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April 21, 2016
#AtoZChallenge - Go Round the Corner
Yipes! Latest post EVER! But, it's partly late because I got to spend a couple hours with a 3 week old and her mama whom I haven't seen in a while, so.. sorry not sorry.
Super short and not much story progress so I can just get this posted. :P Here you go!
For those who are here for the first time, this is an interactive fiction adventure. I will write a scene every day, and my visitors will vote for where they want the story to go next, by leaving a comment on the post. You can start from the beginning here.
R:
Sir Andrew poked his head around the corner, to see what was there. He found he had a good mental map of the castle somehow, so knew there was a small room nearby. But he couldn't know *who* was nearby. He was relieved to find the small room empty, but for a small table at one end and a window at the other. Across the room were two doors that went through to a hallway.
What should Andy do?Sneak a peek out the window.Sniff around the table to see what's there.or Stealthily proceed through to See what's through the doors.
OK go ahead and vote! I promise to write a bit more for you tomorrow!
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Super short and not much story progress so I can just get this posted. :P Here you go!
For those who are here for the first time, this is an interactive fiction adventure. I will write a scene every day, and my visitors will vote for where they want the story to go next, by leaving a comment on the post. You can start from the beginning here.
R:
Sir Andrew poked his head around the corner, to see what was there. He found he had a good mental map of the castle somehow, so knew there was a small room nearby. But he couldn't know *who* was nearby. He was relieved to find the small room empty, but for a small table at one end and a window at the other. Across the room were two doors that went through to a hallway.
What should Andy do?Sneak a peek out the window.Sniff around the table to see what's there.or Stealthily proceed through to See what's through the doors.
OK go ahead and vote! I promise to write a bit more for you tomorrow!
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If you like what you see, sign up for my email list! New subscribers get a FREE copy of a choose-your-own-adventure style ebook novella called Percy's Armageddon: Pick Your Plot Prequel!
April 20, 2016
#AtoZChallenge - "Quit the Battle, Brave Knight!"
Hi, everyone! I'm back! Still not done with that application, but a good deal closer :)
Wasn't that a fun aside with Dan? That's why I enjoy writing with him so much- he keeps me on my toes! Hopefully we'll have another full-length adventure for y'all sometime soon.
For those who are here for the first time, this is an interactive fiction adventure. I will write a scene every day, and my visitors will vote for where they want the story to go next, by leaving a comment on the post. You can start from the beginning here.
Q:
"Quit the battle, brave knight. Food awaits!" The words echoed through the hallway where Sir Andrew was industriously handling his two captors.
"This is no time for food! Or for quitting!" he shouted to the heavens, "We are trying to rescue the Queen!" He huffed as he lifted a heavy lid onto a conspicuously pink laundry basket that sat in a corner of the castle foyer, sealing one of his serpentine foes inside. He had tied the other snake into knots around an umbrella he'd found in the corner, and dusted his hands as he surveyed his work.
"Now, where do I find my Queen?"
Where do you think he should go?Run further up the stairs toward the top of the tower.Go 'Round the corner to see what other places might be useful.or Try to Rouse some more support in the castle by finding the other prisoners.
Bombs away! You know the drill - tell me in the comments below what you think our brave Knight should do next, and I'll write the next scene when I get up in the morning! :)
Voting has closed on this post! Please click here to move to the next post in the story :)
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Wasn't that a fun aside with Dan? That's why I enjoy writing with him so much- he keeps me on my toes! Hopefully we'll have another full-length adventure for y'all sometime soon.
For those who are here for the first time, this is an interactive fiction adventure. I will write a scene every day, and my visitors will vote for where they want the story to go next, by leaving a comment on the post. You can start from the beginning here.
Q:
"Quit the battle, brave knight. Food awaits!" The words echoed through the hallway where Sir Andrew was industriously handling his two captors.
"This is no time for food! Or for quitting!" he shouted to the heavens, "We are trying to rescue the Queen!" He huffed as he lifted a heavy lid onto a conspicuously pink laundry basket that sat in a corner of the castle foyer, sealing one of his serpentine foes inside. He had tied the other snake into knots around an umbrella he'd found in the corner, and dusted his hands as he surveyed his work.
"Now, where do I find my Queen?"
Where do you think he should go?Run further up the stairs toward the top of the tower.Go 'Round the corner to see what other places might be useful.or Try to Rouse some more support in the castle by finding the other prisoners.
