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Mar 04, 2012 02:16AM
City of Ashes (The Mortal Instruments, #2)

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Stephen
Stephen is on page 333 of 453
got creative with POV hopping
Mar 05, 2012 05:06AM
City of Ashes (The Mortal Instruments, #2)


Stephen
Stephen is on page 131 of 453
131 pages in and so far no more egregious errors like on page 1. The story so far is ok but hasn't really gotten moving yet.

Translucent - permitting light to pass through but diffusing it so that persons, objects, etc., on the opposite side are not clearly visible: Frosted window glass is translucent but not transparent.
Mar 04, 2012 05:28AM
City of Ashes (The Mortal Instruments, #2)


Stephen
Stephen is on page 2 of 453
Page 1 mistake bugs me

Translucent - permitting light to pass through but diffusing it so that persons, objects, etc., on the opposite side are not clearly visible: Frosted window glass is translucent but not transparent.
Mar 04, 2012 02:18AM
City of Ashes (The Mortal Instruments, #2)


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