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Jacob
Jacob is on page 240 of 288
I admit the protagonist is growing on me. Yet still the book lacks vital social commentary and all types of diversity. That hurts its military SciFi credentials a little.
Nov 13, 2015 07:10PM Add a comment
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Jacob
Jacob is on page 141 of 288
When you write military SciFi you need to decide if you're going to primarily use either first or last names. Jumping between the two sucks as it makes it difficult to learn the characters. Nick names transcend this.
Nov 10, 2015 02:51PM Add a comment
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Jacob
Jacob is on page 160 of 288
It's no Hammer's Slammers or Cobras or Dorsai but it is entertaining.
Nov 09, 2015 08:55PM Add a comment
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Jacob
Jacob is on page 100 of 288
Apparently good enough to keep me reading! Curious to see how the main character develops as he enters the crucible of war.
Nov 09, 2015 07:45PM Add a comment
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Jacob
Jacob is on page 60 of 288
I think juvenile might be the wrong word. It feels wooden. Almost as if everyone is simply the way they are to fulfill the story instead of having living viable characters. As a result I think it would have appealed to me more when I was a child. But the concept is sound and there is opportunity for character development.
Nov 09, 2015 02:08PM Add a comment
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Jacob
Jacob is on page 47 of 288
Decided this sounded interesting enough to try as I like Military SciFi and it isn't off to a bad start, it just seems... a bit juvenile actually. Hoping it steps it up a little.
Nov 09, 2015 01:34PM Add a comment
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Zhugenaut
Zhugenaut is on page 144 of 288
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Joe
Joe is on page 125 of 288
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Joe
Joe is on page 75 of 288
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Joe
Joe is on page 50 of 288
Dec 15, 2012 11:43AM Add a comment
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