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February 5, 2015
Chalice Option A: Up
Chalice Option A: Up
Without anything more to guide you, you shrug and decide to head up the stairs. As you climb, the roar of the waterfall grows until it throbs in your ears.
Because of the overwhelming thrum of sound, you don’t immediately hear the other noise. Some sixth sense stands your hair on end, making you look over your shoulder.
The stairs are empty except for the steady blue glow but as you stand there perfectly still, you catch a scraping like metal on stone. You hold your breath, hoping it’s your imagination, but just as you’re about to turn around, the sound comes again. A barely perceptible scraaaatttccchh below the roar of water.
Your teeth feel like you ran your nails against a stick of chalk. You back up until your shoulders hit the outside wall. Then you slowly sidestep up the stairs, swinging your eyes up and down to keep everything in sight.
Out of the corner of your eye, you catch a shadow. With the ever-steady, blue glow, the shadow’s faint, just a shade darker blue on the wall below you. When you look directly at it, you can’t make it out but when you turn your head and glance out of the corner of your eye, it’s there, like a flicker of light on a window.
You continue sidestepping upward and keep your head tilted so you can see that faint but darker shade of blue. It follows you up the stairs, growing bigger by infinitesimal amounts.
The stairs end and you find yourself on a broad balcony with a river cutting through the middle of it to run over the edge and
Photo Courtesy of Arthur Rousseau with Hope for Haiti.
plummet into the cavern below. The river flows from the cavern wall to your left. At the other end of the balcony is a solid wall. No more stairs, no more rooms. It’s just the balcony and the river.
You’ve nowhere to go but you’re sure whatever’s following you will catch up soon. With an effort of will you keep the image of a sharp-toothed drake out of your head.
A shimmer in the water catches your eye. You have to squint to make it out under the waves but right at the edge of the waterfall you see the wavery outline of a cup.
The Chalice.
Approaching the edge of the balcony, you keep from looking over the edge into the chasm below only by keeping your eyes firmly on the cup in the water. It isn’t laying on its side like you expected but standing up in the water, creating a small eddy around its bowl.
You lay on your stomach at the edge of the river and reach into the rush of water. The current pulls hard and you tilt your body to keep it from pulling you toward the chasm.
As your fingers close over the cool crystal of the Chalice, a grunting roar comes from behind you. You glance back.
Sharp toothed barely touches the surface of this monster’s description. Its teeth hang over its lips almost to its chin. The scales along the legs and back come to points like the spines of a plant. Golden eyes glitter at you with horrible malice.
The drake breaths in a heavy gust of air and then huffs out a small bit through its nostrils. Gouts of blue flame sprout from it and you’re pretty sure the drake smiles as its chest expands on an even bigger intake of air.
You’ve nowhere to go except into the water. Do you…
Aa. Dive over the Waterfall?
Or
Ab. Swim Upstream?
Blessings and see you next week =)
Jennifer
February 3, 2015
Chalice
Welcome to a new adventure! The last one ended quite well for you. Let’s hope things go as well this time=)
Thanks for stopping by and hope you enjoy.
Chalice
The fog’s dense white mass obscures everything but a five-foot circle around you. It makes finding the cave difficult but finally you hear the soft roar of the water falls inside, echoing out of the cave’s mouth like a deep exhale of breath.
You approach the shhh-haaa of water falling on soft feet. Sound carries all too easily in the valley and you’re not the only thing out and about. You breathe heavy air and wish for the kiss of wind. There is none. Drops of water bead on your cheeks like the fog’s shedding on you, cold and clammy, but you ignore the discomfort.
A dark shape looms ahead in the otherwise unbroken gray. A few more steps and you see it’s the cave. Inside hides the Chalice, a
cup of solid crystal that, according to legend, lends the drinker perfect skin. In normal circumstances, its very uniqueness would make it valued by treasure hunters.
However, your purposes are far more personal than money. Back in the village waits your little sister. She hides in her room, nursing her bruises from a few days earlier when she tried to venture a trip to the store and was beaten for looking like a monster.
Even being her sibling doesn’t keep you from shuddering sometimes when she’s not looking. She lacks color, completely. Which makes her eyes, slightly tinted red, all the more disturbing. But she never complains, never yells at you for looking normal, never stops making your breakfast or folding your clothes simply because she can and she knows you’re out working to support her because no one will hire her.
If anyone deserves better, it’s her. When the traveling tinker mentioned the chalice when he saw her, you listened. This isn’t the first time you’ve gone on a wild chase in hopes of helping your sister, but this might be the most dangerous.
The Chalice is protected, the tinker warned, by creatures known as drakes. They hide in the fog and you never hear them coming, or so the tales told. What truly caught your attention about the tinker’s story, though, was that you recognized the valley it described. It was a place you’d been to before.
As you step into the dark cave, you try not to imagine the drakes tracking you into the confined space. The idea of being caught in the rocky tunnels with gouts of flame chasing you isn’t exactly your ideal way to go.
You trail your fingers along the rough wall. The air smells stale and musty and the ground squishes like moss beneath your feet. You don’t light a torch even though you brought one. With the fog and the otherwise solid dark, a torch would stand out like a beacon to anything around.
Your fingertips hit empty space. The wall falls away, not naturally, but as though someone cut it with a knife. Upon further exploration, you find the wall turns a sharp corner and becomes perfectly smooth beneath your touch.
You continue on and the ground goes from soft and squishy to hard and flat. A burnt smell singes the back of your nostrils. It feels similar to if you inhaled the heavy smoke from a campfire. You swallow and keep a cough from escaping your throat.