Bombs away! You know the drill - tell me in the comments below what you think our brave Knight should do next, and I'll write the next scene when I get up in the morning! :)
Voting has closed on this post! Please click here to move to the next post in the story :)
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April 19, 2016
#AtoZChallenge - Pull Him Off-Balance
Hey y'all! My super-awesome co-author Dan is filling in for me for a couple days while I finish writing my application to grad school. I leave you in good hands. Have fun!
See you Wednesday,
~AJ
For those who are here for the first time, this is an interactive fiction adventure. I will write a scene every day, and my visitors will vote for where they want the story to go next, by leaving a comment on the post. You can start from the beginning here.
P:
In a moment of refreshing clarity and precision, Andy's mom gauged her attacker's speed and angled her body slightly away from him to conceal her secret weapon, the umbrella. She loosened her grip on it, allowing it to slide through her hand until she could feel the band around the top of it. Then she held it fast, waiting like a viper for her moment to strike.
He ran forward, pulling a wicked-looking knife out of his pocket as he did. A grin began to steal across his face, only to disappear into an expression of astonishment as Andy's mom struck, swinging her umbrella out from behind her with lightning speed and a swordmaster's accuracy. She caught his heel with the hooked handle and pulled with all her might as she twisted it, causing his knees to buckle as his body suddenly shifted direction.
He fell, hard, onto the flagstones and she could hear his "Wufff" as the breath was knocked out of his lungs. The knife clattered off into the grass some distance away. Lying supine on the ground, he shook his head as if to clear it, but it was plain his vision was still swimming.
Andy's mom stepped forward, placed the heel of a shoe against one of his splayed arms and, taking hold of the hook-handle of her umbrella, positioned the pointed end firmly against the would-be assailant's Adam's apple. In the most authoritative Slovak she could muster, she declared, "Yield," and the man stopped struggling.
Moments later friendly agents spilled out of the castle gate and saw, to their surprise, Andy's mom standing like a victorious Sir George over the vanquished dragon. The special agent in charge was among them, and he immediately strode past her to assist Mrs. Klímová -- her eyes beaming in admiration -- out of the vehicle a second time. As he did, to Andy's mom he said, "Pack your things."
Caught off-guard she responded, "Sorry, what was that, sir?"
"Pack your things, agent, he said, flashing her a look of approval, as he led Mrs. Klímová by the hand. "You're headed to Crimea in the morning to begin field operative training."
Andy's mom smiled at the memory, scooping sliced peppers into a simmering pan. Those were interesting days.
She checked the oven. Dinner would be ready soon. She walked to the kitchen doorway, where she could hear the faint sounds of plastic smashing against plastic over and over from Andy's room. Knowing that it would take him a while to respond when so engrossed, she called out.
What should Andy's mom say?"Quick, Andy, wash your hands and set the table!""Quiet down those monsters and get ready for dinner!""Quit the battle, brave knight. Food awaits!"
Hey there, I hope you enjoyed my slight detour for the last few days. AJ will be back at the helm tomorrow. It's been my abundant pleasure to write for you. I wish you all the best of luck in your adventures to come!
~Dan
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If you like what you see, sign up for my email list! New subscribers get a FREE copy of a choose-your-own-adventure style ebook novella called Percy's Armageddon: Pick Your Plot Prequel!
See you Wednesday,
~AJ
For those who are here for the first time, this is an interactive fiction adventure. I will write a scene every day, and my visitors will vote for where they want the story to go next, by leaving a comment on the post. You can start from the beginning here.
P:
In a moment of refreshing clarity and precision, Andy's mom gauged her attacker's speed and angled her body slightly away from him to conceal her secret weapon, the umbrella. She loosened her grip on it, allowing it to slide through her hand until she could feel the band around the top of it. Then she held it fast, waiting like a viper for her moment to strike.
He ran forward, pulling a wicked-looking knife out of his pocket as he did. A grin began to steal across his face, only to disappear into an expression of astonishment as Andy's mom struck, swinging her umbrella out from behind her with lightning speed and a swordmaster's accuracy. She caught his heel with the hooked handle and pulled with all her might as she twisted it, causing his knees to buckle as his body suddenly shifted direction.
He fell, hard, onto the flagstones and she could hear his "Wufff" as the breath was knocked out of his lungs. The knife clattered off into the grass some distance away. Lying supine on the ground, he shook his head as if to clear it, but it was plain his vision was still swimming.
Andy's mom stepped forward, placed the heel of a shoe against one of his splayed arms and, taking hold of the hook-handle of her umbrella, positioned the pointed end firmly against the would-be assailant's Adam's apple. In the most authoritative Slovak she could muster, she declared, "Yield," and the man stopped struggling.
