The Archimage’s Fourth Daughter – Chapter 2

Here is chapter two. Constructive comments are greatly appreiated.


The Magic Portal


Briana grasped the chairback of the wizard seated in front of her. The massive round table in the center of the council chamber had been removed to make more room for spectators. Alodar sat in the very center of the row of chairs, leaning forward as eager as all the rest. On either side like pieces in a board game were arrayed the most senior practitioners throughout all of the Erthe: thaumaturges, alchemists, magicians, sorcerers, and wizards from Procolon, the southern kingdoms, and even Arcadia from across the great ocean. All those seated wore their robes of office: scarlet red, brown, white, deepest blue, grey, and black. At the far left she even recognized one of her childhood tutors, Bramdal, the Master Sorcerer.


The finery denoted in which of the five distinct crafts each master was proficient, but even without them once could tell. The eyes of the sorcerers were deep and piercing, able to enchant others with their charms and see far in space in time. Haughty and unyielding as steel, the faces of the wizards seemed almost to dare demons from another realm to challenge them for dominance.


Although they wore pristine and unblemished garb reserved for ceremony, the alchemists’ hands were soiled and blotched with stains from the exotic substances they manipulated to produce sweetbalms and potions of love. The magicians had a faraway look, always contemplating the rituals from which came swords, mirrors, and rings of true magic.


The lowly thaumaturges were the friendly ones, eager artisans hoping for a few coins in exchange for raising heavy beams to the top of new tower or cause trees to drop their fruit all on the same day. Five distinct skills, each with its on disciplines. Only one had mastered them all.


The chamber was as somber as a tomb. Wall frescos had long since faded centuries ago. Heavy curtains blocked any incoming daylight. On the other side of the room, tall sconces with multiple arms upraised with flickering candles illuminated a small, hastily constructed platform.


No one spoke.


Standing at the chairback on Briana’ left was a young man still in his teens. He flexed his grip and looked nervously about. Obviously, this was his first time.


“It will be all right,” she whispered to him and smiled. “All we have to do is stand erect and look serious, no matter what is said.”


She returned her attention to her own thoughts. No idea of merit on how to proceed with the problem of the encaged demon had come. Perhaps the thin slip of stone did not have to be removed from the cage. Perhaps it could be dissolved instead. But universal solvent was too dangerous to try. Even though the struts defining the cage were of magic infused metal, perhaps they would also slag into the liquid before it had reached the limit of what it could carry. The demon would be released.


Or perhaps her mind had figured out what to do, and she was unaware of it. A light sorcerer’s enchantment might expose the thoughts that dwelt deep within her. On the other hand, a powerful wizard — not her father certainly —  could be enlisted to help…


As a muffled chime from a clock in an adjacent room marked the hour, the air above the stage started to shimmer, at first barely perceptible, but then with increasing violence like smooth water encountering rapids, it distorted more and more until the blank wall behind was no longer visible.


A door took shape within the swirl, solidified, and, after a few heartbeats more, swung open. Briana gasped, as did more than one master, even some nearing a hundred years of experience. Wrapped from head to toe as if for burial, a figure stepped forward onto the stage and with effort raised one arm in a sign of greeting. He was shaped like a human in every respect: head, neck, torso, arms and legs, hands and feet, but the coverings hid every feature. Not thin sheets of linen but bulky strips from what looked like brilliant white woolen blankets swirled around the entire body. No eyes or mouth could be seen. In their place were opaque goggles and below them a circle of thin parchment where there would have been a mouth. Bulky gloves covered his hands. So this was the purpose of the formal council meeting, a parlay with the one that had brought the tome.


“You may call me Randor, Randor of the Faithful.” A tinny voice in a strange accent vibrated from the paper beneath the glasses. “Do you understand everything in the volume left for you? Are you confident that you can work the controls?”