The smooth wall ends and, just ahead, you feel a wooden door. You find the handle but hesitate before opening it. Faintly, just under the door, there glows a bluish light.
Photo Courtesy of Arthur Rousseau with Hope for Haiti
Finally, with a steadying breath, you turn the knob and push the door inward.
The blue light makes you squint but you’ve no idea where it’s coming from. It simply lights up the stairs beyond the door.
The stairs lead upward on the right and downward on the left. The upward direction has the word Falls above it. The downward direction has the word Water.
According to the tinker’s story, the Chalice collects the water from the cave’s river, but the story’s not specific as to how this works.
Do you go…
A. Up?
Or
B. Down?
Blessings and see you Thursday =)
Jennifer
January 22, 2015
Performers and Bounty Hunters Option Bb1: Drop a Stage Prop on Him
Performers and Bounty Hunters Option Bb1: Drop a Stage Prop on Him
The Bounty Hunter’s a hard built man. One of those people who, just by looking at him, you know he’s lived a hard life and hasn’t complained about it. Without something to slow him down, you highly doubt you’ll be able to outrun him.
Penknife in hand, you lunge for the rope holding the chandelier in place.
One slice and the rope pops, but it’s not enough to drop the stage prop.
Behind you there’s a grunt of surprise or perhaps rage but you don’t look back to see for sure. You slice at the rope again and it
snaps like a violin string.
Then you look to see what you’ve accomplished.
The chandelier drops with a crash of splintering wood. It catches the Bounty Hunter by the legs and sinks him through the floor.
But he’s not out of the game. With a beast like growl, he pulls one of his swords free and starts to cut himself loose of the wreckage. The intense determination on his face convinces you, you shouldn’t be around when he gets free.
You bolt, jumping off the stage and hitting the ground running in a plume of dust.
Not long after, there’s a thud of feet behind you.
You dart down the next road and randomly start zigzagging your way through the streets.
No matter how sporadic you are though, you can still hear the Bounty Hunter closing on you. The one time you glance back, you see he’s got both swords out now, held in such a way that they aren’t slowing him much.
If he catches you, he’s not going to wait for you to say something. You’re sure he’ll use the swords and gain the bounty with your dead body.
You reach the edge of town sooner than you wanted. There’s a stretch of open ground between the buildings and the trees. By now, though, you doubt even reaching the trees will save you.
But you’ve got to try. You’ve always been a fighter. So you put everything into reaching those pines before the Bounty Hunter catches you.
Breath heaves in and out of your chest and your legs start to shake in exhaustion. You reach the dark trunks just as your legs give beneath you. A few feeble attempts to get to your feet tell you, you’ve got nothing left.
Huddling, you wait for the bite of those swords.
There’s a whoosh…and a heavy thud.
Nothing touches you.
Startled, you look over your shoulder to see a heavy shouldered man standing there. He doesn’t have swords but a heavy cudgel.
“Lenny?”
At Lenny’s feet lays the Bounty Hunter. Out cold with a rapidly growing welt on his left temple.
“Felt good,” Lenny says, giving you a hand up. Then, more serious, “looks like we should find different ground to perform on for awhile.”
You’re so shocked to see him, you just grin wordlessly. He offers you a drink from his flask as he turns you into the trees. You shake your head and he gladly takes a sip for you. “Rest of the troop’s that-a-ways,” he gestures. “Let’s go home.”
You just grin even wider in agreement.
The End
Congratulations! You not only survived but it looks like you’ve got a new family =)
Thanks for joining in the adventure. If you enjoyed this one, look for a whole new adventure starting on the 3rd of February.
Until then blessings,
Jennifer
January 20, 2015
Performers and Bounty Hunters Option Bb: Nod Agreement
Readers decided to trick the bounty hunter into thinking you have the tiara. Let’s see if this gives you the chance to escape!
Performers and Bounty Hunters Option Bb: Nod Agreement
Escaping one man will be far easier than five, you decide, although this man’s hard eyes make you want to shiver.
You nod agreement and a toothy grin breaks out on his rough face. He places a finger to his lips for your silence, and then slices through the rope that holds you to the tree. He leaves your hands tied behind your back.
The two of you head off quietly into the trees. When you think about taking a moment to breathe, he points for you to keep going. The corners of his mouth turn down and his eyes sparkle dangerously. You keep moving.
Finally, after what must be about an hour of hiking, he places a hand on your shoulder for you to stop.
“Where we headed?” he asks.
You’ve been thinking about this the entire time you’ve been walking. Under no circumstances do you want him headed toward the performers. They welcomed you in and helped you every step of the way. You’ve no desire to bring this type of danger to them.
“Didn’t feel safe carrying the thing,” you answer. “Found a good spot to stash it in the last town we performed.”
“Hayden?” he guesses.
You nod.
Without further conversation, he pushes for you to lead the way to Hayden.
***
It’s just after dusk when you reach the edges of Hayden. The town’s small and the only noises along the main drag come from the one tavern on the far side. Everything else sits still like the sidewalks rolled up after dinner and the inhabitants turned blind eyes on the night.
You couldn’t ask for a better situation.
The town’s folk set up a stage in the main square for the performers when they passed through. That was only two days ago and the stage still stands like a skeleton in the gathering shadows.
The bounty hunter gives you a questioning look and you nod toward that hulking structure.
He grunts and shoves you forward. In the dim light from the street lanterns, you catch the dangerous narrowing of his eyes. He’s starting to suspect you. Perhaps it’s because the stage comes apart and, if you hid the tiara there, the chances of someone finding it would be high.