Moments later friendly agents spilled out of the castle gate and saw, to their surprise, Andy's mom standing like a victorious Sir George over the vanquished dragon. The special agent in charge was among them, and he immediately strode past her to assist Mrs. Klímová -- her eyes beaming in admiration -- out of the vehicle a second time. As he did, to Andy's mom he said, "Pack your things."
Caught off-guard she responded, "Sorry, what was that, sir?"
"Pack your things, agent, he said, flashing her a look of approval, as he led Mrs. Klímová by the hand. "You're headed to Crimea in the morning to begin field operative training."
Andy's mom smiled at the memory, scooping sliced peppers into a simmering pan. Those were interesting days.
She checked the oven. Dinner would be ready soon. She walked to the kitchen doorway, where she could hear the faint sounds of plastic smashing against plastic over and over from Andy's room. Knowing that it would take him a while to respond when so engrossed, she called out.
What should Andy's mom say?"Quick, Andy, wash your hands and set the table!""Quiet down those monsters and get ready for dinner!""Quit the battle, brave knight. Food awaits!"
Hey there, I hope you enjoyed my slight detour for the last few days. AJ will be back at the helm tomorrow. It's been my abundant pleasure to write for you. I wish you all the best of luck in your adventures to come!
~Dan
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If you like what you see, sign up for my email list! New subscribers get a FREE copy of a choose-your-own-adventure style ebook novella called Percy's Armageddon: Pick Your Plot Prequel!
April 18, 2016
#AtoZChallenge - Obscure Her Path
Hey y'all! My super-awesome co-author Dan is filling in for me for a couple days while I finish writing my application to grad school. I leave you in good hands. Have fun!
See you Wednesday,
~AJ
For those who are here for the first time, this is an interactive fiction adventure. I will write a scene every day, and my visitors will vote for where they want the story to go next, by leaving a comment on the post. You can start from the beginning here.
O:
The trailing car was catching up a lot faster than Andy's mom hoped. Plainly they knew their way around Bratislava better than she did. She made a mental note to get out of her office more.
Finding an opportunity, she slowed down near an intersection flanked by tall buildings and whipped into a left turn, then left again before her pursuers could catch sight of her. Retracing their route back to Bratislava Castle a block over, she tried to breathe calmly to slow her heart rate. She could barely hear for its heavy pounding. With her head on a swivel, she watched for any sign that her ploy had been discovered.
"Did we lose them?" Mrs. Klímová asked, reverting to Slovak in a near-whisper.
"I think so. Let's get you back to the castle," Andy's mom replied in kind, checking her mirrors. The rain showed no sign of letting up and the dark was thorough, so she didn't dare turn off her lights as an added precaution. Nevertheless, they arrived at Castle Bratislava without any sign of pursuit.
She parked the car, stepped out, and hurried around to assist Mrs. Klímová.
"Aren't you something, miss." Mrs. Klímová chuckled as she handed Andy's mom her umbrella back. "I don't believe I've ever been so ably protected!"
Andy's mom was about to make some demur comment about not being a field agent, when Mrs. Klímová's sharp intake of breath alerted her and she turned to see another trenchcoated man, who had apparently been left behind as a sentry, sprinting toward them across the castle walkway!
What should Andy's mom do?Put up a hue and cry to alert someone.Punch the assailant in the face.Pull him off-balance with the umbrella.
Bonus: photo of ACTUAL Bratislava Castle, by user LMih on Wikipedia.
Have a wonderful Monday!
~Dan
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If you like what you see, sign up for my email list! New subscribers get a FREE copy of a choose-your-own-adventure style ebook novella called Percy's Armageddon: Pick Your Plot Prequel!
See you Wednesday,
~AJ
For those who are here for the first time, this is an interactive fiction adventure. I will write a scene every day, and my visitors will vote for where they want the story to go next, by leaving a comment on the post. You can start from the beginning here.
O:
The trailing car was catching up a lot faster than Andy's mom hoped. Plainly they knew their way around Bratislava better than she did. She made a mental note to get out of her office more.
Finding an opportunity, she slowed down near an intersection flanked by tall buildings and whipped into a left turn, then left again before her pursuers could catch sight of her. Retracing their route back to Bratislava Castle a block over, she tried to breathe calmly to slow her heart rate. She could barely hear for its heavy pounding. With her head on a swivel, she watched for any sign that her ploy had been discovered.
"Did we lose them?" Mrs. Klímová asked, reverting to Slovak in a near-whisper.
"I think so. Let's get you back to the castle," Andy's mom replied in kind, checking her mirrors. The rain showed no sign of letting up and the dark was thorough, so she didn't dare turn off her lights as an added precaution. Nevertheless, they arrived at Castle Bratislava without any sign of pursuit.
