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    		<![CDATA[Mfred added 'Silent In The Grave']]>
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    			  Lady Julia's husband Edwards collapses at their home, during a dinner party no less, and in swoops the dark and mysterious Nicholas Brisbane to carry Edward to his room.  After he dies, Brisbane darkly and mysteriously insinuates Edward may have been murdered!  And Julia may be a suspect!  Now widowed, Julia decided to pursue the mystery (and the mysterious man) to the end.<br/><br/>The story is narrated in first person, past tense, and reading it brought home to me how much I dislike this kind of narration.  Julia relates her story from some distant future point, so everything unrolls in way that kind of squashes the suspense even as it tries to build it.  I knew something regrettable, or surprising, or interesting was going to happen on the next page or in the next chapter, because Julia kept telling me it would. Spoiler alert, Julia!  <br/><br/>By using first person, Rayburn develops Julia wonderfully- her character is well-rounded, with great strengths and weaknesses often omitted in the typical romance heroine.  As a recent widow, Julia has to come to grips not only with her changed social status in 1800s England, but also with the mystery of her husband's death and the truth of his past--and her life with him-- that the mystery reveals.  Her transformation from complacent wife to active agent in her self-directed life is a great one to watch.<br/><br/>For all that I did not like the narrative style, Julia's voice is strong; Rayburn is able to convey emotion and action well without sacrificing plot or dumping exposition everywhere.  However, because Julia's world and the other characters in it are all related through Julia's POV, I found them flatter and less impressive.  Brisbane remained dark and mysterious, sometimes frustratingly so.  At times I found it difficult to hold on to him as a romantic foil for Julia because all I got was brooding dark eyes and powerful manly frames, instead of character and motivation.<br/><br/>And the romance!  The tension between Julia and Brisbane is electric, even from Julia's limited perspective.  But then, at the climax of all this delicious tension, when finally the spark between them ignites and desires are acted upon, do you know what happens?  The screen goes dark!  He leans in for the kiss and its cut scene!  No smoochies, no breathy sighs, no grasping hands.  Instead, I'm left with Julia's conflicted thoughts about the kiss and even these are not nearly as descriptive as I want them to be.  <br/><br/>By the end, I felt a little cheated by Rayburn.  I'm not sure I'll read the rest of books if the romance is given short shrift again.
    			
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    		<![CDATA[Mfred added 'Enna Burning']]>
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    		<![CDATA[Mfred added 'Sandman Slim: A Novel']]>
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    			<a href="http://www.goodreads.com/author/show/37557.Richard_Kadrey" class="authorName">Richard Kadrey</a>
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    			  The positive: The book is funny and has a great noir feel.<br/><br/>The main character, Stark, was sent to Hell, alive, but manages to survive it. Eleven years later, he's back in L.A. with some great super powers and a burning, yearning desire for revenge. So he sets off to kill everyone who was originally involved in sending him to Hell.<br/><br/>Instead, he finds himself possibly a key figure in the war between Heaven and Hell.  Aaannnd then the book gets kinda lame.<br/><br/>Stark as a character is great. Setting off for his revenge, he makes and alienates friends, tossing out some great one liners and truly snarky commentary along the way. Stark's voice is intimate even as it is aggressive, and I really felt the post-Hell L.A. that he inhabits .<br/><br/>However, the story itself? Here is where I really agreed with the <a rel="nofollow" target="_blank" href="http://io9.com">io9.com</a> review:<br/><br/><blockquote>Sandman Slim's main drawback is its plot, which doesn't bear much examination — about halfway, or maybe two thirds of the way, through the book, the exposition starts getting thicker and thicker, and various characters pop up to explain stuff, and then other characters jump in to explain those explanations. Soon enough, the simple tale of a horrendously scarred bastard who crawled out of Hell to kill a bunch of people who deserved it gets more and more muddled with a lot of other stuff. It sort of overpowers the fun revenge rampage you've been primed for since the start of the book — but the good news is, there's still plenty of death, destruction and despair to go around, and the book's final big action set pieces are a lot of fun. It's easy to see why people were talking about it at Comic Con.</blockquote><br/><br/>The strengths of the book are its humor, Stark's voice, and how the author uses it to describe L.A. through a noir-y, monstery lens.  But the plot falls apart under itself and the that &quot;final big action&quot; scene, to me, felt cut short.  I could have settled for less complicated plotting at the end, and maybe even a little less snark from Stark, and more bangs, pows, and kabooms.  I felt like if the violence had taken center-stage, like the beginning of the book promised, then the plot lines  may have fallen in step.  Instead of exposition, I wanted Kadrey to let Stark's fists do the talking.  To have the plot roll out from the action, rather than slogging through characters explaining the significance of the final showdown before we even get to the end.<br/><br/>If you like Charlie Huston (me! I do!) but want something not quite as visceral in its violence or as unremittingly dark, Sandman Slim might be for you.<br/><br/>Io9 Link: <a rel="nofollow" target="_blank" href="http://io9.com/5345800/la-is-a-magical-cesspit-and-sandman-slim-is-its-new-champion">L.A. Is A Magical Cesspit, And Sandman Slim Is Its New Champion</a>
    			
