from other indie authors. I noticed that the majority of these novels did not contain chapter titles. Still, I trudged on using chapter titles. In fact, I started spending more and more time on them. Why? Why waste hours and hours of valuable writing time figuring out chapter titles? What purpose do chapter titles serve?
Attract Readers. This is the most obvious reason to use chapter titles. An interesting title can hook a reader by being entertaining. I started using this method when I decided to try my hand at writing chick lit. I included funny chapter titles, anything from a song title to a funny quote, to get a giggle from the reader. In Fat Girl Begone!, for example, I included a ‘positive thought of the day’ as the chapter title. These were funny, little tidbits that foreshadowed the events to occur in the chapter.
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Direct your storyline. Chapter titles can also aid in moving the plot along. You can string the various elements of your plot together to escalate tension. I tried something like this in my cozy mystery, Bring Your Own Baker. This is how it turned out:
Start with a teaspoon of terror
Mix in a dash of honesty
Stir in some friendship
Spoon in a heap of intruder
Let the mixture rest until bubbling
Beat in a bit of confusion
Fold in a wallop of subterfuge
Add a surprise visit
Pour in a heaping tablespoon of Intervention
Increase the heat until steaming
Combine with a pinch of sneaking around
Add in a hefty dose of annoyance
Mix in an idea
Combine with a bit of snooping
Spoon in a surprise visit
Weigh in a dollop of anger
Beat in a game of chance
Whip the mixture together until a hint of an idea appears
Measure in an arrest record
Throw in a bit of va-va-voom
Whip until the mixture sizzles
Throw in some male posturing
Measure in a surprise girlfriend
Pour in a pinch of attempted control
Level a dose of scheming
Cream together with a secret spy mission
Turn up the heat
Stir in some snooping
Dust with a forced confession
Enjoy with the adult beverage of your choice
Clarify your story. As writers we have outlines, plot charts, and character briefs to keep the story clear in our heads. Readers have none of those visual aids available. If you’re writing a complicated story (perhaps in a fantasy world), using chapter titles can help readers to understand the story more clearly. You can keep the title to something simple such as Germany, 1933 or make it more intriguing by simply stating, Sometime in the past. Now, sometime in the past isn’t that clarifying, but clarifying your story doesn’t mean you have to give away the entire plot!
Do you use chapter titles? If not, why not? If so, how do you chose your titles? Want more about chapter titles? You can read the top 10 chapter titles (according to the Independent) here.