She parked the car, stepped out, and hurried around to assist Mrs. Klímová.
"Aren't you something, miss." Mrs. Klímová chuckled as she handed Andy's mom her umbrella back. "I don't believe I've ever been so ably protected!"
Andy's mom was about to make some demur comment about not being a field agent, when Mrs. Klímová's sharp intake of breath alerted her and she turned to see another trenchcoated man, who had apparently been left behind as a sentry, sprinting toward them across the castle walkway!
What should Andy's mom do?Put up a hue and cry to alert someone.Punch the assailant in the face.Pull him off-balance with the umbrella.
Bonus: photo of ACTUAL Bratislava Castle, by user LMih on Wikipedia.
Have a wonderful Monday!~Dan
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If you like what you see, sign up for my email list! New subscribers get a FREE copy of a choose-your-own-adventure style ebook novella called Percy's Armageddon: Pick Your Plot Prequel!
April 16, 2016
#AtoZChallenge - Nudge Her Into the Car
Hey y'all! My super-awesome co-author Dan is filling in for me for a couple days while I finish writing my application to grad school. I leave you in good hands. Have fun!
See you Wednesday,
~AJ
For those who are here for the first time, this is an interactive fiction adventure. I will write a scene every day, and my visitors will vote for where they want the story to go next, by leaving a comment on the post. You can start from the beginning here.
N:
"Mrs. Klímová, I'm terribly sorry for the inconvenience, but get back in the car."
"I'm sorry, dear?" responded the lady. "I'd rather go in-"
"No time!" Andy's mom interrupted, shoving on Mrs. Klímová's arm abruptly. It sent her teetering back into rear seat of the vehicle, umbrella and all. Andy's mom slammed the door and stopped for a moment to glare at the approaching men, who paused upon realizing they'd been made before picking up their pace.
Mrs. Klímová, finally realizing something was amiss, locked her door and peered out the rear window. Andy's mom hopped in the passenger front door and looked at the driver, only to realize to her dismay that he was a doughy boy, barely eighteen, in an ill-fitting chauffer's uniform. Hardly someone she could count on in a tough spot.
"Out!" she barked, in clipped Slovak. He turned to look at her, foggily uncomprehending. Andy's mom mulled her word choice again, and tried a different tack. "Go, find help," she said, reaching over him to push open his door. She all but ejected the confused man, slid ungracefully over into the driver's seat, and slammed on the gas. The driver's door slammed itself shut as the car lurched into motion.
"They're almost here!" said Mrs. Klímová from the back seat, alarmed. Andy's mom looked up in the mirror to see that the men had nearly reached the car, but they weren't about to catch up now! She continued to watch, belatedly worried about the young man, but saw that the two pursuers had turned and hailed another car, whose lights flickered on maybe a hundred meters down the road.
Muttering something unprofessional under her breath, Andy's mom turned her attention to her driving and realized they were coming quickly to an intersection. She racked her brain for her limited knowledge of Bratislava's streets and tried to make a decision in the dark and rain.
What should Andy's mom do?Obey protocol and find somewhere to report in.Outdistance her pursuers in the city streets.Obscure her path by looping back around.
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See you Wednesday,
~AJ
For those who are here for the first time, this is an interactive fiction adventure. I will write a scene every day, and my visitors will vote for where they want the story to go next, by leaving a comment on the post. You can start from the beginning here.
N:
"Mrs. Klímová, I'm terribly sorry for the inconvenience, but get back in the car."
"I'm sorry, dear?" responded the lady. "I'd rather go in-"
"No time!" Andy's mom interrupted, shoving on Mrs. Klímová's arm abruptly. It sent her teetering back into rear seat of the vehicle, umbrella and all. Andy's mom slammed the door and stopped for a moment to glare at the approaching men, who paused upon realizing they'd been made before picking up their pace.
Mrs. Klímová, finally realizing something was amiss, locked her door and peered out the rear window. Andy's mom hopped in the passenger front door and looked at the driver, only to realize to her dismay that he was a doughy boy, barely eighteen, in an ill-fitting chauffer's uniform. Hardly someone she could count on in a tough spot.
"Out!" she barked, in clipped Slovak. He turned to look at her, foggily uncomprehending. Andy's mom mulled her word choice again, and tried a different tack. "Go, find help," she said, reaching over him to push open his door. She all but ejected the confused man, slid ungracefully over into the driver's seat, and slammed on the gas. The driver's door slammed itself shut as the car lurched into motion.
