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August 14, 2015

About The Painting – My Latest Novel

We start our lives as a blank canvas.   It’s our diverse experiences that add color and definition to our painting. Gerald’s world was often harsh and challenging.  Feelings of loneliness and isolation were normal for him. The people in his life didn’t understand him and as a result, often ignored him, or refused to […]
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Published on August 14, 2015 12:54

What if God never painted the humans?

That was a question that was posed to me in a dream and it led me on the most amazing journey… My dream was about a boy named Gerald and he was feeling quite lonely (as was I at the time). I awoke after he completed painting an entire world on a blank canvas from […]
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Published on August 14, 2015 12:51

Starlit Troll’s duck is about to land!

Surprise! Looking up to the sky watching ducks fly by, Hamilton sees something he has never seen before; another troll! Hamilton suddenly realizes he’s not the only troll in the world. Leaping at the chance to learn more, he begs Starlit to stay for a while then introduces her to all of his friends. The […]
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Published on August 14, 2015 12:28

July 13, 2015

All authors suffer from OCS

You are probably wondering what OCS is. It’s a coined diagnosis my husband gave me a while back. It stands for Only Child Syndrome. OCS sufferers are used to getting their way. Without siblings to compete with, you ask for a new toy and get it, primarily because mom can afford one toy just not […]
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Published on July 13, 2015 17:14

July 12, 2015

All Authors Suffer from OCS

You are probably wondering what OCS is. It’s a coined diagnosis my husband gave me a while back. It stands for Only Child Syndrome. OCS sufferers are used to getting their way. Without siblings to compete with, you ask for a new toy and get it, primarily because mom can afford one toy just not […]
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Published on July 12, 2015 12:32

June 25, 2015

A Whitaker Owl Poem

Blessed with talent – that’s how I feel, when I think ’bout what we’ve done is surreal. 10 books and counting – 11 on the way, I do what I love, what a wonderful day! So my illustrator, Leigh A. Klug is not only super talented with her ability to illustrate the most captivating faces she […]
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Published on June 25, 2015 14:48

June 22, 2015

Writing Prompts! “The rain was…”

Hello again. Here’s another writing prompt to get those fingers typing. Have fun with it and leave your few sentences in the comments below. “The rain was coming down so hard…” the windshield wipers simply could not keep up. I had them on high and felt like I was in a submarine under water. I […]
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Published on June 22, 2015 02:18

June 16, 2015

Finding an editor for your book

You’ve written your book. It’s awesome! It’s 300+ pages of excellent story that you are absolutely certain everyone is going to want to read and will love – but is it REALLY finished? Have you edited it?


I’m not talking about using the spelling and grammar check in Word. I’m not talking about reading through it three times yourself and feeling it’s perfect. I’m not even talking about having your best friend read it and telling you it’s perfect.


I’m talking about hiring a stranger who doesn’t care about your feelings, who is a professional editor, get’s paid for his/her editing services, who has gone through your book with a fine tooth comb and polished it.


Do I really need an editor?

No. You can send your manuscript to a traditional publisher who’s reviewer will read it, spot a grammatical mistake and chunk it before getting to page 5.


No, you don’t need to make sure your book is 100% polished and perfect, putting your best foot forward when presenting yourself and your work to some publishing company that is going to spend thousands on marketing for you – because it’s not like you are going to brush your hair or wear a nice outfit to an interview or even brush your teeth… right?


Of course you are going to want it edited!

Yes, that was sarcasm. I have met many people who have read books (even by famous authors) who’ve spotted grammatical mistakes and of those who actually finished the story (many don’t bother) – do you know what they discuss? “Did you see that grammatical mistake on page 134?” “Yeah his editor really let him down.” “I know, I can’t believe he’d put his name on something like that.”


So, yes you need an editor but how do you find one?

Fortunately the web is full of opportunities. Type book editor into a search and find 34 million options. Plus, you could try job websites, like LinkedIn, Freelancers or Monster. Narrow it down by deciding what you need; content editing (plot structure, lagging story, inconsistencies in content) or copy editing (punctuation, grammar, verb tense, spelling, and those things that cause readers to stop reading) or a proof reader (verifying every comma, quote and period is in place and capital letters where they should be).


How do I decide / narrow down the options?

Start dating. Not literally, but most professional editors will edit a paragraph, page or number of words to show you what they can do. Some will hit the spell check. Some will rewrite complete sentences, some will make suggestions that will better the story, some will use words you don’t even know. You have to find one that does what you want for your book.


Most editors charge by the word, not the hour; somewhere around 2-6 cents. Others charge by the page. Some won’t quote you until they’ve looked at your work. Research them. Ask questions. Compare. Ask for references. Get sample work done on your own writing.


Also check Predators and Editors, a great website to weed out the bad guys from the good guys – but remember, not everyone is listed and if they aren’t listed, that is not necessarily good or bad. They may be new. They may not be ‘big enough’ to be known, but that doesn’t mean they aren’t good.


I can’t afford an editor.

I understand. They are expensive. It’s hard to find the right one. It’s time consuming and you don’t want to throw your hard earned money away on someone you don’t know. Do you know a teacher? Someone who maybe teaches English, who might have some free time this summer, who could use a little extra cash in their pocket or a barter of services? What about a really smart high school or college student (making A’s in English, or mastering in editing?) Have you checked out writers groups? Do they know someone they could refer, or maybe with a dozen fresh eyes looking at your manuscript, they all might catch a little of something.


Either way, the point is to not hand over the first draft. Revise, edit, reread, and proof. Get many, many eyes on it, and ask even the friends to be critically honest. This is your future. You need the truth.


 Other great blogs by this author include:

How to create/publish children’s books


How to make a great book cover (self pub)


10 Most common Grammatical Mistakes


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Published on June 16, 2015 07:01

June 12, 2015

Another Awesome Website

header0I am super excited to announce that I’ve done it again – created a new website for Hamilton Troll.


www.HamiltonTroll.com
This is a PARALLAX site.

Parallax fills in the content of each page as you scroll, while keeping it all on one page. There’s a secondary menu at the bottom that takes you to “Fun Stuff to See and Do” which among other things has games you can play!  New games that test your skill, thought process and creative side.


New Games!

Another great feature are the videos – complete playlists that play the next video automatically!


Troll TV – Just sit back, relax and enjoy the show.

Please Note: I have noticed that due to the quantity of images over 9 pages, it sometimes takes a minute to load. For best results make sure it is completely loaded before you begin scrolling. 1 Plus, scroll slow so you can see all of the neat effects, like:



content sliding in from the edges
fading from the bottom and
moving as you scroll.

Check out the new website now. If you like it, share it with your friends and let me know what you think. I always love to hear from you.


www.HamiltonTroll.com

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Published on June 12, 2015 11:58

May 27, 2015

Understanding Publishing Terms

What is a Traditional Book Publisher? A company that buys the rights to your manuscript. Don’t want to sell the rights to your book? See small press publisher, subsidiary publisher or self publishing. What is Subsidy Publishing? A subsidy publisher shares publishing costs with the author. The publisher typically markets the book through online retailers. […]
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Published on May 27, 2015 11:03