“Old stages like that,” you say, “always tend to have hidey holes. Little boxes tucked into the planking where performers can pass news to other troops without the town’s folk knowing. Handy when you want to hide something. Especially when there aren’t many troops in these parts.”
The man grunts again. You’ve no idea if you allayed his fears or not but you don’t want to press your luck, so you keep your mouth shut.
The bit about hidey-holes isn’t entirely untrue. However, you could care less if this stage actually has one. What you care about is the stage is broken…kind of.
Lenny found the default in the wood in the middle of his juggling act. He went straight through the flooring. He didn’t break it. He fell through because two of the boards were set on pivots for some long forgotten magician’s show. The great part about it though, is there wasn’t a way to escape from under the boards without an assistant on the outside.
You reach the stage without running into anyone. On the way, you slide Mira’s penknife into your palm. If something goes wrong, you’d prefer to have your hands free.
The knife’s tiny and cutting through the rope makes for slow work but you can’t make large gestures without the Hunter noticing
anyway, so you keep at it until you feel a slight give in the tension around your wrists.
The planking of the stage thuds softly under your boots. The Hunter, although he’s got heavy boots on too, moves silently. You try to ignore how disturbing this is.
“Where’s this hidey-hole?” he asks.
You tilt your head toward the back of the stage where there’s a slight roof to allow for props.
He takes five steps until he’s at the corner you just indicated.
You stomach hits your throat. He just walked directly over the spot Lenny fell through. With sinking realization, you conclude the town’s folk must have fixed the stage. That’s why it hasn’t been taken down yet.
He’s looking at you, waiting for further instructions. The glitter in his eyes tells you he’s seriously starting to suspect you’ve been lying.
With little time to consider, you see there’s a stage chandelier directly above him. If you move fast enough, you might be able to drop it on him. Or you can run. There might be a few places you can hide if you get a big enough lead on him.
Do you:
Bb1: Drop a stage prop on him?
or
Bb2: Run for your life?
Blessings,
Jennifer
January 15, 2015
Performers and Bounty Hunters Option B: Escape Later
Everyone voted to wait for a more opportune moment in order to escape. Let’s see it this turns out to be a good idea. =)
Performers and Bounty Hunters Option B: Escape Later
The thought of sitting still and simply waiting for a better moment sticks in your throat like dry bread you can’t quite swallow. However, the sentry keeps stirring like he’s fighting to stay awake, which means he’s looking you’re way more often than you’d like.
You decide to bide your time even though every day of travel brings you closer to a very angry King.
You thought working in the palace would be the perfect job for you. However, when the princess lost her tiara and blamed you, it
turned into a nightmare. Now, the King won’t stop until you’re found and punished. You don’t even want to guess at the reward these hunters were in for when they returned you.
But there’s at least a week in between now and when you reach the capital if you head directly there. That should be more than enough time to find a different escape.
You relax against the tree, letting the press of the penknife against your skin reassure you.
After a while, the sentry stands and wakes another. They switch places, barely glancing your way to make sure you’re still where you should be. You relax back and eventually drift into a light sleep.
You wake to the soft tread of booted feet near you. Squinting up, you see it’s another of the bounty hunters. A quick glance around tells you he must be the current sentry, which means you’ve slept for at least a few hours and missed the last change over.
The man’s heavier than his companions and carries double swords over his shoulders. His mouth droops and his face is soft, reminding you of the few dimwits you’ve met. But the likeness stops there. His eyes glitter with an intelligence that’s more than a little frightening.
He crouches beside you so you’re eye to eye. Then he holds up the wanted poster with your likeness drawn in the middle. With a
thick finger, he points to the word tiara.
“You give me this, I let you go,” he whispers so softly you barely pick up his words.
You don’t have the tiara but he doesn’t know that. Can you play it off long enough to escape?
Do you…
Bb. Nod agreement?
Or
Bc. Shake You Head in Refusal?
Vote below and we’ll see you next Tuesday as the story continues!
Blessings,
Jennifer
January 13, 2015
Performers and Bounty Hunters
Welcome to a whole new adventure! Read on and, in the comments, vote for how you’d like to proceed. Choose wisely, for there are all sorts of unsavory types in the world. =)
Performers and Bounty Hunters
The night chirps with the familiar sounds of crickets and frogs. You lay on your back enjoying the cloudless expanse of stars winking at you like they’re old friends.
To your left, Lenny snores softly under his wagon. You can tell by the gentle rumble of it that he didn’t drink tonight. It wasn’t loud enough to be his drunken snore.
On your right, Mira shuffles around putting everything away before she settles in for the night. Except for her perpetually hunched form, Mira’s ageless and her movements are sure and subtle, quiet enough not to wake Genna and Roy with their newborn.
Genna and Roy sleep in their wagon across from where you lay. In about an hour or so, Regan, the newborn, will start to fuss but this is becoming a common sound for everyone and only Genna tends to wake to it anymore.
For the moment, the world slumbers peacefully. This is the most relaxed you’ve been in a long while.
You met the traveling performers six months before in a small town outside the capital. When you asked to accompany them, they didn’t question you or treat you with suspicion although traveling performers are looked on as the dregs of society. No one asked to join them unless something was wrong.
But they never pried, never asked about your past, never looked at you with speculative eyes even when the king’s soldiers passed through every town they performed in passing out fliers with your likeness drawn on them.
Instead, they painted you like a performer, gave you small tasks in each of their acts, and paraded you around in front of the soldiers like one of their own. If you hadn’t been so tense the whole time, you would have found it funny.