"They're almost here!" said Mrs. Klímová from the back seat, alarmed. Andy's mom looked up in the mirror to see that the men had nearly reached the car, but they weren't about to catch up now! She continued to watch, belatedly worried about the young man, but saw that the two pursuers had turned and hailed another car, whose lights flickered on maybe a hundred meters down the road.
Muttering something unprofessional under her breath, Andy's mom turned her attention to her driving and realized they were coming quickly to an intersection. She racked her brain for her limited knowledge of Bratislava's streets and tried to make a decision in the dark and rain.
What should Andy's mom do?Obey protocol and find somewhere to report in.Outdistance her pursuers in the city streets.Obscure her path by looping back around.
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If you like what you see, sign up for my email list! New subscribers get a FREE copy of a choose-your-own-adventure style ebook novella called Percy's Armageddon: Pick Your Plot Prequel!
April 15, 2016
#AtoZChallenge - Mugging Escorts
Hey y'all! My super-awesome co-author Dan is filling in for me for a couple days while I finish writing my application to grad school. I leave you in good hands. Have fun!
See you Wednesday,
~AJ
For those who are here for the first time, this is an interactive fiction adventure. I will write a scene every day, and my visitors will vote for where they want the story to go next, by leaving a comment on the post. You can start from the beginning here.
M:
"A mugging! That's what this situation calls for!" Andy exclaimed, and in the other room his mother looked up from slicing potatoes.
"A mugging, Andrew?" She murmured to herself. "My my, what trouble you're getting into." She smiled as she slid the potatoes into the pot, remembering the old days -- and her old life -- in the secret service.
It was the late 80's, in Bratislava, in a castle above the river in the middle of the city, where she had been stationed as an intelligence officer to assist in protecting a diplomat. Or was it a dissident? Andy's mom suddenly felt a bit of uncertainty.
Shaking her head, she searched for clues in her memory. She remember it was night, and raining, when the person-of-interest's car drove up. The security detail was preoccupied with something, so they had sent Andy's mom -- though this was many years before he was born, of course -- down to the car to meet the woman, a Mrs. Klímová. It was the night that Andy's mom first got a taste of action, a night that changed the course of her life.
"Welcome, Mrs. Klímová," she said through chattering teeth in her best Slovak, keeping her coat closed with one hand and holding out an umbrella as the middle-aged woman -- only a little older than I am now -- stepped out of the car.
"Oh, don't worry, dear, I speak English fine," the woman responded in a comforting American accent, taking the umbrella in her own hand. "Let's get inside, shall we?"
At that moment, Andy's mom finally noticed the two men in trenchcoats who had appeared under a streetlight. The dark silhouettes were walking towards the women already, hands in their pockets and purpose in their strides, and Andy's mom's heart leapt into double-time.
They had the air of muggers, but what would muggers be doing here? The castle was in a rather isolated district of Bratislava!
What should Andy's mom do?Make Noise to call for help.Take Note of their posture and prepare to attack.Nudge Mrs. Klímová back into the car and take off.
Hello! It's a pleasure to write for you. Please leave a comment indicating your one vote for the direction of the story, and I will tally them tonight to prepare tomorrow's post!
~Dan
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If you like what you see, sign up for my email list! New subscribers get a FREE copy of a choose-your-own-adventure style ebook novella called Percy's Armageddon: Pick Your Plot Prequel!
See you Wednesday,
~AJ
For those who are here for the first time, this is an interactive fiction adventure. I will write a scene every day, and my visitors will vote for where they want the story to go next, by leaving a comment on the post. You can start from the beginning here.
M:
"A mugging! That's what this situation calls for!" Andy exclaimed, and in the other room his mother looked up from slicing potatoes.
"A mugging, Andrew?" She murmured to herself. "My my, what trouble you're getting into." She smiled as she slid the potatoes into the pot, remembering the old days -- and her old life -- in the secret service.
It was the late 80's, in Bratislava, in a castle above the river in the middle of the city, where she had been stationed as an intelligence officer to assist in protecting a diplomat. Or was it a dissident? Andy's mom suddenly felt a bit of uncertainty.
Shaking her head, she searched for clues in her memory. She remember it was night, and raining, when the person-of-interest's car drove up. The security detail was preoccupied with something, so they had sent Andy's mom -- though this was many years before he was born, of course -- down to the car to meet the woman, a Mrs. Klímová. It was the night that Andy's mom first got a taste of action, a night that changed the course of her life.
"Welcome, Mrs. Klímová," she said through chattering teeth in her best Slovak, keeping her coat closed with one hand and holding out an umbrella as the middle-aged woman -- only a little older than I am now -- stepped out of the car.
