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message 1: by Blacerry (new)

Blacerry Reese | 7 comments Please tell me if my story if nice and if I have to improve. :)
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


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A.F. (scribe77) | 1841 comments Mod
Blacerry wrote: "Please tell me if my story if nice and if I have to improve. :)
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2..."


I haven't had a chance to read much so far, but I like the concept and the writing was good. I noticed a couple places that could possibly use some minor improvement, but I'll wait until I finish reading to go in to that.


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