The soldiers slowly faded the farther you got from the capital. At first, you planned to leave the performers once you thought it was safe to be on your own, but you’ve come to feel at home with them and each day you come up with an excuse to continue on with them.
A rustling in the trees disturbs the night’s chirping. The crickets fall silent. Mira goes still with the teakettle midair in her hand. She hisses and pitches the kettle into the trees. There comes the clank of mettle on mettle.
This wasn’t just Mira being eccentric, there was someone out there. You roll to your feet, shoving free of your bedroll as you move.
The night erupts into the rough shouting of men and the startled cries of those suddenly wakened. Regan’s pitiable cries pierce the night above the other sounds.
At first you fear it’s the King’s soldiers but as one of them lifts a lantern to view the small clearing, you see the men surrounding you wear a mismatch of armor and carry everything from short swords to axes to bows.
Not soldiers. Mercenaries?
The man with the lantern spies you and holds up a sheet of paper. His lips split in a grin that displays his stained teeth.
“You’re gonna make us a pretty penny,” he says.
Bounty hunters, you realize with a sinking in your stomach.
The man gestures and one of his men grabs your arms and ties your wrists behind you.
Lenny steps forward and hesitates. He’s a big man and, for once, sober, but he’s no match for five at once. He gives you an apologetic grimace.
Several of the bounty hunters laugh at him and then they shove you into the forest away from your friends.
“Wait!” Mira calls. She runs toward you, stooping more than usual and twisting her face to make it look like that of an old hag. It’s one of her performance faces.
The bounty hunters are caught off guard enough that she crashes into you and gives you a hug. “Safe travels.” She sniffs and steps away just as one of the men moves to grab her.
He misses and, before he can try again, Mira’s moving back toward her wagon with an exaggerated shuffle.
***
It’s a long night. Finally, at sunrise, the bounty hunters stop for some breakfast and tie you to the trunk of a pine. You’re bemoaning that the princess’ cruelness has caught up to you when one of the bounty hunters approaches and drops a chunk of bread by your knee. He unties you and gestures at the bread, then he sits back to watch you eat.
The bread’s hard and, although you’re hungry, the knot in your stomach makes the little you eat roll in your stomach like a boat
tossed at sea. You hold the rest of the bread up for the man to see and then tuck it into your pocket.
Your fingers encounter something other than the bread there.
You keep a smile from bursting across your face. Good old Mira. From the long, cylindrical shape of the object, you can tell it’s her penknife.
Before withdrawing your hand, you slide the knife into your sleeve, trusting your leather bracelet to hold it against your skin.
Not long after, the bounty hunters tie you to the pine again and lay down to catch a few winks.
One stays awake and finds a large rock to sit on to keep watch. His back is to you but you’re sure any sound and he’ll swing around to check on you.
You could cut the ropes now and try to slip away but admittedly, your woodcraft isn’t great and it’d be a bit of luck to escape without the man hearing.
Or you could wait, hoping for a more opportune moment, maybe at night, to slip away.
Do you attempt…
A. Escape now?
Or
B. Escape later?
Blessings,
Jennifer
January 6, 2015
Witness Protection
I’m loving the snow on the ground. To me, it just epitomizes this time of year. So, even though I posted this story a while ago, I figured it might be fun to revisit it.
I hope 2015 has kicked off to a fabulous start for everyone=)
Witness Protection
Wind howled around the eves from the time the sun went down to just before it rose. The cabin was solid enough to take the beating but Gwen lay awake listening to the banshee scream.
Then it went still and left her ears ringing. She stretched, groaning as the chill sept into the covers.
Get the fire going. Awe no! I forgot the water. Gwen rubbed her forehead as she slid out of bed. She pulled on her wool socks before touching feet to floor. Even still, the cold bit through to make her toes ache. Donning more layers than just her wool underwear, she even added her cloak after watching her breath cloud around her face.
Then she set to lighting the kindling she’d prepared the night before in the hearth. Sweet warmth built from the small flames. Gwen sighed with an ‘ah’ as she held her hands close. She rubbed her fingers until they turned red and then shoved them into her mittens. Last she wrapped her scarf around the lower portion of her face.
Water.
Leaving the cabin exposed Gwen to the brutal cold but she’d forgotten to fill the water the day before. Brant left her oatmeal. She needed water to eat. He hadn’t apparently considered how cold the next month would be when he set her up at the cabin.
Making her way to the river was a slow process. The wind pushed the snow into drifts and each step sunk Gwen up to her knees in the crusty white.
Snow was supposed to be powdery. Gwen had always thought so but not here. Here it froze so solid that each step dented in a small crater with a crunch.
Nearing the river, she slowed and tapped the snow ahead with the water bucket. After three taps, the snow slid and was swept away by the river.
She learned her first day at the cabin that the wind shoved the snow-turned-solid-ice into a berm over the river. She’d fallen through the berm into water so frigid it’d taken her a good thirty seconds to convince her lungs to draw breath. Then it’d taken a whole day to warm herself by the fire in the cabin.
She’d used too much wood that day. Now she was rationing it. Curse Brant for not educating her on the dangers of the mountain cold. She would just melt snow for water instead of going to the river but melting snow required more wood. Curse Brant again. One mistake and now she feared freezing before Brant returned for her.
He had to return for her. No one else would look for her here. That was kind of the point. But now she feared being left, forgotten. She was just an asset to Brant, nothing more. If, for some reason, he no longer needed her to testify, would he come back for her? She couldn’t say. She didn’t really know the man.