"Oh, don't worry, dear, I speak English fine," the woman responded in a comforting American accent, taking the umbrella in her own hand. "Let's get inside, shall we?"
At that moment, Andy's mom finally noticed the two men in trenchcoats who had appeared under a streetlight. The dark silhouettes were walking towards the women already, hands in their pockets and purpose in their strides, and Andy's mom's heart leapt into double-time.
They had the air of muggers, but what would muggers be doing here? The castle was in a rather isolated district of Bratislava!
What should Andy's mom do?Make Noise to call for help.Take Note of their posture and prepare to attack.Nudge Mrs. Klímová back into the car and take off.
Hello! It's a pleasure to write for you. Please leave a comment indicating your one vote for the direction of the story, and I will tally them tonight to prepare tomorrow's post!
~Dan
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If you like what you see, sign up for my email list! New subscribers get a FREE copy of a choose-your-own-adventure style ebook novella called Percy's Armageddon: Pick Your Plot Prequel!
April 14, 2016
2016 #AtoZChallenge - Loud and Demanding
For those who are here for the first time, this is an interactive fiction adventure. I will write a scene every day, and my visitors will vote for where they want the story to go next, by leaving a comment on the post. You can start from the beginning here.
L:
"My name is Sir Andrew, from the mammals, and I demand that you release Queen Eileen!"
The Lizard King turned his head toward Andy, and also both of his creepy iguana eyes. His eyes twitched around the room independently as he spoke, "Why should I obey? She is mine now."
"She is not! She belongs to the furry creatures! You must return her or we'll continue to attack the castle."
The King turned one eye to the window, as T-Rex tossed a chipmunk back over the wall. "That's not going well. I tire of you, human."
Sir Andrew put his hands on his hips and did his best impression of his five year old sister and demanded, "Wait! What do you want from us?"
"The Queen. And war."
"But war is bad!" Andy said.
"I am bad. And I am done with you. Guards!"
The two snakes slipped back into the room. One wound his tail around Sir Andrew's arm.
"I'll be back, King!"
"I'll count on it," the King said. He turned languidly back to the scene out side his window and the snake pulled Andy out of the chamber.
What should Andy do?Somehow Make the snakes let go.Mug his snake escorts and get awayor Make a go at heading up the stairs.
OK go ahead and vote! My pal Dan is taking over to write for the next couple days so I can write my grad school application. I leave you in good hands :) Dan will write before he goes to bed tonight, so vote quick!
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L:
"My name is Sir Andrew, from the mammals, and I demand that you release Queen Eileen!"
The Lizard King turned his head toward Andy, and also both of his creepy iguana eyes. His eyes twitched around the room independently as he spoke, "Why should I obey? She is mine now."
"She is not! She belongs to the furry creatures! You must return her or we'll continue to attack the castle."
The King turned one eye to the window, as T-Rex tossed a chipmunk back over the wall. "That's not going well. I tire of you, human."
Sir Andrew put his hands on his hips and did his best impression of his five year old sister and demanded, "Wait! What do you want from us?"
"The Queen. And war."
"But war is bad!" Andy said.
"I am bad. And I am done with you. Guards!"
The two snakes slipped back into the room. One wound his tail around Sir Andrew's arm.
"I'll be back, King!"
"I'll count on it," the King said. He turned languidly back to the scene out side his window and the snake pulled Andy out of the chamber.
What should Andy do?Somehow Make the snakes let go.Mug his snake escorts and get awayor Make a go at heading up the stairs.
OK go ahead and vote! My pal Dan is taking over to write for the next couple days so I can write my grad school application. I leave you in good hands :) Dan will write before he goes to bed tonight, so vote quick!
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April 13, 2016
#AtoZChallenge - The Reptile King
Late post! Busy day. Vote on :)
For those who are here for the first time, this is an interactive fiction adventure. I will write a scene every day, and my visitors will vote for where they want the story to go next, by leaving a comment on the post. You can start from the beginning here.
K:
Andy stood up out of the hay, put his hands on his hips in a brave fashion and said, "I demand to see your King!" Several of the smaller reptiles paused in their running about when he spoke, but did not stop to speak to him or point him in the right way.
So Sir Andrew approached a Triceratops that was using her horns to move logs and sticks into a large pile and said, "My name is Sir Andrew, of the furry creatures, and I demand to see your King!"
The Triceratops snorted and rumbled, "He's in the castle. Enter through that gate and up the stairs. You will find his chambers there." And with that the dinosaur turned back to her work, ignoring the presence of the human inside the castle gates.
