Logline Help!

This amazing journey from novel to screenplay is filled with so many twists and turns it’s difficult to know where it stands from day to day. The editor returned the full screenplay with lots of comments and suggestions – enough to keep my busy for quite some time!

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Book 1

But you know my mind is ALWAYS one step ahead of the rest of me. The Vortex needs a logline – a one line summary to answer the question: What is it about? I’ve come up with some half decent ones and some really bad ones, then Les reminded me that most people don’t work in a bubble. Most great ideas come from brainstorming.

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Book 2

 

That’s where you, my brilliant village, come in! I need loglines or just phrases that can be turned into loglines for The Vortex. This is the best of what I’ve come up with so far:

For three kids, their summer vacation into the country leads to a Skunk Ape kidnapping, mermaid sacrifice and goblin wars when they find themselves in an active cryptozoological vortex.

Now I want to know what you can come up with!

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Book 3