Drawing water, Gwen set the bucket on the bank beside her and watched the horizon as the sun peeked over.
That was the one thing she loved about this place. Those first rays of sun touched the snow with gentle fingers, making it sparkle, pristine and untouched. It made her heart ache that something so beautiful could exist without being seen by most souls.
She’d never seen it herself until Brant left her here. He’d acted like this place was the most natural, common place in the world. Perhaps, for him, it was. He was, after all, the King’s ranger.
The King tasked him with hiding her, the only witness to the theft of the crown, until the man she’d named as guilty was found. Brant guessed it’d take a month, at most.
Gwen sighed. This was her fourth week. She’d marked out the days on a piece of firewood.
Being a noblewoman, she’d never spent so long with only her thoughts. Her thoughts scared her. Was she always so superficial?
Probably. After a month to consider, she could admit it. At least to herself. Sighing, Gwen started and scrunched her face.
“Not again!” Her breath had frozen to her brows and lashes. It was the one drawback to covering her face with a scarf. If she sat too long, her breath was directed up against her face and froze to any exposed hair.
Picking up the water, which had already formed a fine crust of ice, Gwen rubbed her face with one mittened hand to break the frost from her brows as she retraced her steps to the cabin.
It probably wasn’t much warmer inside but to Gwen it felt like a toasty bath, just lacking steam.
Breaking the crust of ice, she poured water into the kettle and added a piece of wood to the fire. She warmed the water just enough to make the oatmeal bearable and then sat back to eat breakfast.
When she went home, she swore she’d never touch oatmeal again.
***
Gwen added her cloak on top of the bed that night. Two more days. She’d give it two more days. If Brant didn’t return by then, she’d head out on her own.
The wind started its howl just as sleep was pulling her under. She started at the shrieking and then flopped back, groaning. After a month, she should be used to the high keening around the eves. She wasn’t, though. It made her ears ring something fierce every morning after listening to it all night.
Finally a light sleep pulled her under but the howl crept into her unconscious mind.
A banshee chased her through the snow, hissing and spitting as it clawed its way closer. Snow, crusted hard, crunched into deep craters beneath her running feet. Crunch, crunch, crunch, thunk.
Gwen bolted upright.
The door.
She rolled just in time to avoid the man who’d barreled into the cabin.
She knew who he was without seeing his face. She’d never seen another person with ears like his. Floppy lobes due to gauging, which elongated his already long ears. They framed his face like he was part elephant.
She’d described all of that for the King but apparently it hadn’t been enough for here was the thief, not the ranger.
Hitting the floor on hands and knees, Gwen darted for the hearth where a metal poker leaned. She didn’t make it.
The thief caught her ankle and yanked her back. Digging her nails into the wooden floor, she reached, while twisting and kicking, for something to fight with. Her fingers latched onto cold metal.
Swinging with all her strength, Gwen slammed the water bucket against the man’s head. The water sloshed across the floor and the bucket hit with a crunch. Thudding to his knees, the thief groaned. He released her ankle to hold his head. Gwen snatched her cloak from the bed, shoved her boots on and raced out the door as it swung in the wind.
He’ll kill me.
But so would the cold.
As soon as Gwen left the cabin’s walls, the buffet of wind almost knocked her over. It whipped her hair across her face in angry gusts from the east.
Can’t stay exposed.
One hand to the cabin wall, she struggled around to the west side. Stepping into the windbreak from the cabin, she glanced back. Even with the dark and the blowing snow, she could tell her foot prints were gone. One plus to the insane weather.
But the windbreak of the cabin wouldn’t keep her from freezing. Already her fingers were numb to the point she could barely hold her cloak around her shoulders.
She couldn’t wander out from the cabin either. Between the dark and the snow, she’d be lost and dead long before morning.
Bury myself it is then.
She’d heard of people surviving storms by digging snow caves and hiding inside. She’d scoffed at the stories. A snow cave couldn’t possibly be warm enough to keep a body alive, could it?
Hopefully the stories were true. They were her only option unless she wanted to go back and face the thief. She’d broken his nose. She was sure of it, but that hadn’t knocked him out. He’d be after her soon.
Kneeling, Gwen dug into the drift of snow at the corner of the cabin. She used the edges of her cloak to protect her hands but even still, the exertion warmed her and it was enough to tell her hands were taking a beating.
Finally, having a large enough hole to fit her body into, Gwen packed the walls until they were slick and then curled into the small cave. It wasn’t comfortable or warm but in comparison to the outside, it was protected.
Gwen’s hands throbbed. Folding her cloak and hood tight to her skin, she tucked her hands into her arm pits where her core could keep them bearably warm.
She lay shivering as she tried to gauge how late the night was. How long before morning? She didn’t really have a way to tell although the wind always died down before sunrise. She hoped it’d died down soon.
Something dripped onto her cheek. Gwen frowned and touched the roof of her cave. Her fingers came away wet. The roof was slicked with a fine layer of water from her body heat. As her hands searched, she found a point where the water was collecting. Packing the point smooth, Gwen shifted her cloak some to keep her dry.
Brant gave her the garment when he left her. He said at the time that a water resistant cloak lined with fur could mean life or death out here. She’d chuckled, thinking she wouldn’t be here long enough to need it. Now she could kiss him for it…or stab him for not catching the thief.
Shivering continued to rack her body. She clamped her teeth closed but that only kept her teeth quiet. It didn’t keep her body from shuddering.
Curse men altogether.
It was a man who stole the crown. Then it was a man who ordered her ‘kept safe.’ Then a man who dumped her out here and called it good.
