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Jondalar lets the audience know that the Clan are not animals, they are humans like anyone else.
OMG! Our perfect couple are...arguing! *GASPSHOCKHORROR!* About freakin' time they argued over SOMEthing!!
"Ayla expelled her breath explosively." You know up until now, I've been rather forgiving on the actual writing, but this line is just ASKING for snark
"Well, I belong to you, don't I?" Ayla, grinning, to Jondalar. NO! NO NO NO NO NO NOOOO! You do NOT belong to him! You do NOT belong to a man! You belong to YOU! And if he says you belong to him, you kick him in the nads! GOOD GRIEF![image error]