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http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/251784-please-post-your-poem-for-the-january-goodreads-contest
David made a comment in the ¡ POETRY ! group:
concepts of reality
on a Salvador Dali theme
song birds ponder jumping from branch to branch
pigs meander fearlessly with snouts in unknown
ground poughsharing with grunts as moans
yet never disillusioned
seagulls regroup after tractors have passed
either their Field or the rubbish dump or street...
separate, but the same action.....
seals sit sadly like ripening raspberry's
magpie thief's giggle in the sunshine
hobbling over the ground
geldings body's wobble while they canter
across the Field
a sleeping owl in a dead tree, snoring ,!!!
in the noonday sun
who's celebrating in intensity like
clamorous scorchers hooked on virgin
energies not yet captured
as the rusty idiots copulate to capitulate
in to dancing fools or boasting nymphs that
ponder meekly
"What I am about to say is strictly off the record. On that understanding, I shall give you candidly "
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http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/240583-please-post-your-poem-for-the-december-goodreads-contest
David made a comment in the ¡ POETRY ! group:
reactions to action
shadows emerge like
burgeoning rabbits its
hoping, enduring
the in different idiotic clock
called life a bragging song bird
abstractly chroting images swagging
impishly like there rambling shadows
following
behind pumpkin cheeks
each fiery exorcised the
hallucinations of there minds
from the haughty seeds of slumber
were barrenly in to the unknown mist
to prowl like lost seamen who want
to free inhuman princess ?
attracted by the humid echoing of
agonising grumbles that exclam in
vocal fables
slips, slipping in manic expression of
pompous, eerily harsh.
like refection's passed of malodorous
eruptions of the mob, mutters following
by cold hatchet stares, obscene remarks..
cutting like knives
the sneering discontent is like an inferno
tugging snipping, disturbing noiselessly
like a group of ducks bragging on the way
to the pond
like braising hags frolicking, tartly
now fears are inward panorama's
recounting darkness
yet blindly recovers to start again
Dundee Dave
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http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/243267-snow-storms
David made a comment in the ¡ POETRY ! group:
the season for eternal snow storms
forgotten elks, snoozing in the
drifted snow while above
the celestrial Resurrection of the stars
long sinst gone agedly
baby animals, may be humans also.
nestled in there mothers breast
hoping for flaming spring time
were vain birds crawl over trees searching
but the insects bury themselves forcefully
evading the ravenous rants of these creatures
and the sharp unchained melody of winters singing
the snows inconsequential overcoat of this
lethargic season as it seams to blindly
lingers like an in patient adventurer
yet more like a monumental lifeless of ice & snow
a mathematical formula created by
gods artistic hands give exultation's to
the treasured few animals-that thrive in this praying
white exterior, with the odious conspirator
mother-nature devilishly, melodiously, like
any woman exhilarating panic rudely
or polar-bears that embrace the cold like a
human-being embraces woollen-blankets gleefully
sleeping soft open mouthed, passionless images.
cold-hearted like the ethereal frosty evergreens bushes
that laboriously stand to attention as if ghostlike
haunt, haunt, till the yellow flowers appear
above the glorious thorns in any summer
were the inspired refection of reproduction
that is corrosive & monstrous in any autumn...
mystifies any discounted gene male or female..
touched like a butterfly's-wing by the bee's
natures inseminaters
when the raging, ringing geese return
to waddle & feed knowingly
Dundee Dave
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http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/53893.the_season_for_eternal_snow_storms?chapter=1
David Garden wrote the season for eternal snow storms: the seasons.
"the season for eternal snow storms
forgotten elks, snoozing in the
drifted snow while ab"
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"Sophists and democracy..+1
Posted by: "david garden" d_garden2@yahoo.com d_garden2"
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http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/240595-night-time-lovers
David made a comment in the ¡ POETRY ! group:
december poetry contest
the downy tide touches the
flesh of the midnight lovers
both bodies needing compassion
by the iceberg white crested shore
the dancing leaves in the wind
burn with their passion
the sucking, !!! like that of a
baby's bottle
pressing hard against the sleeping
bones in their flesh
up & down up & down
like the tide
for even shamed kings do well tonight
under the musical starlight night
on this spot were the cockelwoman
will stand and work to the sound
of the skylark, curlew, and cormorant
that rage quietly on any dog-day afternoon
and i lieing in a passionate embrace
will be forgotten loudly, like the statues..
of the dead-over were the streets lie mildly
now heartily he goes, flogging
his john-Tomas. to much ale for release.!!!
yet more than enough lust.....
the barnacle bearded rabbit catcher
disappointed, goes to sing ageist the cold night
down the wise cobble streets
passed the crow-black memorials to the dead
star-struck forever in assorted poses
passed the undertake,r he goes with the
downy grey doors and
the patchwork curtains on the windows that
advertise death to the living ..
"The last thing I wanted to do this Saturday night was spend several hours writing, editing, and typi"
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http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/239154-autumn
David made a comment in the ¡ POETRY ! group:
the praying autumn evening
blowing in coopered pain
off immorality
and riding the wind
determinedly in despair
chilly winter slowly ascends
as autumn rots with tenacity
a solitary leaf flutters in the wind
the trees groaning gently in
the rustic chilled power
which fearlessly
a soulful sea flows splendidly
while the blazing sun
rambles in flamed splendour
an emotive action
that wakens across the horizon
as if screaming with fearful jealously
the wind settles after rasping with
fearful force with
burnished need it now declines in
righteousness to a soft breeze
a raging autumn morning
dreams breathlessly in its
lust full arrogance that accompanies
storms & deep misty swirls
a spiders web sways in the storm
winsomely,
the ochred colours frowning
in Ecstasy as the sodden earth
and trees blend in a Gothic tapestry
groaning in startled pride & splendour