Andy ran into the castle and up the stairs. At the door to the chambers were two hooded snakes, with capes draped about their hoods, and bands of gold on their fangs. When Andy walked up he saw a bead of poison form at the point of a fang. He stopped short.
"Hello. My name is Sir Andrew of the mammals. I am here to speak to your King about returning our Queen to us."
One snake entered the chamber and returned shortly saying, "The King isss busssy.. You will ssspeak quickly, or you will feel the pain of my fanggsss..."
Andy bowed slightly, keeping a sharp eye on the snake's position, and entered the chamber.
To Andy's surprise, the King of the Lizards was an Iguana! His bright green stripes seemed out of place against the dark grey of the castle walls as he lounged in a window overlooking the battle. One eye swiveled toward Andy while the other looked at a Pterodactyl delivering a message through the open window.
"Can I help you?" the King said.
"My name is Sir Andrew, from the mammals..." Andy began.
How should Sir Andrew proceed?Loudly demand the return of the QueenSpeak of his Love of the Queen to win the King overor Leave the room, because that guy is scary!
OK! Voting closes at 5:30am MTN/7:30am EDT. You know the drill. Let me know in the comments where you think the story should go, and I will take it wherever you tell me to!
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For those who are here for the first time, this is an interactive fiction adventure. I will write a scene every day, and my visitors will vote for where they want the story to go next, by leaving a comment on the post. You can start from the beginning here.
K:
Andy stood up out of the hay, put his hands on his hips in a brave fashion and said, "I demand to see your King!" Several of the smaller reptiles paused in their running about when he spoke, but did not stop to speak to him or point him in the right way.
So Sir Andrew approached a Triceratops that was using her horns to move logs and sticks into a large pile and said, "My name is Sir Andrew, of the furry creatures, and I demand to see your King!"
The Triceratops snorted and rumbled, "He's in the castle. Enter through that gate and up the stairs. You will find his chambers there." And with that the dinosaur turned back to her work, ignoring the presence of the human inside the castle gates.
Andy ran into the castle and up the stairs. At the door to the chambers were two hooded snakes, with capes draped about their hoods, and bands of gold on their fangs. When Andy walked up he saw a bead of poison form at the point of a fang. He stopped short.
"Hello. My name is Sir Andrew of the mammals. I am here to speak to your King about returning our Queen to us."
One snake entered the chamber and returned shortly saying, "The King isss busssy.. You will ssspeak quickly, or you will feel the pain of my fanggsss..."
Andy bowed slightly, keeping a sharp eye on the snake's position, and entered the chamber.
To Andy's surprise, the King of the Lizards was an Iguana! His bright green stripes seemed out of place against the dark grey of the castle walls as he lounged in a window overlooking the battle. One eye swiveled toward Andy while the other looked at a Pterodactyl delivering a message through the open window.
"Can I help you?" the King said.
"My name is Sir Andrew, from the mammals..." Andy began.
How should Sir Andrew proceed?Loudly demand the return of the QueenSpeak of his Love of the Queen to win the King overor Leave the room, because that guy is scary!
OK! Voting closes at 5:30am MTN/7:30am EDT. You know the drill. Let me know in the comments where you think the story should go, and I will take it wherever you tell me to!
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April 12, 2016
#AtoZChallenge: Jump into the castle!
For those who are here for the first time, this is an interactive fiction adventure. I will write a scene every day, and my visitors will vote for where they want the story to go next, by leaving a comment on the post. You can start from the beginning here.
J:
Sir Andrew surveyed the scene inside the castle walls. A massive T-Rex was near the castle gate, terrorizing all mammalian creatures who came near. His deep roars shook the castle walls. A Brontosaurus took up most of the rest of the main courtyard, with his long tail sweeping across the open area, almost penning the T-Rex into position. Small reptiles ran hither and thither, carrying out various tasks or waiting to be directed. In the close corner of the scene was a giant pile of hay. Sir Andrew ran along the rampart until he was situated just above the pile, took a deep breath to steady himself, and jumped off the wall onto the pile of hay.
"Oof!" he said as he landed clunkily into the pile. A very tiny little reptile came out from its burrow in the hay, looked at him in stark surprise, and scurried off to another corner. Andy burrowed into the hay a bit to further consider his choices.
What should Sir Andrew do?Run into the Keep proper,Walk up to a reptile and demand to see the reptile King,or Do his Knightly duty and start doing away with the reptiles.
I've always wanted to use the phrase 'hither and thither' in a story :D
You know the drill! Vote in the comments below on where you think our hero should go next! Voting closes at 5:30am MDT/7:30am EDT so I can write the next bit before work tomorrow!