“Yes, the high council has studied the contents,” Alodar answered. “And if your doorway had not appeared so suddenly and unannounced a year ago, they would have no credibility.”


Briana watched the visitor intently as did all the others. The being that stood before them must be of such grossness that he dare not appear in his natural form, she thought. In the writings that had been left, there were illustrations of what looked like men — beings that could easily pass without notice here on Erthe. But there were no pictures at all of any other type of creature, no hint of what unwinding the swathing would reveal.


She should not even have been allowed to see the book after it was deposited in the great library for study by the masters, but the page had told her how to bypass the safeguards for a single kiss. Before she had stumbled upon the first clue leading to the encaged demon that started to consume all of her time, she had spent many late evenings reading and rereading what the tome contained.


“I have asked you a direct question,” the visitor said. “I expect a direct answer.”


“We have questions as well,” Alodar’s tone hardened. “Why did you leave this book with us that speaks of another world in the cosmos? Is that where you are from?”


Two questions rather than a single answer,” Randor said. “Your race is an impertinent one.” One of the enveloped hands slowly waved the concern away. “But no matter. It is one of the reasons why you were chosen.


“Our entire race is not exiled on the orb of which I speak. We, the Faithful remain pure. Only the Vanquished of my kind, the ones who call themselves the Heretics Who Proclaim the Truth, have been imprisoned on the hellish world described in the text. The descriptions in the tome concern only the primitive natives, not ourselves. We judged that such information would make your own journeys more efficient. You would not have to spend the time relearning what we had gleaned from so many trips ourselves.”


“The Vanquished?” Alodar asked. “Our own journeys?”


“The heretical crimes committed by those now banished is a matter of no concern to you. And yes, we, the Faithful, have made the journey many times, once every hundred or so of your years for some ten times or more. Now, we grow, let us say —  less able to guard against the possibility of the return of contamination.”


“Over a millennium!” the magicians with the neatly trimmed goatee exclaimed. “You live that long?”


“No, as individuals, we normally do not. Only the exiles wear rings of eternal youth — and only if they so elect.”


“A ring of eternal youth!” the magician grabbed at his beard. “Then the suspicion in our guilds is correct. One can be made! Your magicians have done so. What is the ritual? How is it performed?”


“Some say that we should have killed them.” Randor ignored the outburst. “But that would be only a passing satisfaction. Instead, as of our last visit, the Vanquished remain imprisoned as we planned. Originally eleven hundred were entombed; now only some seven hundred remain alive.


“Death is swift and is but a shadow of the agony of an eternity of captivity. Death is too gentle a fate for what they continue to experience. The only way they could escape from their confinement is by the use of the one of the crafts. And for that, our sorcerers enchanted them all, forced them to forget everything they knew about any of the arts when they were defeated. By now, the despair of their situation should have caused them all to end their existences by their own hands. It is so exquisite for us to contemplate. Ones so proud reduced to ending defiance by the exercise of their own crumbling will.”


“If they have remained in captivity for so long, then why not accept the situation for what it is?” asked the wizard seating in front of Briana. “Not bother to check on how they fare anymore?”


Randor hesitated a second time. “Because,” he said at last. “Because there is a possibility, however slight, that the sorcery might slowly wear off. All of the skill in the arts by the Vanquished might eventually return gradually, and then, using magic they might escape.


“The natives of the orb are quite backward,” he continued. “As far as we have detected, they employ none of the arts at all. So, evidence of a large enough use of the crafts by the Vanquished before they had regained their full power would be a trigger — a trigger to take more drastic action against them. The chances are small, but all of us that remain are too concerned with other things to continue with the task.


“And so, here is our proposition. Moving among the natives will be no problem for your kind. That is why you have been selected.


“All we ask you to do is to check periodically for evidence of any incantations, charms, or other crafts, and then do what is necessary to snuff out the practices. Catch the banished as they emerge. It will be easy enough using the mature proficiency of your own crafts. In exchange, this magic portal is for yours to use according to your own desires. In an instant, you will be able to travel across your great ocean for a meeting such as this. Send crops or even men-at-arms to wherever they are needed with but a few steps.”


