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Phoebe
Phoebe is on page 56 of 274
Everett, why does this MPDG refer to you by name every time she speaks to you, Everett?
Dec 16, 2011 12:06PM
Planesrunner (Everness #1)

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Phoebe
Phoebe is on page 125 of 274
So the MC, who is a POC, just spent a paragraph describing a girl with "skin so pale, eyes so arctic blue . . . she looked like she was carved from ice." This is, of course, the love interest. . . Guys, THIS MAKES ME A LITTLE UNCOMFORTABLE.
Dec 20, 2011 03:39PM
Planesrunner (Everness #1)


Phoebe
Phoebe is on page 104 of 274
Picking up a bit, but dang, Everett is NOT a realistic teenage in terms of the scope of his knowledge.
Dec 19, 2011 08:40AM
Planesrunner (Everness #1)


Phoebe
Phoebe is on page 80 of 274
I think McDonald should have told us that the MC can see in four dimensions sooner than 75 pages in. Also, while I *appreciate* much about this book, I don't particularly like it--or care about the characters--yet.
Dec 18, 2011 03:19PM
Planesrunner (Everness #1)


Phoebe
Phoebe is on page 28 of 274
Yes, I am reading a ton of books right now. This is okay so far. Generally not a fan of 3rd person narration in YA, and something about the tone so far feels dated.
Dec 14, 2011 10:54AM
Planesrunner (Everness #1)


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