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message 1: by Siareen (new)

Siareen | 1620 comments this is a story Zoe and I are working on [under a different name]

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...


reading and comments are appreciated!!!!


message 2: by Hannah, Don't TOUCH my Title Klymy. (new)

Hannah | 3223 comments Mod
Cool! No trim right now but I shall try to get on this and read. :D


message 3: by Naomi (new)

Naomi  (purplebookdragon) | 900 comments thanks hannah!


message 4: by Siareen (new)

Siareen | 1620 comments ya, thanks! two new chapters should be up soon!


message 5: by Naomi (new)

Naomi  (purplebookdragon) | 900 comments yay!!! post them already siareen!


message 6: by Siareen (new)

Siareen | 1620 comments on sec!!!!!!
two awesome chapters if i may say so myself :D


message 7: by Naomi (new)

Naomi  (purplebookdragon) | 900 comments yeps, lol. i like them. they are evil.


message 8: by Siareen (new)

Siareen | 1620 comments evilness is goooood!!!!!!


message 9: by Naomi (new)

Naomi  (purplebookdragon) | 900 comments i know. lol. wmahahahahahahahaha


message 10: by Hannah, Don't TOUCH my Title Klymy. (new)

Hannah | 3223 comments Mod
Okay time to conquer this novel. It's huge!

Prologue:
I thought it was good. One of things is you gave to much to fast. You explained a lot. More than you could have I think. Lemon, I believe expressed this well in her comment. There were of course times you could express things different, but I think it was a good start. Nice job.

No time to start the chapters. But I shall reply with them later. I'm excited to read more!


message 11: by Siareen (last edited Jun 04, 2011 11:12AM) (new)

Siareen | 1620 comments and its only gonna get bigger :D *cough* Zoe *cough*
next chapter's a Wynter one!!!!!!! lol

thanks for starting though!

the prologue was kinda meant as a way to get the descriptions of the world out of the way. it actually DOES make sense that way, but i cant really explain how because that would give away some things. i guess that there might be a way though to do it slightly better...
thanks!


message 12: by Naomi (new)

Naomi  (purplebookdragon) | 900 comments ok, ok, ill write. but we still haven't discussed exactly whats happening. we need to talk, siareen.
hannah, thanks for the feedback, now go read the rest!!!!


message 13: by Siareen (new)

Siareen | 1620 comments yup. that we do :)


message 14: by Hannah, Don't TOUCH my Title Klymy. (new)

Hannah | 3223 comments Mod
It sounds really good. Can't wait to read it.


message 15: by Siareen (new)

Siareen | 1620 comments read it!!!! no pressure though, lol :D


ya, um Zoe? we still really really need to talk!!!!!! and plan!!!!!!


message 16: by Naomi (new)

Naomi  (purplebookdragon) | 900 comments yes, we do. we're just too busy!!! you need to call me!!!!!


message 17: by Hannah, Don't TOUCH my Title Klymy. (new)

Hannah | 3223 comments Mod
Haha. The crazy planning. Okay I'll go start reading till I run out of time. :D


message 18: by Naomi (new)

Naomi  (purplebookdragon) | 900 comments yay!!! read, read, read!!!!
lol. yeah the planning can get crazy. i dont know whats supposed to happen next!!!!


message 19: by Siareen (new)

Siareen | 1620 comments thats kinda bad, isnt it?
i will... sometime... :D


message 20: by Naomi (new)

Naomi  (purplebookdragon) | 900 comments yeah. lol. i know what happens, i just dont know exactly how its supposed to happen.


message 21: by Hannah, Don't TOUCH my Title Klymy. (new)

Hannah | 3223 comments Mod
do you want to plan here? Or somewhere else where it won't be spoiled?


message 22: by Naomi (new)

Naomi  (purplebookdragon) | 900 comments no, thats ok. we just finished out planning. hopefully ill write soon and a new chapter will be up quickly!


message 23: by Jadi Cedonia (last edited Jul 13, 2011 05:52PM) (new)

Jadi Cedonia (jcverdin) Question: Does it get confusing to you since you do two main characters in first person?


message 24: by Siareen (new)

Siareen | 1620 comments each of us writes the chapters of a different character.... so it doesnt really :)


message 25: by Jadi Cedonia (new)

Jadi Cedonia (jcverdin) oh. thank you.


message 26: by Hannah, Don't TOUCH my Title Klymy. (new)

