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A little paprika shouldn't hurt...

Just finished fixing a problem I didn't really have...or maybe I did. It added a little spice to my books and hopefully did no damage.

I just keep thinking I want to make this easy to read, but a little paprika in the dialogue might be worth it.

Hope it wasn't a mistake.

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Published on August 06, 2017 15:27 Tags: dialogue, spice, sunslinger

Mistakes

If I find one more mistake in the Revelations book...

to the reader they aren't noticeable yet, but they were both major continuity problems (2 "small" nearly inconspicuous words) that I was sure I had carefully considered and gotten correct, one so obvious i feel head-banging-against-the-desk-stupid

...i will put my head under my rear passenger tire and reverse over it.

Don't bother me with your reality, I 'm sure i can find a way.

Anyway; 2/3's finished with Sunslinger, with the 2/3's almost fully edited.
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Published on September 04, 2017 09:37 Tags: mistakes, sunslinger

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Bolivar Beato
I don't regret staring this blog but I both rue and lament it. - Philip J Fry (sort of).

I am ashamed (not really) to admit that my range in fantasy and sci-fi books is limited to Star Wars (over 100 n
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