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Melissa
Melissa is on page 28 of 304
My only comment so far is that this story is ... random. From one paragraph to the next, Meg Cabot talks about different things that either 1) don't tie in to the previous paragraph or 2)the thought doesn't finish. It's ... frustrating - jumping from one thought to another unrelated one, without either thought finishing. And all that in only 28 pages.
Jan 29, 2012 08:17PM
Abandon (Abandon, #1)

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Melissa
Melissa is on page 54 of 304
This book may find itself on my "gave up on" shelf if it doesn't shape up soon. As if the randomness from paragraph to paragraph wasn't annoying enough, I've found that Meg Cabot brutally over uses key phrases (every mention of the main characters dress was referred to as 'the too-tight dress, my too-tight dress, this too-tight dress, ect. I can't even tell you what color it is - just that it's 'too-tight').
Jan 30, 2012 06:36PM
Abandon (Abandon, #1)


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