Hannah | 3223 comments Mod
that's really cool.


message 27: by Naomi (new)

Naomi  (purplebookdragon) | 900 comments i know we are. :) lol.


message 28: by Hannah, Don't TOUCH my Title Klymy. (last edited Jul 25, 2011 02:00PM) (new)

Hannah | 3223 comments Mod
HAHA *grins*


message 29: by Naomi (new)

Naomi  (purplebookdragon) | 900 comments *grins back* we really do need to write. but me and siareen were busy with nanowrimo and now shes away for a week.....


message 30: by Hannah, Don't TOUCH my Title Klymy. (new)

Hannah | 3223 comments Mod
Oh yeah *headslap* NANOWRIMO! I guess I'll be doing it in August. How is your novbel coming btw?


message 31: by Naomi (new)

Naomi  (purplebookdragon) | 900 comments well, i finished the 50000 words, but the book isnt done yet. i really should write but i keep pushing it off. how is yours coming? siareen has convinced me to do camp again in august... i dont know why i agreed to it.


message 32: by Hannah, Don't TOUCH my Title Klymy. (new)

Hannah | 3223 comments Mod
Well I hardly got any camp done in July so I'm going for august


message 33: by Siareen (new)

Siareen | 1620 comments well you convinced me to do july, so im juust repaying the favor :)
you doing august too? wanna be in the same bunk? whats your user name?


message 34: by Hannah, Don't TOUCH my Title Klymy. (new)

Hannah | 3223 comments Mod
LOL how do you do that? I guess they have the knew features up...

my name is PenWarrior


message 35: by Hannah, Don't TOUCH my Title Klymy. (last edited Aug 04, 2011 11:31AM) (new)

Hannah | 3223 comments Mod
u?

POHEW. Klymy didn't see this.


message 36: by Siareen (new)

Siareen | 1620 comments ya, but you cant change it now... :(

well, since Zoe stole Siareen, i was very pathetic and did SiareenSG. i just like this name so much :D
and the even sadder thing- my august novel is actually the story the original Siareen is from. so its all very confusing :P


message 37: by Naomi (new)

Naomi  (purplebookdragon) | 900 comments it is very confusing. but remember, in the cabin you're sia and i'm reen, k?


message 38: by Siareen (new)

Siareen | 1620 comments oh, ya. thanks to sir bex. as long as im sia, and your reen, im fine :D
and the original siareen can stay siareen.
Zoe, i think we used her name a biiiiit too much, what do you think?


message 39: by Naomi (new)

Naomi  (purplebookdragon) | 900 comments no, really? lol. maybe. time to move on. maybe next time i'll use keladria. its really pretty.


message 40: by Siareen (new)

Siareen | 1620 comments you mean Kaladria? lol. maybe. we have enough pretty names for us to choose from :D


message 41: by Naomi (new)

Naomi  (purplebookdragon) | 900 comments yes, thats what i mean. im bad at remembering how we spell things.


message 42: by Siareen (last edited Aug 04, 2011 05:41AM) (new)

Siareen | 1620 comments lol.... oh, wait, i cant jsut leave one word!!!! ok, now i have more :)


message 43: by Naomi (new)

Naomi  (purplebookdragon) | 900 comments lol. i do that sometimes....


message 44: by Hannah, Don't TOUCH my Title Klymy. (new)

Hannah | 3223 comments Mod
Siareen wrote: "ya, but you cant change it now... :(

WEll what is your Nano name anyway?


message 45: by Siareen (new)

Siareen | 1620 comments i said... SiareenSG


message 46: by Naomi (new)

Naomi  (purplebookdragon) | 900 comments hannah, did you ever finish reading this story?


message 47: by Hannah, Don't TOUCH my Title Klymy. (new)

Hannah | 3223 comments Mod
Oh no. I'm gonna keep reading. :D


message 48: by Hannah, Don't TOUCH my Title Klymy. (new)

Hannah | 3223 comments Mod
Nanowise: None of us got each other for cabin mates. Well I didn't get you guys at least...........oh well. :D We still have messaging! and etc.


message 49: by Naomi (new)

Naomi  (purplebookdragon) | 900 comments yes, we can still message. and do keep reading, please. i need to go write!!!


message 50: by Hannah, Don't TOUCH my Title Klymy. (new)

Hannah | 3223 comments Mod
Okay. No worries I will. :D


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