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J:
Sir Andrew surveyed the scene inside the castle walls. A massive T-Rex was near the castle gate, terrorizing all mammalian creatures who came near. His deep roars shook the castle walls. A Brontosaurus took up most of the rest of the main courtyard, with his long tail sweeping across the open area, almost penning the T-Rex into position. Small reptiles ran hither and thither, carrying out various tasks or waiting to be directed. In the close corner of the scene was a giant pile of hay. Sir Andrew ran along the rampart until he was situated just above the pile, took a deep breath to steady himself, and jumped off the wall onto the pile of hay.
"Oof!" he said as he landed clunkily into the pile. A very tiny little reptile came out from its burrow in the hay, looked at him in stark surprise, and scurried off to another corner. Andy burrowed into the hay a bit to further consider his choices.
What should Sir Andrew do?Run into the Keep proper,Walk up to a reptile and demand to see the reptile King,or Do his Knightly duty and start doing away with the reptiles.
I've always wanted to use the phrase 'hither and thither' in a story :D
You know the drill! Vote in the comments below on where you think our hero should go next! Voting closes at 5:30am MDT/7:30am EDT so I can write the next bit before work tomorrow!
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April 11, 2016
#AtoZChallenge - Into the fray!
Good morning, everyone! Are you all ready for the second week of A-Z? I hope everyone's Challenge is going well :)
For those who are here for the first time, this is an interactive fiction adventure. I will write a scene every day, and my visitors will vote for where they want the story to go next, by leaving a comment on the post. You can start from the beginning here.
I:
Sir Andrew drew his sword, took a deep breath, and jumped down Into the mass of snakes. They cleared just enough space for his feet to land and he hit the ground swinging. With great precision the dashing Sir began smashing at the heads of his foes! One after another he walloped them with his giant plastic sword and each snake fell prone to his Intimidating sword skills.
It wasn't until there was only one snake left that Andy realized that the squirrel had come down with him and had started pushing each snake off the rampart as he rendered them incapacitated. It was just Sir Andrew, and a giant hooded Cobra.
"Ssssoooo... This iss the great Sssir Andrew... Come to ressscue your Queen. Well. You've beaten my sssssnakess.. Let'ss see how you do with the rest of the reptilessss.." And with that he turned and disappeared into one of the garrets, before Andy could reply.
"Quick, squirrel, let everyone know I've cleared it up here! I'm just going to go.."
Where shall Sir Andrew go next?Jump off the rampart into the castle?Follow that Jerk snake?or Just continue along the rampart to help others get in?
There you go! Leave your vote for what Sir Andrew should do in the comments below! Voting closes at 5:30am MDT/7:30am EDT on Tuesday! Am finding writing in the morning to be working well, so y'all get some extra time. Have a great day!
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If you like what you see, sign up for my email list! New subscribers get a FREE copy of a choose-your-own-adventure style ebook novella called Percy's Armageddon: Pick Your Plot Prequel!
For those who are here for the first time, this is an interactive fiction adventure. I will write a scene every day, and my visitors will vote for where they want the story to go next, by leaving a comment on the post. You can start from the beginning here.
I:
Sir Andrew drew his sword, took a deep breath, and jumped down Into the mass of snakes. They cleared just enough space for his feet to land and he hit the ground swinging. With great precision the dashing Sir began smashing at the heads of his foes! One after another he walloped them with his giant plastic sword and each snake fell prone to his Intimidating sword skills.
It wasn't until there was only one snake left that Andy realized that the squirrel had come down with him and had started pushing each snake off the rampart as he rendered them incapacitated. It was just Sir Andrew, and a giant hooded Cobra.
"Ssssoooo... This iss the great Sssir Andrew... Come to ressscue your Queen. Well. You've beaten my sssssnakess.. Let'ss see how you do with the rest of the reptilessss.." And with that he turned and disappeared into one of the garrets, before Andy could reply.
"Quick, squirrel, let everyone know I've cleared it up here! I'm just going to go.."
Where shall Sir Andrew go next?Jump off the rampart into the castle?Follow that Jerk snake?or Just continue along the rampart to help others get in?
There you go! Leave your vote for what Sir Andrew should do in the comments below! Voting closes at 5:30am MDT/7:30am EDT on Tuesday! Am finding writing in the morning to be working well, so y'all get some extra time. Have a great day!
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If you like what you see, sign up for my email list! New subscribers get a FREE copy of a choose-your-own-adventure style ebook novella called Percy's Armageddon: Pick Your Plot Prequel!
