This is just...boring me. I don't find any of this term-dropping interesting nor do I find it really building the "world" of Cassandra Clare. So you can put werewolves with kelpies and warlocks, congratulations?
STOP TELLING ME HOW PEOPLE WERE ACTING AND SHOW ME, CLARE. SHOW me. Show me Jace's tension, don't just SAY that it's like a downed electrical wire, cause I'll just see Jace shooting sparks out of his mouth and writhing on the floor.