If a woman had been the thief, she would have had the courtesy not to be seen. Or if the Queen decided on ‘safe,’ if would’ve involved joining her ladies-in-waiting, not trudging to a cabin in the middle of no where.
Her thinking wasn’t fair but while she shivered in the night and listened to the wind, she didn’t care.
***
The wind died down and the silence woke her. It was that time of morning just before the sun rose when the air was brittle with cold and eerily quiet.
Crunch.
Gwen sucked in a breath and held it.
Crunch.
The sound of a slow step in the crusted snow. The thief was up and moving.
Crunch.
He wouldn’t know she stayed by the cabin, would he? Perhaps he thought the night and cold killed her. It should have. Her, a noblewoman, with no knowledge of the frozen mountains.
Crunch.
The sound was way too close. Gwen couldn’t move.
Her cave crumbled as he pulled on her cloak. The thief had the edge of the garment in his hand. He yanked again and Gwen cried out as he reached for her.
Her arms and legs ached, screamed at her as she flailed after being curled in a ball for hours.
He yanked a third time and the cloak slid from her shoulders.
Gwen stood and spun away but had to brace a hand on the wall when her legs protested. Bloody hand prints trailed the wall, leading right to her spot.
She shoved away and tried to run toward the river but her steps sunk her up to her knees until she was crawling and scrambling instead of running.
The thief yelled but she couldn’t, and didn’t really want to, hear his words. He was chasing her. With his longer legs, he was gaining fast.
Seeing the river ahead, Gwen stopped and crouched, turning as the thief reached for her.
She grabbed his extended hand and pulled. Caught off guard, he stumbled. He stepped once, then twice to regain his balance. Gwen braced her legs and shoved him past her.
He stepped onto the ice berm over the river. It held for a second before crumbling and then he disappeared into the river, windmilling his arms on the way down. He bobbed to the surface farther down with his mouth open in a silent shriek.
Gwen could relate to that feeling.
The thief caught on a rock down mid-stream.
“Now I’ve got to fish him out.”
Gwen shrieked and spun.
Brant stood there eyeing her.
“He’s your problem,” she said and then clamped her teeth together. Her body was still shivering. She couldn’t feel her feet and her hands felt like she’d grated them on a wash board. She flexed her fingers and finally figured out why she’d left bloody hand prints. She tore several nails in her struggle with the thief. Probably left grooves in the cabin floor.
“That he is. I’m glad he finally took the bait.”
“Bait? I was bait!” Gwen wanted to scream and yell and maybe hit him but all that came out was a lot of half words. “yo–cruel–why-” She gave up. She was railing at him in her underwear and shivering so hard she couldn’t keep her teeth quiet.
Spinning, she trudged back to the cabin for her clothes. She didn’t offer to help him retrieve the thief.
***
By the time Brant came in, he and the thief were both drenched and shivering with ice forming in their hair.
Gwen had built up the fire to thaw her frozen limbs and the cabin was toasty warm. She found the sled Brant must have hauled in. Half of it was covered with wood. The other half more food stuffs. He would have left her here as long as it took to lure the thief in apparently.
But he brought firewood, for which Gwen could almost forgive him his plans. Almost.
Seeing both men come back crusted with ice cooled her ire even more. They deserved the experience, both of them, and it was satisfying to see, but she didn’t begrudge them the warmth in the cabin either. It wasn’t like she wanted them dead.
The thief now had a crooked nose to add to his elongated ears. He sat in the corner of the cabin with his shoulders slumped and head down.
After a silent breakfast of oatmeal, Gwen helped Brant clean the cabin.
“Time to go,” he announced and then frowned at her. “Where’s the cloak I gave you?”
“Out under the snow,” Gwen announced, “where I spent the night while this man enjoyed the cabin.”
Brant finally had the decency to look sorry. “He was here all night?”
“Duh genius. Your master plan had a few glitches. Although I could kiss you for the cloak. It saved my life.”
He looked flabbergasted. Gwen’s day was looking up. She turned away to go find the cloak. She planned to enjoy one last morning of the sun sparkling off the snow before she returned home.
The End.
Blessings,
Jennifer
Witness Protection Part Three
And now for the end of the story. I hope 2015 has kicked off to a fabulous start for everyone=)
Witness Protection Part Three
The wind died down and the silence woke her. It was that time of morning just before the sun rose when the air was brittle with cold and eerily quiet.
Crunch.
Gwen sucked in a breath and held it.
Crunch.
The sound of a slow step in the crusted snow. The thief was up and moving.
Crunch.
He wouldn’t know she stayed by the cabin, would he? Perhaps he thought the night and cold killed her. It should have. Her, a noblewoman, with no knowledge of the frozen mountains.
Crunch.
The sound was way too close. Gwen couldn’t move.
Her cave crumbled as he pulled on her cloak. The thief had the edge of the garment in his hand. He yanked again and Gwen cried out as he reached for her.
Her arms and legs ached, screamed at her as she flailed after being curled in a ball for hours.
He yanked a third time and the cloak slid from her shoulders.
Gwen stood and spun away but had to brace a hand on the wall when her legs protested. Bloody hand prints trailed the wall, leading right to her spot.
She shoved away and tried to run toward the river but her steps sunk her up to her knees until she was crawling and scrambling instead of running.
The thief yelled but she couldn’t, and didn’t really want to, hear his words. He was chasing her. With his longer legs, he was gaining fast.
Seeing the river ahead, Gwen stopped and crouched, turning as the thief reached for her.
