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Chapter 12-13: congratulations, Miranda, you've set yourself up with Norman Bates! A letter advising someone of a murder is a gift?
Jan 12, 2012 09:43PM
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Chapter 16: I liked the heroine putting faith in her man, except for the small fact she stands little to lose by doing so. The opera love scene really confused me although it's prettily written. There is no transition between the ride home and their arrival at Miranda's house.
Jan 13, 2012 08:46AM
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The Duke of Parford actually sounds quite English, not at all like he should be Smite's brother.
Jan 12, 2012 10:47PM
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Chapter 15: Despite allegations to the contrary, I'm convinced Dalrymple and Smite used to be in love. "Sentimentality quota?" LOL
Jan 12, 2012 10:21PM
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Chapter 10-11: I'm speechless. I almost feel sorry for Miranda and not a little uneasy about Smite. Maybe mental illness didn't stop with his mother.
Jan 12, 2012 08:45PM
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Chapter 9 -- I see where the author was going in this chapter, but it still came across a bit sloppy and rough. This struck me as odd since much of the storytelling's been so smooth if a tad fast-paced.
Jan 12, 2012 07:48PM
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Chapter 8: Smite finally feeds his undernourished love interest and feels well enough following his ordeal to initiate lovemakeing with her. He is promptly refused and is quite a gentleman about it. They say good-bye civilly, and not a mention of Miranda's business at the jailhouse.
Jan 12, 2012 07:15PM
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Chapter 7: Miranda is willing to walk away from jail without ever finding out what may have happened to her missing friend because Smite is claustrophobic? Seriously? No, SERIOUSLY? Geez. These are the most artificial characters I've ever read.
Jan 12, 2012 07:03PM
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Chapter 5 & 6: Interesting 2ndary characters are developing; there's an obvious gay male couple in the background trying to keep their romance a secret. A lot of the social interaction going on in the story strikes me as far-fetched. Beautiful language, but characters feel unrealized.
Jan 12, 2012 05:04PM
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Chapter 4: Smite and Dalrymple sound more like ex-lovers than ex-friends. The MC's are more American than British in many of their attitudes. Smite's inconsistent attitudes towards class are confusing. He scorns aristocracy for not working and he suspects poor women of "acting guilty." His "perfect memory" is a bit too perfect; he sounds like a computer.
Jan 11, 2012 05:27PM
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Chapter 3: I find the attraction and sexual tension between Smite and Miranda a tad too obvious. I liked how Milan incorporated various scenes and characters into this chapter, but ... Miranda's a little too good and too know-it-all. World-building could be better. There's enough, but barely enough.
Jan 11, 2012 02:03PM
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