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The meanest, cruelest teacher in the school is named Mr. Strictland. Jeez, where's the creativity?
Sep 28, 2011 02:35PM
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Demo
Demo is on page 194 of 232
Only 38 more pages to go... you can do this...
Oct 02, 2011 10:01AM
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Demo
Demo is on page 180 of 232
I friggin love Ashley. Anna: "My Mom is dead. She drowned when I was seven. Now it's just my Dad and me." Ashley: *long pause* "YOU'RE LIKE A DISNEY PRINCESS!"
Oct 02, 2011 09:34AM
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Demo
Demo is on page 149 of 232
Jeez, Tyler. Took you long enough. She wasn't, I don't know, throwing herself at you or anything.
Sep 28, 2011 03:47PM
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Demo
Demo is on page 120 of 232
"listened to Ashley and her two friends from dance class chatter about everyone in school, from who they were dating to who they were wearing." Huh?? Question: How do you wear someone? And no, I didn't mean for that to sound perverted. But unless they're talking about who people were hanging out with, I think she meant to write "what..."
Sep 28, 2011 03:08PM
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Demo
Demo is on page 102 of 232
Um... So, where's the plot in this?
Sep 27, 2011 08:52PM
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Demo
Demo is on page 84 of 232
Ahaha! Ashley is definitely my favorite. Kirby added a great twist to the stereotypical blonde cheerleader by making her have no friends. She has such an awesome peppy-clueless personality!
Sep 27, 2011 12:57PM
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Demo
Demo is on page 29 of 232
She knows that the life guards aren't allowed to date her because she's the supervisors daughter, so why is she agreeing to see Tyler after hours? And then saying it was "fun to be of-limits"? Does she enjoy messing with peoples' feelings?
Sep 27, 2011 04:40AM
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Demo
Demo is on page 20 of 232
So, you're on the beach, and an old guy with weird necklaces starts crawling towards you and your hands and toes. What are you supposed to do? Ask him if he's okay? Run? Get help? Scream "ZOMBIE APOCALYPSEEEE!!"? NO! According to Anna, you talk to the closest stranger about joining a cross country team! DUH!
Sep 27, 2011 04:05AM
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Demo
Demo is on page 10 of 232
The writing is really good, but the plot is God awful slow. I wish she'd hurry it up a bit.
Sep 26, 2011 08:47PM
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Demo
Demo is on page 5 of 232
Boring...
Sep 26, 2011 05:13PM
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