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Damn woman, you need a new editor!
Apr 26, 2010 10:46AM
Lover Mine (Black Dagger Brotherhood, #8)

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Finally mention of Phury. I was thinking he didn't exist anymore.
Apr 25, 2010 07:19AM
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"Round pegs just don't fit in square holes."
Apr 25, 2010 05:37AM
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Layla, I hate your guts!
Apr 25, 2010 04:10AM
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Gemma I thought too! The ammount of grammer and punctuation errors! Even I could do a better job and my english isn't the best


message 2: by Mel (new) - rated it 5 stars

Mel Oh yes those errors but what about the continuity mistakes?
Xhex is gone for 4 weeks, then 2, then 3. Blay has known JM for a year he says, while it's at least 1,5 as Qhuinn later on describes he transitioned 1,5 years ago and the boys knew each other before that.
The scene where Xhex, JM, Rhage, Butch and V are fighting (from chapter 53 on) Qhuinn is said to be there too. We see him in the very first sentence of that scene and somewhere in the end. In between he is invisible. Totally invisible like he isn't even there.

And I'm annoyed about something else Ward tends to do: totally forget relationships between people. JM seems to have no connection whatsoever with Mary or Bella, Ehlena is an extra who hasn't uttered one word while she is the female Xhex should trust most. Hello?!?!


Gemma See I missed that stuff. Lol


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