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    		<![CDATA[Mfred added 'The Court of the Air']]>
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    			<a href="http://www.goodreads.com/author/show/435114.Stephen_Hunt" class="authorName">Stephen Hunt</a>
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    			  Two young orphans find themselves at the center of vast conspiracy; their world on the brink of apocalypse.  Molly, a street punk with strange skills for repairing the race of mechanical steam men, is hunted by both a fearsome assassin and the underground revolutionary communityists, who want to overthrow the current system of government in favor of apocalypse-bringing dark gods.  Oliver, who as a child was exposed to the dangerous fey mists, has supernatural powers yet is not cursed with the physical deformities most other fey-children experience.  He is set up for the murder of his last surviving relative, and is being pursued by both the oppressive-to-fey government and the secret Court of the Air, a supra-military, supra-government body in charge of being in charge of, well, everything.<br/><br/>Sounds complicated?  It is.  And there is much, much more.<br/><br/>Hunt packs in so much detail to the historical and geographic setting, I was totally overwhelmed.  There are so many plot lines, so many side stories, I had a hard time getting a handle on the actual world.  Instead of world building, it was more like world-dumping. Never boring the way info-dumping can be, but completely burying the characters and plot.<br/><br/>The story obviously parallels a Victorian-esque England and yet, instead of being fresh and new, I found it derivative and superficial. The parallels were too obvious.  Communityists?  Communisits.  And just like our world, the once social ideal of its writer, Ben Carl (Marx) has turned into Stalin’s Russia, complete with population-killing pogroms against first the elite, then the wealthy, then the middle class, and finally, almost everyone.<br/><br/>Those dark gods, with names like its-a-coatyl, that-a-dopotchli and this-a-zayloc, demanding bloody human sacrifice and a return to the old ways of total enslavement?  I kept thinking of alien Mayans, but in an Ice Age, instead of the Yucatan.<br/><br/>At some key moments Oliver or Molly figure out secret motives or unconver conspiracies and I felt totally bewildered— not because it was a great plot twist that I deliciously anticipated, no— because I had no idea in the hundreds of pages past that a clue had come and gone.  I found the characters rather flat compared to all of the historical and geographic description; as I read, I did not assign them unknown or deep complexities.  When these complexities were revealed, it was rather like having Sherlock Holmes jump out from behind the curtain, screaming “the butler did it! And here are twenty reasons why that you never guessed!”<br/><br/>The book was hard to get through and almost boring, which is strange because the story itself is action-packed.  By the end, it becomes a flat out race to the end, and I was fairly hooked.  I might have given it three stars, except that until those last 100 pages or so, reading it was kind of a chore rather than a pleasure.
    			
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    		<![CDATA[Mfred added 'Abduction']]>
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    			<a href="http://www.goodreads.com/author/show/1861991.Varian_Krylov" class="authorName">Varian Krylov</a>
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    		<![CDATA[Mfred added 'Hell']]>
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    		<![CDATA[Mfred added 'Shame the Devil']]>
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    			<a href="http://www.goodreads.com/author/show/47387.George_P_Pelecanos" class="authorName">George P. Pelecanos</a>
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    		<![CDATA[Mfred added 'The Night Gardener']]>
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    			  Reading this book kept reminding me of Homer's the Odyssey.  But not in a good way.<br/><br/>Homer's epithets, like &quot;rosy-fingered dawn&quot; and &quot;grey-eyed&quot; Athena is a mnemonic device, used in ye olden times by epic poet bardy types for various aesthetic and literary reasons.  <br/><br/>Harrison seems to employ the same device in this sixth Rachel Morgan book, but not at all as successfully.  Every time Rachel's dad comes up, we learn again about his scientific genetic experimentation stuff. Again, how he died.  And again, how his legacy is conflicting for Rachel.  When Ivy speaks, or moves, or is mentioned, Harrison describes how dark, vampiric, and lesbianic she is.  How conflicted about blood.  How confused Rachel feels.  Trent?  How evil.  How mercenary.   How conflicted Rachel feels.  Her Mom?  How sad she is since Rachel's father died.  How despondent she is and yet possibly, quite magically powerful.  How conflicted Rachel feels.  <br/><br/>I felt like if I wanted to expend the time, I could probably locate and underline variation of the exact same sentence throughout the book.  <br/><br/>The other parts of the book not constantly repeating previously written sections?  Harrison endlessly describing Rachel deciding not to do whatever it is her instincts tell her to do because that's what she thinks growing up means. <br/><br/>&quot;My instincts tell me to embrace demon magic but now that I am trying to be mature, I will ignore those instincts and draw out the plot by doing everything the hard way.  Then I will think about my father and how conflicted I feel.&quot;<br/><br/>No stars because I did not finish it.  Could not finish it.  Do not feel conflicted about it. 
    			
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