Tuesday Technique: Redundancies
**Squeak** Sorry, I seem to be confusing Tuesday with Sunday.
So, redundancies. This is where you write something, then overwrite it: "The water completely surrounded us." Well, yeah. "Surrounded" is a complete action. Take out "complete" and you have a tighter sentence: "The water surrounded us."
No comments have been added yet.
Natasha Deen's Blog
- Natasha Deen's profile
- 184 followers
Natasha Deen isn't a Goodreads Author
(yet),
but they
do have a blog,
so here are some recent posts imported from
their feed.