She grabbed his extended hand and pulled. Caught off guard, he stumbled. He stepped once, then twice to regain his balance. Gwen braced her legs and shoved him past her.
He stepped onto the ice berm over the river. It held for a second before crumbling and then he disappeared into the river, windmilling his arms on the way down. He bobbed to the surface farther down with his mouth open in a silent shriek.
Gwen could relate to that feeling.
The thief caught on a rock down mid-stream.
“Now I’ve got to fish him out.”
Gwen shrieked and spun.
Brant stood there eyeing her.
“He’s your problem,” she said and then clamped her teeth together. Her body was still shivering. She couldn’t feel her feet and her hands felt like she’d grated them on a wash board. She flexed her fingers and finally figured out why she’d left bloody hand prints. She tore several nails in her struggle with the thief. Probably left grooves in the cabin floor.
“That he is. I’m glad he finally took the bait.”
“Bait? I was bait!” Gwen wanted to scream and yell and maybe hit him but all that came out was a lot of half words. “yo–cruel–why-” She gave up. She was railing at him in her underwear and shivering so hard she couldn’t keep her teeth quiet.
Spinning, she trudged back to the cabin for her clothes. She didn’t offer to help him retrieve the thief.
***
By the time Brant came in, he and the thief were both drenched and shivering with ice forming in their hair.
Gwen had built up the fire to thaw her frozen limbs and the cabin was toasty warm. She found the sled Brant must have hauled in. Half of it was covered with wood. The other half more food stuffs. He would have left her here as long as it took to lure the thief in apparently.
But he brought firewood, for which Gwen could almost forgive him his plans. Almost.
Seeing both men come back crusted with ice cooled her ire even more. They deserved the experience, both of them, and it was satisfying to see, but she didn’t begrudge them the warmth in the cabin either. It wasn’t like she wanted them dead.
The thief now had a crooked nose to add to his elongated ears. He sat in the corner of the cabin with his shoulders slumped and head down.
After a silent breakfast of oatmeal, Gwen helped Brant clean the cabin.
“Time to go,” he announced and then frowned at her. “Where’s the cloak I gave you?”
“Out under the snow,” Gwen announced, “where I spent the night while this man enjoyed the cabin.”
Brant finally had the decency to look sorry. “He was here all night?”
“Duh genius. Your master plan had a few glitches. Although I could kiss you for the cloak. It saved my life.”
He looked flabbergasted. Gwen’s day was looking up. She turned away to go find the cloak. She planned to enjoy one last morning of the sun sparkling off the snow before she returned home.
The End.
Blessings,
Jennifer
January 1, 2015
Witness Protection Part Two
Happy New Years! And welcome back to the second part of the story. =)
Witness Protection Part Two
Gwen added her cloak on top of the bed that night. Two more days. She’d give it two more days. If Brant didn’t return by then, she’d head out on her own.
The wind started its howl just as sleep was pulling her under. She started at the shrieking and then flopped back, groaning. After a month, she should be used to the high keening around the eves. She wasn’t, though. It made her ears ring something fierce every morning after listening to it all night.
Finally a light sleep pulled her under but the howl crept into her unconscious mind.
A banshee chased her through the snow, hissing and spitting as it clawed its way closer. Snow, crusted hard, crunched into deep craters beneath her running feet. Crunch, crunch, crunch, thunk.
Gwen bolted upright.
The door.
She rolled just in time to avoid the man who’d barreled into the cabin.
She knew who he was without seeing his face. She’d never seen another person with ears like his. Floppy lobes due to gauging, which elongated his already long ears. They framed his face like he was part elephant.
She’d described all of that for the King but apparently it hadn’t been enough for here was the thief, not the ranger.
Hitting the floor on hands and knees, Gwen darted for the hearth where a metal poker leaned. She didn’t make it.
The thief caught her ankle and yanked her back. Digging her nails into the wooden floor, she reached, while twisting and kicking, for something to fight with. Her fingers latched onto cold metal.
Swinging with all her strength, Gwen slammed the water bucket against the man’s head. The water sloshed across the floor and the bucket hit with a crunch. Thudding to his knees, the thief groaned. He released her ankle to hold his head. Gwen snatched her cloak from the bed, shoved her boots on and raced out the door as it swung in the wind.
He’ll kill me.
But so would the cold.
As soon as Gwen left the cabin’s walls, the buffet of wind almost knocked her over. It whipped her hair across her face in angry gusts from the east.
Can’t stay exposed.
One hand to the cabin wall, she struggled around to the west side. Stepping into the windbreak from the cabin, she glanced back. Even with the dark and the blowing snow, she could tell her foot prints were gone. One plus to the insane weather.
But the windbreak of the cabin wouldn’t keep her from freezing. Already her fingers were numb to the point she could barely hold her cloak around her shoulders.
She couldn’t wander out from the cabin either. Between the dark and the snow, she’d be lost and dead long before morning.
Bury myself it is then.
She’d heard of people surviving storms by digging snow caves and hiding inside. She’d scoffed at the stories. A snow cave couldn’t possibly be warm enough to keep a body alive, could it?
Hopefully the stories were true. They were her only option unless she wanted to go back and face the thief. She’d broken his nose. She was sure of it, but that hadn’t knocked him out. He’d be after her soon.
Kneeling, Gwen dug into the drift of snow at the corner of the cabin. She used the edges of her cloak to protect her hands but even still, the exertion warmed her and it was enough to tell her hands were taking a beating.
Finally, having a large enough hole to fit her body into, Gwen packed the walls until they were slick and then curled into the small cave. It wasn’t comfortable or warm but in comparison to the outside, it was protected.
