"As I wake up with J still in my arms, I realize that my life is perfect. I have the man of my dreams"
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"Damn, I wish this nigga would hurry up and finish.
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"Excellent book. Great for every woman to read"
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If you identified similes such as "like the dead," metaphors such as "keepers of the flame," and modifiers such as "bright and early" then you have a good eye for worn-out language. Sadly, many great phrases, such as "mother of all battles," are coined but quickly become overused. How many times did you get sick of hearing people say "Not!" a decade ago?
Cliches often sneak in the barn door (that's a cliche, by the way) when we try to be descriptive. Is the phrase you're about to use one that you've heard frequently in casual conversation, newscasts, and advertising? If so, it is probably a cliché or on its way there.
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