“But the writings say that only a single person can use the portal at one time,” Briana burst out. “To transport an army would take days.”


All the masters in the room turned to stare at Briana, now very well aware of her presence. “Oops! Sorry, Dad!” She blushed.


Alodar frowned, but chose for the moment to ignore the interruption. He returned his gaze to the bundled visitor.


“This portal has great power,” he said. “Great disruptive power for any society that uses it —  perhaps a curse rather than a boon.”


“It is most ingenious magic,” a magician said. “One end of the portal connects to the realm of demons without the need for flame. The other does likewise. By placing the two entrances properly, we can connect two places anywhere throughout our realm.”


“Yes, the opportunity to explore,” an alchemist said. “A chance to visit other worlds, exchange formulas and harvest exotic ingredients that here are rare.”


“Trade and exchange,” a thaumaturge chimed in. “Erthe could become the commercial center for our entire universe. We all would prosper.”


“Progress cannot be stopped, Archimage Alodar,” Bramdal said. “One way or another, each step forward has to be addressed, and undesirable consequences dealt with when they occur — as you and this high council have done many times before.”


Alodar was silent for a hundred heartbeats. He lowered his chin onto his chest to think.


What decisions her father had to make all the time, Briana thought. No wonder he has become so tired and overworked&thinnsp;— so irrational in some of his decisions. He needed help. Why couldn’t he see that she was the one who could be his aide?


“It is decided,” the Archimage said finally, raising back up his head. “We accept the offer.”


The masters around Alodar began burbling like brooks breaking the surface for the very first time. No voice raised in objection.


Briana’s thoughts raced. This was an easy task! She remembered the instructions about controlling the portal. They were quite simple. Snoop around a few places to see if there was any craft being performed and report. A two or three day job at the most. Perhaps this could be the task that would open her father’s eyes to how useful she could be. And then with the wedding no longer looming, she could figure out about the demon and even further enhance her standing.


“When will you make the first journey?” the visitor asked.


“The traveler has not yet been chosen,” Alodar said, a hint of irritation entering his voice. “But he will be soon enough to satisfy your desire.”


“Then I return now to my peers. Their purity will refresh. The parchments that have been given to you contain the coordinates of the world that imprisons the exiles.”


Without anything further, Randor returned the portal and shut the door. It shimmered again for a moment and then was still.

Alodar stood and faced the masters. “We will meet again in seven days. Bring with you candidates for who is to be the journey taker. We will discuss and then decide.”


A page entered the chamber and gave a note to the Archimage. He read it and scowled.


He looked in the direction of the wizard on the far right. “All are dismissed — all except one, that is. Briana, please remain. Your fiancé is here on an unannounced visit.


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message 1: by John (new)

John Cionfolo I am so happy to see you continue this series. The Magic by Numbers series and Master of the Five Magics specifically is one of the key novel(s) that got me into fantasy.
The first two chapters of this new work have me intrigued and I look forward to seeing a complete work. However, I have two concerns:
1. There seems to be a disconnect between Chp. 1 & 2. These show two separate isolated events, but other than having the same character involved. I feel like I need more information.
2. It seems like Alodar is a little too quick to make a deal with an entity whose people seem to demonstrate a particular cruelty and vindictiveness towards another group over religion. Is Randor's culture actually an oppressive and evil society? Why is no one considering this? Or is everyone so greedy to get the new magical portal that they do not care if they are making "a deal with the devil"?


message 2: by Lyndon (new)

Lyndon Hardy John wrote: "I am so happy to see you continue this series. The Magic by Numbers series and Master of the Five Magics specifically is one of the key novel(s) that got me into fantasy.
The first two chapters of..."


Great comments, John. Keep them coming.

Lyndon


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