Needs More Conflict

I've been working on writing the next Aledan Series novel for a few weeks now.  Most of the key scenes are written, but now I need to go back and flesh it out. Lara's story came together pretty well, although it still needs some work. Brother Jamerin's story kind of falls flat.  He's got some hot love scenes, and that's about all.

There is not enough conflict and not enough inner turmoil. He's such a good boy and a really good man---and he's BORING . Boring is the kiss of death for an...