Gwen’s hands throbbed. Folding her cloak and hood tight to her skin, she tucked her hands into her arm pits where her core could keep them bearably warm.
She lay shivering as she tried to gauge how late the night was. How long before morning? She didn’t really have a way to tell although the wind always died down before sunrise. She hoped it’d died down soon.
Something dripped onto her cheek. Gwen frowned and touched the roof of her cave. Her fingers came away wet. The roof was slicked with a fine layer of water from her body heat. As her hands searched, she found a point where the water was collecting. Packing the point smooth, Gwen shifted her cloak some to keep her dry.
Brant gave her the garment when he left her. He said at the time that a water resistant cloak lined with fur could mean life or death out here. She’d chuckled, thinking she wouldn’t be here long enough to need it. Now she could kiss him for it…or stab him for not catching the thief.
Shivering continued to rack her body. She clamped her teeth closed but that only kept her teeth quiet. It didn’t keep her body from shuddering.
Curse men altogether.
It was a man who stole the crown. Then it was a man who ordered her ‘kept safe.’ Then a man who dumped her out here and called it good.
If a woman had been the thief, she would have had the courtesy not to be seen. Or if the Queen decided on ‘safe,’ if would’ve involved joining her ladies-in-waiting, not trudging to a cabin in the middle of no where.
Her thinking wasn’t fair but while she shivered in the night and listened to the wind, she didn’t care.
To Be Finished On Tuesday…
Blessings,
Jennifer
December 30, 2014
Witness Protection Part One
I’m loving the snow on the ground. To me, it just epitomizes this time of year. So, even though I posted this story a while ago, I figured it might be fun to revisit it.
Hope you enjoy and have an amazing New Years!
Wind howled around the eves from the time the sun went down to just before it rose. The cabin was solid enough to take the beating but Gwen lay awake listening to the banshee scream.
Then it went still and left her ears ringing. She stretched, groaning as the chill sept into the covers.
Get the fire going. Awe no! I forgot the water. Gwen rubbed her forehead as she slid out of bed. She pulled on her wool socks before touching feet to floor. Even still, the cold bit through to make her toes ache. Donning more layers than just her wool underwear, she even added her cloak after watching her breath cloud around her face.
Then she set to lighting the kindling she’d prepared the night before in the hearth. Sweet warmth built from the small flames. Gwen sighed with an ‘ah’ as she held her hands close. She rubbed her fingers until they turned red and then shoved them into her mittens. Last she wrapped her scarf around the lower portion of her face.
Water.
Leaving the cabin exposed Gwen to the brutal cold but she’d forgotten to fill the water the day before. Brant left her oatmeal. She needed water to eat. He hadn’t apparently considered how cold the next month would be when he set her up at the cabin.
Making her way to the river was a slow process. The wind pushed the snow into drifts and each step sunk Gwen up to her knees in the crusty white.
Snow was supposed to be powdery. Gwen had always thought so but not here. Here it froze so solid that each step dented in a small crater with a crunch.
Nearing the river, she slowed and tapped the snow ahead with the water bucket. After three taps, the snow slid and was swept away by the river.
She learned her first day at the cabin that the wind shoved the snow-turned-solid-ice into a berm over the river. She’d fallen through the berm into water so frigid it’d taken her a good thirty seconds to convince her lungs to draw breath. Then it’d taken a whole day to warm herself by the fire in the cabin.
She’d used too much wood that day. Now she was rationing it. Curse Brant for not educating her on the dangers of the mountain cold. She would just melt snow for water instead of going to the river but melting snow required more wood. Curse Brant again. One mistake and now she feared freezing before Brant returned for her.
He had to return for her. No one else would look for her here. That was kind of the point. But now she feared being left, forgotten. She was just an asset to Brant, nothing more. If, for some reason, he no longer needed her to testify, would he come back for her? She couldn’t say. She didn’t really know the man.
Drawing water, Gwen set the bucket on the bank beside her and watched the horizon as the sun peeked over.
That was the one thing she loved about this place. Those first rays of sun touched the snow with gentle fingers, making it sparkle, pristine and untouched. It made her heart ache that something so beautiful could exist without being seen by most souls.
She’d never seen it herself until Brant left her here. He’d acted like this place was the most natural, common place in the world. Perhaps, for him, it was. He was, after all, the King’s ranger.
The King tasked him with hiding her, the only witness to the theft of the crown, until the man she’d named as guilty was found. Brant guessed it’d take a month, at most.
Gwen sighed. This was her fourth week. She’d marked out the days on a piece of firewood.
Being a noblewoman, she’d never spent so long with only her thoughts. Her thoughts scared her. Was she always so superficial?
Probably. After a month to consider, she could admit it. At least to herself. Sighing, Gwen started and scrunched her face.
“Not again!” Her breath had frozen to her brows and lashes. It was the one drawback to covering her face with a scarf. If she sat too long, her breath was directed up against her face and froze to any exposed hair.
Picking up the water, which had already formed a fine crust of ice, Gwen rubbed her face with one mittened hand to break the frost from her brows as she retraced her steps to the cabin.
It probably wasn’t much warmer inside but to Gwen it felt like a toasty bath, just lacking steam.
Breaking the crust of ice, she poured water into the kettle and added a piece of wood to the fire. She warmed the water just enough to make the oatmeal bearable and then sat back to eat breakfast.
When she went home, she swore she’d never touch oatmeal again.
To Be Continued Thursday…
Blessings and have a safe and wonderful New Year’s Eve,
Jennifer



